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Nevertheless it was none other than my dear sakhi Draupadi

Who was nervously biting her nails, twitching her lips all the while constantly gaping at Gopala as "If she wants an answer..." she should calm and poised like always

As she is the one who will get honoured by marrying this great warrior "her to be husband Angaraaj"

she was covered with sheer layer of sweat and frown

why this anxiousness ...

Oh why her rosy cheeks getting so pale perhaps it was "her Anticipation" that made her like this but 'little did I knew that I'll be proved very wrong in some moments'

she should be happy "perhaps flying with excitement she is going to be an Angarani after all wife of one of the foremost warriors of Bharatvarsha"

I should be the one who should be wailing loudly cause

"I'm the one who is losing my fate to her ... Losing my Angaraj to her."Don't be a sacrificial lamb Be brave enough supriyaa as a tigress once he wins this you will leave I will surely not attend her wedding ceremony " said my inner voice

Soon on the call of his name

"Angaraj Karna upastitha ho"

my lion entered the swaymvar hall & addressed all in his deep baritone

''Maharaja Drupad aur Rajkumar Drishtadyumna ko meri ore se sadar pranaam''

next moment he prayed to his originator in the sky perceiving the golden rays from him and blending them in his enigmatic persona making it more pure and divine

thenceforward he bowed down and folded his hands in front of the divine Dhanush he held it up in a moment like a "flutter of an eyelash" it was so instant my sakhi is indeed so lucky to have a suitor who is so AGILE AND RAPID AS A LION POUNCING ON HIS PREY She & I were getting more restless as each moment surpassed she frowned and looked hither thither puzzled in her own thoughts

At last her sakha asked her

"Are you alright sakhi or you got this nervousness ailment from rajkumari Priya" "what's the matter sakhi ??"

" Govind you can read minds can anybody keep anything from you" replied Panchaali

Hahaha i wanted to roar at this statement so vasudev can read minds ... intriguing huh Well then does he know the Wild fantasies!! running at the back of my mind how I want to kick Draupadi off this balcony and run away with this varamala to marry the handsome fellow beneath & kiss my dear Angaraaj...

"Yes I know everything Sakhi" said vasudev smilingly

Shiva shiv did he replied me

nope supriyaa You are out of your mind suddenly breaking the trail of my crazy thoughts

Draupadi replied

"You told me naa that if the bride doesn't want to... then.."

" Yes its ultimately your marriage your choice sakhi it's the most important moment of your life it is this moment that will decide not only your fate But the future of the whole Bharatvarsha and perhaps of princess Priya too"

Did he mentioned me or this craziness is getting over my nerves too

Whilst my lion had easily strung the Dhanush next he bent down and fixed his eyes at the reflection of the rotating fish's eye in the water his shoulder muscles tightened showing of his well sculptured chest which he had acquired by vigorous training of warfare then his arms gently stretched the arrow towards his target

"his eyes were locked at the eye of the fish"

" he stretched the string more towards the eye he was exactly perpendicular to his target exactly erect to the line of target's eye now he was so engrossed in it and so absorbed in it that it seemed to me that he only saw the EYE"

Everything else must have seem black to him and just when he was about to SHOOT the Arrow

Draupadi stood up what the hell is she doing oh my so much anticipation for marrying him that she cannot even wait to let him laksha bedha {win}

can't she put the varamala on his neck after he wins he isn't running away Uff!!

i can never understand Agnijyotsna why such impatience

Oh I cannot see this Mahadev

Help me stop panchali from marrying him Stop her ...

I Closed My Eyes and prayed

''Stop!!!" a voice echoed in the grand swaymvar hall

oh yes you heard me he sent mata Parvati

But there was a grave silence all over like doom and gloom spread all over

Did I Die ? out of shock

open your eyes said my inner voice only to find out that it was no Mata Gauri but The fiery princess who said Stop in rather a tone of a stern refusal

Stop She exclaimed he was disturbed , distressed like she has disturbed a sage doing his tapasya for moksha

His eyes were full of shock and dissatisfaction he stared with his intense eyes unto panchali's eyes searching for some answers.

"Why Devi???"

he questioned rather in agony and astonishment

"Because I Will Never Marry A Low Born like you I will never in your dreams marry you Suta putra" replied the prideful Drupad kumari

He looked upright at his originator Perhaps asking him what was his mistake why always why he had to face such refusals because he was the so called Suta who blazed and emitted fire out this noon perhaps consoling his worshipper's Agony.

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Veryy good update J
BTW Sakhi is your name Jyotsna😉 Its just a guess tell me am I correct or wrong!
Nw abt update
really well penned...Hmm Supriya nd Drau both lookin at the same thing...bt with difft eyes nd emotions so good written!
Now chalo make Arya look at his Supriya quickly
update soon!

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Sphinx.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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wow! fantastic update angarani dear!! really i love the way u handle ur river like words flow ..u penned extraordinarily the anxiety of supri..fantastic..hats off to u dear.and the folk lore u wrote..yes!! I too heard it..and enjoyed it in ur words..continue soon dear

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Wonderful update J 😊

The anxiousness between both the princess was well described each with different emotions ⭐️

Loved the way u described Angaraj when he stepped in the main dais when his name was called.😳

And the words & the emotions u used to describe priya's emotions was apt, restless, crazy in love and childlike...

So the fiery princess did stop Angaraj & he has to face the humiliation he never deserved at the first place 😭

Update soon J...would like to know soonn how supriya would react to this Panchali's sudden outburst & humiliation towards her love 😛

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Nandhakishore

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wow...Wow...Wow...Fantastice updates,very well written..First Hats off to u for giving this beautiful story,Angrani👏👏

Supriya n Karna...wow super jodi...Liked them very much...

Supriya...hahaha...really a cutie pie.😳😆.her inner feelings r nicely portrayed in all chapters,but especially in last chapter,I liked her feelings...

Haan...forget to say...Ur description about Angraj was first-class...👍🏼

Supriya would feel like flying in the sky now na??...hahaha...😆

Thanks for the pm...waiting...Pls do PM me whenever u had done the update...Thank u..😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: .Sanskruti
Veryy good update J
Thanks sansi
BTW Sakhi is your name Jyotsna😉 Its just a guess tell me am I correct or wrong!
Nope it's JAYA VARSHU LAXMI

LOL WHO told you about my name ???? Did aarti told you...

Nw abt update

really well penned...Hmm Supriya nd Drau both lookin at the same thing...bt with difft eyes nd emotions so good written!
Now chalo make Arya look at his Supriya quickly

He will soon

Sorry very busy but will update on 5 th if possible
update soon!

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@JyotsnaSharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
Wonderful update J 😊

The anxiousness between both the princess was well described each with different emotions

AWw Thanks Di if you think that yes you got my idea diff emotions flowing out of the princesses both are anxious but for different reasons

⭐️

Loved the way u described Angaraj when he stepped in the main dais when his name was called.😳

Well he needs description does he
After he is the king of all hearts here

And the words & the emotions u used to describe priya's emotions was apt, restless, crazy in love and childlike...

Well supriyaa is me here so she had to be child-like lol ty

So the fiery princess did stop Angaraj & he has to face the humiliation he never deserved at the first place 😭

Yes he never did she will get it all back

Update soon J...would like to know soonn how supriya would react to this Panchali's sudden outburst & humiliation towards her love 😛

Just wait how supriyaa reacts panchaali get ready for her rudra tandava lol in upcoming updates