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punam

@punamluvshilpa

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

its awesome part but too short..arman is so rude here...and dear please change the colour,its too bright...ud soon

punam

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29priya

@29priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: punamluvshilpa
its awesome part but too short..arman is so rude here...and dear please change the colour,its too bright...ud soon
punam

hey thnku so much...will update next time a bara waala...pakka...sure...will do...

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29priya

@29priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

hey sweethearts...thnku for the lovely comments...ur comments really make my day special...luv u all...I have replied to each of ur comment...and guys keep commenting and liking it...it really motivates me to update soon...and if anyone wants pm...plz buddy me...I hope the likes and comment may increase this time...'fingers crossed'...it wont take ur much time...just few seconds to comment n hit a like..and if possible do share this ff link with ur frnds who may like to read it...hope u can spare me this much time...:)
So now enough of my blabberring...u can read the update...:) :)g

PART EIGHT

whaaat the f*** are you saying Rahool????have u lost your minddo you even know...this whole thing doesn't even match with this situation...it just doesn't have a link...Armaan shouted exasperately...he just put his hair back and sat down on the chair with his hand on his head too frustated with all the events...

Armaan just calm down man...nothing has happened yet...this project wont stop...we will find a solution for it...Rahul said assuringly while keeping a hand on his shoulder...For which Armaan just nodded his head..

(Rahul knew...they were in great trouble now...there is no solution for it other than...oh lord...they have invested too much now..and they cant back out now...its not a solution..and to convince Armaan for this...its next to impossible.).Rahul thaught with a faraway look...

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tulu...plz bata na tu kab le ja raha hai hume Maahi di se milwane..Abhi ek hafta hogaya hain hume Mumbai aye..aur tu hume kuch batata hi nhi hai Maahi di ke baare main..tune to kaha tha na tu jaldi le jayega hume...aur tu kaha tha do teen dino se..humse milne vi nhi aya..aur to aur kuch bol hi nhi raha hai..Shilpa bombarded with her questions...while wiping her tears with the back of her palm...
Shilpa was getting tired staying in a big city...she desperately want to go to her home..to her maa,naani ma...as she found yaha ke log too rude.and batameez...
Kya hua golu...tu ro kyu rahi hai aise...batana...plz...tu to meri achi behen hai na...Atul asked tensed as he saw her tears
Tujhe pata hai tulu...aaj na...shaam ko jab hum Arohi ke saath gaye the na...to na raaste main na maine ek bache ko dekha jo raasta cross kar raha tha...wo gaari se takrane waala tha ki humne use thakka de diya...fir na us gaari waale bhaiya ko na Arohi ne khub sunaya...par pata hai tulu...us gari waale ke maalik kitna batameez insaan hain...usne na mere haathon main paisa thamaye aur fatafat chala gaya...kitne kharab hote hai bare seher ke kog...isse acha to hamara banaras hai...waha ke log maafi to maangte hai na galti hone par...Shilpa explained this with a very cute facial expressions.. And pouted very cutely...
Atul after listening to Shilpa had a hard time controlling his laugh...(his little golu is so innocent...but he have to do something soon...he cant let her stay here more...its not safe for her...but he knew she wont go from here without her Maahi di...but wo use kaise bataye ki ye sab is not possible...Maahi will not come back...agar use ana hi hota ghar waapas...to wo kab ka aa jati...par...)Atul sighed and rubbed his face.
tuluuu...kya hua...tujhe pata hai na main sidhe yaha ayi hu tere paas...aur tu hai ki aaj maun vrat dhayan kiye hua hai...bol na...kuch...mere sawalo ka jawab to de..Shilpa asked Atul while shaking his shoulder...as he was not listening to her and was buzy in his thoughts...
Kuch nhi golu...tu avi hostel jaa main kal milta hu tujhse...thik hai..aur sun jyaada yaha kisi se ghulne milne ki jarurat nhi...aur haan baaba teri Maahi di ka vi pata lagata hu...pakka...

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Shilpa came to hostel room and sat on her side of bed with a thud..and Arohi who was busy on call was startled and raised an eyebrow at her...for which Shilpa nodded on her head in a no...after a few moments Arohi finished her convo on phone
kya hua cutie pie...why are you so upset...Arohi asked ShilpA as she sat beside her while keeping a hand on her shoulder...pulling her for a side hug...
Arohi..terko pata hai nahum tulu se milne gaye the...hume kuch jaruri baat karni thi use...par wo hai...baat hi nhi ki humse thik se...hume hostel jaane ko keh diya...pata nhi kya ho gaya hai tulu ko...kuch pareshaan sa lag raha tha aaj...aur hume kuch bata vi nhi raha tha...hume to kuch samajh nhi aya...usne aisa kavi nhi kiya...Shilpa said all this with a ver tensed face as she was feeling wierd from inside...as something is going to happen...bad or good she has no idea...
Hey hey...Shilpa...itni pareshan mat ho...sab thik hoga...hmm...itna kyu worried ho rahi hai...realax...ho sakta hai..tulu ko kuch kaam ki prob ho...aur isliye u know...thoda upset hoga...hmmm...Arohi said consoling her...as she knew Shilpa gets tensed easily...

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Armaan...listen we dont have any other way...u have to do this...otherwise we are going to face heavy losses...we have invested crores in this project...Rahul said to Armaan explaining all the situtation...as they were sitting in Armaan's with the legal advisor of their company and Mr mehra's legal advisor...
Here Armaan banged the table with anger visible on his face...his most important deal of his life..his grandpa's wish cannot be completed...just cause of this single b***** cause...why man...anyway he was too frustated from evening today...first of all that 'behenji'came in front of his car...for which he couldn't reach on time to the site...than that coperator gave the legal notice..to stop the work there...as accordingly the land was not on Armaan's name...yet...he was tooo frustated...he felt like pulling his hairs...and was cursing that stupid behenji...as he have reached before...he could have stopped the coperator..but now everything is messed up...[/B]
Mr Mallik...I suppose aapko ye pehle hi pata karani chahiye thi ki wo land aapke nasm hai kya nahi...aapki is laparwahi aur aapke dadaji ke will ke hisaab se...hamare iss project ka aapko dena kafi nuksaan ho sakta hai hamari company ko...and so I Suggest tha..The legal advisor of Mr Mehra's was about to complete his sentence but he was cutted in between by Armaan..
I suggest why dont u take some rest...I will do something about it...its my responsibility to start the work...so I will do it...you dont have to worry...the project will be completed anyhow...
The legal advisor left hurriedly after that..as he knew Armaan can be dangerous when he is angry...this deal as important for Mr mehra as for Mr MAallik...so he cant take the risk and wrath from his boss
So if its the only solution...then I will get MARRIED by next week...but U take care of all the legal proceedures after that...Armaan said this after a pause...with thinking something deeply...as he just cant let his grandpa down...if he wants him to be MARRIED..so then be it...he will do everything for this project...it will be completed any how...by hook or crook...

Hey thnky guys for reading the update...I seriously dont know what rubbish I have written in this update...so sorry for dissappointing u guyys..this part has not turn out to be what I had expected...but still...I think...its better than nothing...so yeah...here it is...do tell me how it is...by pressing like tab or comment..and if there is anything u dont like in this update...u can tell me frankly...no worries...and also I hope this time the colour combination was ok...:):)

Edited by pri.29793 - 10 years ago

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

hey i m the first woah!!!!!!!
so yeh kya tha kuch samajh nah aya?
why is armaan so angry nd stressed ? why is he shouting on rahul ?
or itna chotu sa update just 2 dialouges!!!! :'( :'( :'(

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29priya

@29priya

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: palakajenian
hey i m the first woah!!!!!!!
so yeh kya tha kuch samajh nah aya?
why is armaan so angry nd stressed ? why is he shouting on rahul ?
or itna chotu sa update just 2 dialouges!!!! :'( :'( :'(

hey palak...maine socha nhi tha itni jaldi cmnt aayega...anyway thnks for the. comment...m still writing the part...have not completed it...to main installments main post karne waali hun...jab part complete hoga...u vl understand everything...

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kumkum88

@kumkum88

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Sweet and short update

Plz give arsh scene

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Shona77

@Shona77

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Short and confusing update

What Armaan was talking with rahool

Shilpa is so cute and innocent

Atual really cares for Shilpa

Who is maahi?

Plz give Shilpa pic according ur story

U promise u will give long update but it's very short

So plz give long update

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

superb part
so finally revealed why armaan is tensed so he have to get married within a week hmmm
and ridhz she is also tensed ab kya hoga
do continue soon

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Awesome update...

Just loved it...

Do continue soon...

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sreelekshmi

@lekshmiarsh93

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#90

di...actually i m really sorry for late commenting...i was busy bcoz of some reasons...anyway this is going very interesting...i think armaan is getting married to shilpa...i like the way u portrayed arsh meet...thats superbbb di...shilpa is sooo innocent...again i m sorry...