ArHi FF: Koi Aap Sa #2 - Chapter 22 : Page 142 (Apr 25)

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maina95131

@maina95131

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Great story...I wonder what secret both are keeping

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Such a nice story..

From detailing to making the image of the characters in the story, it's a fantastic job done.

In love with the lovely couple though I'm eagerly waiting for their first kissie! 😳

Aman is an awesome brother and when I'm imagining the handsome you have put in the picture as Aman, I'm in love with him too because I already love him.

Wedding gift was indeed purrfectto!

Did I thank you for gifting us some really long chapters, Not yet? 😲

I really enjoyed it till now, waiting for part 2 of the recent chapter.

All the Best and lots of Love

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Lovely update, but I always feel Arnav is making a lot more effort and putting in a lot more into this relationship than Khushi is.

Khushi is still being Khushi Kumari Gupta, the daring girl of her parents, expecting things to work out in the direction and in the manner that she wants.

Arnav has been the most wonderful person so far, figuring things important to her, easing the potential confrontation between her mother and her, giving and respecting her space in the marriage, taking things slow with her, letting her dictate the pace of her adjustment to her.

I love the way you are developing their relationship, though clearly I am rooting for Arnav for him being the ideal man here!

Love the pace of the story itself though not the pace of the updates. I know you have other stories, but am going to be very honest. Given that the pace of the story itself is slow (which is perfectly fine , i love the pace and the way their relationship is developing), the updates need to be slightly better paced to retain the connect with the story.

I find i have to go back and read the earlier chapter for me to feel any connect with the story, otherwise comments will tend to be short and basic, def not in-depth and will tend to get restricted to awesome updates, lovely update, loved it, superb, fantastic update, like the way arnav is treating her, like the pace etc...

Of course you would be perfectly within your rights to tell me to buzz off and not bother to read 😊 but since I am reading it and I love the story, just thought it made sense to give you feedback. aadat se major 😳

Shall wait for the next update!

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 10 years ago

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Loved loved the update...

in begning of chapter,, I thought its Arnav but then mera khayal ghalat saabit hogaya...

Glimpse of Khushi's relationship from Aman's pov was good...I love Aman bcz of his habit of riling people up and then have fun on their expanse..(Actually like me ;) )

At first I was thrilled about "ACTION" in parking lot (though I am not a fan of action scenes) but then I had same thoughts as Anjali n Khushi...what if one of the MACHO A&A get hurt...

Beach,, moonlight and walk with Hathon mein Hath..Kya aalaa scene tha...one of my favr8s from chapter...

Or ooper se first Affectionate kiss happened betwen them...😉

Next step will be a Passionate kiss...hehehhe

Arnav k dimagh mein Jo khsuhi ko dekh kr ideas aatay hain naa...I enjoy them the most...My most favr8 scene was where he thought of making her sit on his lap and then he choked on his own breath...Looovvedd it...Thumbs up katie...

Ek awessome night out k baad Mr.Raizada took her to a peaceful drive too...Who can not have a CRUSHHH on him...Who tell me WHOOO...

Kahan milta hai yeh bnda..Plzz koi mujhe b laa de...

If you find him kindly make a clone of him and send him to me...Okkkaayyy...

Thankuuu for Pm and Awwesome fantastic update...

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Hiii...awesome update...loved it...loved da possasive arnav n aman...aman n anjali bickering is cute...ArHi r adorable...can't wait 4 more...con soon...thanks 4 da pm

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Nimbus_211

@Nimbus_211

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Beautifully written!!!!! I must say, though you are blissfully single, you have written this story very well keeping in mind all the aspects of an arranged marriage. I love the way Arnav and Khushi's relationship is progressing. Slow and steady. They surely get to learn something new about the other every single moment they spend together.
Continue soon!!!
Thanks for the pm :)

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Lovely update. Good that khushi and Arnav are becoming more frank with each other and seem to be falling more for each other. 😳 Aman and Anjali make a very cute couple and love their arguments. Looking forward to more Arnav and khushi interactions. Loved this chapter.

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SPraba

@SPraba

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Super update
But sad that Arshi havent kissed yet
Gosh aman and anjali are sure gonna fall head over heels in love for the bickering they do. I wont be suprised
Hmm so arshi had a romantic moment and glad arnav realised he is really attrated to khushi and khushi is also starting to fall for him
Cant wait to read more and what happens next
Thanks for the pm dear

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Swathi/Ammu

@Swathiarshi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Crush on husband awww how cute.. ..nice update 👏 ...can see the possessive husband side of arnav coming out 😃

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Khesnee B

@..Peppermint..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Read this fab piece of work at one go and have to say it's so sweet that it nearly made me melt :P
God, Arnav is just so damn perfect i mean i would be blessed to have someone as good as him🤣
And Aman and Anjali are so gonna fall in love wid each other...and i can't wait for ArShi to tease them
Continue with the good job and i'll buddy you hoping that i might get a PM for the next updates!

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