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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

awesome

loved it
whoever is trying to harm aryan should rot in hell
i think it is payal bcoz in this she is so low n cheap
n hope its not anjali
if it is i want arnav to lashout at her
y i dont knw but i believe its not anjali
loved the way kushi make arnav rot in guilt
plz update soon


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
Let's see if it Payal or Anjali, whoever it is, is in for good lesson.
Arnav's road to guilt has just started.
I am so happy you are loving Khushi for doing this.
I will upload the last half as soon as I can, hopefully within two hours or so :).

Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mahrusweety

awesome update
loved it
arnav will now know what hurt and painz means
is that women
anjali or payal?
both r selfish
and their husbands ignoring them
soooio
i suggest them that
panga mat lo firebolt se
continue soon


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
I hope with the next half, everyone will feel some pain of Khushi.
I had planned to write in such way that it felt hard to guess who it is ;)
Panga to le liya hai kissi ne ab to fireworks ki dheri hai ;)
I will upload the last half as soon as I can, hopefully within two hours:).

Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: josnirmala

Awesome story loved
pls pm me


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
I am planning something for PMs, if it works, I will add you :)
I will upload the last half as soon as I can, hopefully within two hours:).

Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: renee.bee

Wow aryan is khushi's son.

I loved arnav experexperiencing pain seeing his child n know the irreversible damage he caused khushi n his own family he cud hve had a happy married life n his son.
khushi's past is coming out in parts.
aman saved her.
Arnav is worst thn an animal to push her n leave her in pain.
Surprisingly while self introspection he still is thinking abt how he dint save his di n how he wud care for her. Shud he proud to be a selfless bro still looking for his Di or is he a fool like khushi wasting his life for a selfish delusional woman. He still doesn't blame anjali for the anything even signing away his property n causing bankruptcy.
Yet if khushi did even a smallest thing he wud yelling blaming her as khushi said.

I guess that jealous woman who wants to hurt aryan is payal coz she sd kids n second abt her husband gifted her bangles. So it must be akash who was alwys buying her stuff since they met.
Also snake never gifted anything expensive even to anjali coz she's stupid to distinguish real frm fake.

I hope khushi makes life hell for the woman wanting to hurt aryan.
How sick so far she lived at arnav's expense while khushi n obviously arnav's child was rightful heir yet now that khushi is spending her own money while they threw money away she's burning seeing aryan.
Shamless disgusting woman.

I hope khushi's family doesn't melt seein payal.

I want khushi to hurt them equally.


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
Aryan is encircled with a lot more mysteries, that will be solved in next part. Trust me, Arnav's pain is going to be intensified with revelation of her painful past, when she was thrown away. And you said, he had done irreversible damage, I am not sure, if he would ever get forgiveness for that, let's hope for the best.

Aman had been there for her, is he the one who saved her is yet to be known ;).

Weren't they all worst than animals toward her, no one actually gave her any respect, she had to strive so hard, to get on her feet and then be back. No one actually tried to find her out.

He is a brother, for whom Anjali had mattered till day, it is hard to forget his utter most priority suddenly. Till date, he couldn't blame her for anything, because all the money he made was to make her life easy, he was upset sure but he can't never blame her, at least till now. In future is to be found out ;)

Payal was after all right when she said those things to Arnav, although she is immensely wrong too but then again, not only one person had wronged her, everyone one Raizadas had just done that, be it Nani, Arnav, or her own sister.

The woman said in the first dialogue that I would bring stuff for all the children speaking to the other mother ;). Let's see who it is ;).

Oh that Khushi will, Aryan is her weakness, but he is also her strength, she will go for kill to protect her Aryan. Khushi's parents, you will see how they deal with Raizadas ;).


Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mansijani21

Awesome update ..!!

Can't wait to read more of it..
Pls update soon.


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
I will upload the last half as soon as I can, hopefully within two hours or so :).

Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nanor

simply amazing
loved it-


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.

Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sarunsashasingh

Arnav should actually suffer...coz the sin he has done..is unforgivable!!


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
As of now, he doesn't know even half of her suffering, so his suffering has just started. That they are.

Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swtgirl_tina

It was a great update.👏 (and a very quick one too ^_^) Finally Arnav is regretting his deeds. Seems like Khushi has much more in store for him as well as the others. Bring it on baby..!! 😆 I loved Aman's character. :D He seems like a great friend to Khushi. It would be awesome to see some of their friendly moments :P And of course - Aryan, He stole the entire credit today.!! Can't wait to read more about him. That woman seems to be Anjali or Payal. Though I think its more likely to be Payal. But then again she doesn't look like someone who will have contacts of lawyers.😕. I guess i'll just have to wait to find out. :P I wonder how did Khushi manage to achieve so much in 5 years. I'm very eager to hear her story. Once again,you are a great writer and I cannot wait to read further 😃 Please continue soon😊


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me. I love writing this FF, My revengeful side, you know, it always come out with this story ;).
Oh this is just the start, she has a lot in store for them.
Aryan, you will love him, he is one such a sweetheart kid, you will not be able to help but love him. You will definitely see some Aman Khushi friendship moment, since now the story will move in the house as well as outside, Aman will drop often.
Well Payal can have contacts too, over than 5 years she has been Raizada bahu. ;) You will find out soon.
That you will know very soon, how Khushi reached to such a success.
I will upload the last half as soon as I can, hopefully within two hours or soo:).

Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada

First time I am feeling sorry for Arnav, he can't hug is own son. It looks like Payal is the one planning to harm Khushi. 😡


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
Let's see if you still feel for sorry after next half ;)
About Payal, well she is cunning little thing but if she can harm Khushi in this way, it is to been.

Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kshubhangi

👏kudos to you for this concept
loved each part. continue soon


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
This concept or similar to it I wanted to happen in the show, and trust me, I would have watched the show and be an ardent fan, but I stuck to my sisters story telling. Thanks a lot.
I will upload the last half as soon as I can, hopefully within two hours:).

Loads of love,
Kashish

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