MiniFF- Revenge Time-Ch9B/Th2Pg152| COMPLETED | (23/03/15) - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
whoa...what is this...is this ipkknd or reversal ipkknd... the clock seems reversed ... interesting...have never read such a track...read in a go... I'm amazed that Payal did all the mudslinging and showed THE ASR the mirror...

pls continue soon 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
pls continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update!
Arnav was wrong but what Payal did was worse!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Once again, it was a great update Kashish. :D The best part was how Shyam foolishly agreed to whatever Khushi asked him to do, without realising her intentions 😆 Payal is soo annoying😡. Khushi should make sure that she suffers the most and realises her faults. Arnav has already knows the truth and is super guilty. But i still hope Khushi makes him pay for whatever he did to her. Brilliant story. Please continue soon.
P.S. I love the idea of this SS stretching up to 8-10 parts.😃 It would be a great treat for all the readers :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it.❤️
I love this fierce Khushi.❤️
Aman is awesome.👏⭐️
Anjali is in la la land as always.😡😡😡
Now they will see Shyams true colours.😡😡😡
Payal is such a vile creature.😡😡😡
I loved how Khushi talked to Manorama.😆
Akash is a loser.😡😡
I am glad Arnav knows the truth now but I still want Khushi to punish him for all the pain he gave her.
I love the idea of Arnav and Shyam sleeping at the poolside.😆😆
Let Khushis' revenge commence.😆
This will be so much fun.😆😆😆
I think Khushi was pregnant when she left and has a son.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃
PS: The idea of 8-10 parts is fantastic.😉
Keep up the good work.👍🏼
Edited by zafi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Come on people comment.
I can't wait to read the next part.
Edited by zafi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zafi

Come on people comment.
I can't wait to read the next part.


Me too, i read the whole thing 5 times and never get bored with it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada


Me too, i read the whole thing 5 times and never get bored with it.

I know isn't it just fantabulous writing.😃
Edited by zafi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please update soon.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woohoo!!!!
Page 4 of comments.😆

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