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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
I must been insane to have never crossed path with this particular fiction...
Thank you so much for the PM zubi... Else I would have never had a chance to read this.. Thank you so much!
Ah! This one is so emotional, full of angst and horrific pasts.
I particular thing which I just love about this fiction is the way in which every relation has been defined to the extreme, be it SanDhir's relation or Sanyukta-Ankit's bond.
Randhir's character has been described splendidly and his selfless love for Sanyukta has been portrayed marvelously.
I hope that Sanyukta is able to cope up with her dark past and the phobia that her step-mother has instilled in her is cured soon.
This particular chapter was so damn emotional..
Sanyukta 's motherly instincts have been brought out beautifully..
Aww... That was so sweet of Randhir to provide her the required mental strength.
That parting portion was so heart-wrenching..
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter..
Do update soonish!!!

Regards
Keya

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

I must been insane to have never crossed path with this particular fiction...
Thank you so much for the PM zubi... Else I would have never had a chance to read this.. Thank you so much!
Ah! This one is so emotional, full of angst and horrific pasts.
I particular thing which I just love about this fiction is the way in which every relation has been defined to the extreme, be it SanDhir's relation or Sanyukta-Ankit's bond.
Randhir's character has been described splendidly and his selfless love for Sanyukta has been portrayed marvelously.
I hope that Sanyukta is able to cope up with her dark past and the phobia that her step-mother has instilled in her is cured soon.
This particular chapter was so damn emotional..
Sanyukta 's motherly instincts have been brought out beautifully..
Aww... That was so sweet of Randhir to provide her the required mental strength.
That parting portion was so heart-wrenching..
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter..
Do update soonish!!!

Regards
Keya



Glad you finally came across it.
Well, I don't know what to say after this long comment you mentioned.
Uff! __ Your words are so satisfying.
Thank you so much.
KEYA!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
I'm really sorry for being late...
but My unres here it goes...

YOU ARE COMMENDABLE...
I'm a big fan of your writings..

This chapter made me cry so hard...
it so beautifully written..
I loved it to the core..

I dont know what to write...
this gave me gossebumps...

it was so touchy and the way you potrayed as HELL AMAZING


THAT BABY OH GOD!!
THAT SCENE WHERE SANYU MET THE BABY... WOW!!

THE SCENE WHERE SHE CAME TO KNW ABOUT SHE HAVE TO LET GO OF HER... I CRIED DAMN HARD...

AND THE SONG GAVE ME SO MUCH EMOTIONS,,, I LOVED IT..

I DONT KNOW HOW YOU POTRAYED THIS MOTHER-CHILD LOVE..
IT IS REALLY A BUG ACHEIVEMENT...

NO ONE CAN DO IT THAT EASILY,...

LAST SCENE TOOK MY HEART AWAY...

SPLENDID
FANTSTIC..

SPEECHLESS

LOVE
RIYA
AND UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
hey what a update dear. amazing story. awesome update. aah feeling very bad for sanyu. she is totally broken from inside. santu childhood was heart wrenching. she has suffer a lot. sanyu mother is just beyond imagination hw can a mother b so cruel. sanyu n her scene was too emotional. she didn't want to leave her. n rd loves her beyond limit. he cares her like a child his love for sanyu is eternal. plz update next part asap. plz pm me next time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Parshlove

I'm really sorry for being late...

but My unres here it goes...

YOU ARE COMMENDABLE...
I'm a big fan of your writings..

This chapter made me cry so hard...
it so beautifully written..
I loved it to the core..

<font color="#cc0033">I dont know what to write...</font>
<font color="#cc0033">this gave me gossebumps...</font>
<font color="#cc0033">
</font>
<font color="#cc0033">it was so touchy and the way you potrayed as HELL AMAZING</font>
<font color="#cc0033">
</font>
<font color="#cc0033">
</font>
<font color="#cc0033">THAT BABY OH GOD!!</font>
<font color="#cc0033">THAT SCENE WHERE SANYU MET THE BABY... WOW!!</font>
<font color="#cc0033">
</font>
<font color="#cc0033">THE SCENE WHERE SHE CAME TO KNW ABOUT SHE HAVE TO LET GO OF HER... I CRIED DAMN HARD...</font>
<font color="#cc0033">
</font>
<font color="#cc0033">AND THE SONG GAVE ME SO MUCH EMOTIONS,,, I LOVED IT..</font>
<font color="#cc0033">
</font>
<font color="#cc0033">I DONT KNOW HOW YOU POTRAYED THIS MOTHER-CHILD LOVE..</font>
<font color="#cc0033">IT IS REALLY A BUG ACHEIVEMENT...</font>
<font color="#cc0033">
</font>
<font color="#cc0033">NO ONE CAN DO IT THAT EASILY,...</font>
<font color="#cc0033">
</font>
<font color="#cc0033">LAST SCENE TOOK MY HEART AWAY...</font>
<font color="#cc0033">
</font>
<font color="#cc0033">SPLENDID</font>
<font color="#cc0033">FANTSTIC..</font>
<font color="#cc0033">
</font>
<font color="#cc0033">SPEECHLESS</font>
<font color="#cc0033">
</font>
<font color="#cc0033">LOVE</font>
<font color="#cc0033">RIYA</font>
<font color="#cc0033">AND UPDATE SOON</font>



👏 Thank you for this big comment.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

hey what a update dear. amazing story. awesome update. aah feeling very bad for sanyu. she is totally broken from inside. santu childhood was heart wrenching. she has suffer a lot. sanyu mother is just beyond imagination hw can a mother b so cruel. sanyu n her scene was too emotional. she didn't want to leave her. n rd loves her beyond limit. he cares her like a child his love for sanyu is eternal. plz update next part asap. plz pm me next time.



Thank you Sarim.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Awsome update yr ...
Loved it ..
thanks for p.m me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
'TIME FOR REVENGE'
Chapter -7

'The Deadly Punishment'

'Mam? Mam?' A manly-voice called Sanyukta who was sited in the porch smoking her third Cigar lost in her dark thoughts.

'Mam' this is your third Cigar.. If Randhir Sir came to know about it. Then, he'll be hell angry with you as well as he shoot me with my own rifle.' It was Matthew who gulped his saliva trying best to explain Sanyukta the consequences.

Sanyukta came out of Trance when she saw Matthew standing beside her with a worried expression.

'What is it, Matthew?' She asked breathing out the smoke from her mouth.

'You shouldn't smoke. Its not good for your health.' He kneeled down on his knee and took the Cigar box to clean the mess she created.

'Stop!' She uttered and Matthew stopped whatever he was doing.

'Yes Mam?' He stood up like the obedient guard.

'Call Martha. She will clean the mess before Randhir arrives. You are not assigned as my servant. Your duty is to protect me not to..' She sighed in irritation while not able to control the breathing.

'Are you okay? Should I call the Doctor?' Asked Matthew when he saw Sanyukta's condition worsening.

'Just take me to my room. I'm fine.' She stood up stumbling and Matthew held her hand for the support.

He lead her to the bed and stepped back. He was concerned about Sanyukta's health.

'I think I should call Randhir Sir.' Said Matthew with low voice.

'You won't do that.' Sanyukta strictly concluded. In return, Matthew nodded. 'You can leave now.' She closed her eyes to shove the dizziness.

'Mam.. Randhir Sir's strictly instructed not to leave you alone.' He hastily informed.

'Leave! Before I do what I shouldn't.' She rudely warned Matthew. He was taken aback. She didnt talked to any servant this rudely. Something was bothering her definitely.

'I'm Sorry, Mam.' He muttered and left.

'I'm Sorry for being so disgusting towards you as well as Randhir.. I'm really scared.. Those nightmares are killing me.. (She screamed out loud) You all expect me to be Strong.. If Randhir will see me like this.. Then he will definitely take me away with him back to India. And I don't want that.. I want REVENGE. Its your turn today DADDY..' She screamed again like a maniac while other servants were scared to listen the sounds coming from inside the room. Matthew was one of them.

'If she didn't let the emotions come out.. Then it would kill her from inside I'm afraid.' He whispered to the other servants who were worried for Sanyukta.

>>>>>>>>

Randhir called Sanyukta for the third time but she didn't answered. He called Matthew and asked about her. He said she is sleeping and Randhir sighed in relief.

'What's bothering you, baccha?' He conversed with himself looking out from the car window.

>>>>>>>>

'Where is Sanyukta?' Asked Ankit getting inside the apartment.

'Inside her room. We cant go near the room. Randhir Sir prohibited us. Only Matthew was allowed but she warned Matthew not to disturb her. Its been 5 hours she hasn't opened the gate. Randhir Sir is away for some work so we called you.' Martha spoke worriedly.

'Thank you. I'll take it from here.' Ankit smiled and rushed towards Sanyukta's room.

He knocked and called, 'Doll, its me your brother.. Open up! I'm here with your favourite pancakes.' But no response he got. He again called and knocked hastily but silence Prevailed.

'Please.. Be inside doll..' He prayed to god and broke the gate. His eyes searched for his little star but no one was inside. He saw one photo on the table and picked it up.

'Oh my god! I have to stop her..' He ran towards his car taking Matthew along with him.

'Whats wrong, Sir?' Matthew asked while Ankit's eyes were red and he seemed to be scared to death.

'Call Randhir and inform him to drive at Richard High School. As fast as he can. She is going to kill OUR FATHER.' He whispered looking at the picture of his Father which brutally pierced with the knife which he got from Sanyukta's room. He rushed his car towards the High School speeding up to an extent.

Matthew informed Randhir who got confused and worried.

'Richard High School? I heard the name.. Its.. Its.. Where Shinal Agrawal's Daughter Study. No.. No.. Sanyukta cant do this .. She cant..' He drove crazily towards the high school praying that his baccha would not do anything which she should regret.

>>>>>>>

Location: Richard School

Kishore Agrawal was waiting for her daughter Priya Agrawal outside the school. Then got a call from unknown number.

'If you want your daughter alive, then come and take her from .. If you dare involve the police and inform others.. She will be dead.' The voice dangerously warned him and hanged the phone.

Kishore shivered at the voice and rushed towards the address to save his daughter.

Randhir reached at the place and called Sanyukta but her number was unreachable.

'Dammit..' He punched the wall and saw a car in a quick speed rushing somewhere. He saw Kishore Agrawal who seem to be crying.

'Sanyu..' He followed his car with the speed.

>>>>>>>
Location: Unknown

'I'm Sorry Priya.. I didn't wanted to hurt you. You were never meant to be involve in this.' A teary-voice blankly chirped as the door behind her opened with the thud.

'You should wear the mask before she wakes up.' The Man around her same age informed as he wore the black mask.

'Thank you Parth'. She blankly chirped as she was busy caressing Her Step-Sister's face which was pale.

'I always had your back, Sanyu.' It was none other than Parth Kashyap, the gangster.

'From the college Time.' She tried to smile.

'Are you sure, you want to do this? If you want.. Even I can do..' He tried his best to explain her.

'I know what I'm putting myself into.' She dangerously hushed.

'Then, Welcome in the gang.' He smirked and left.

>>>>>>

Kishore reached the place and Randhir was still trying to call Sanyukta. He was so scared and he was shivering at the thought of losing her.

Kishore entered inside the big building and the lights turned on. He saw his daughter on the chair unconscious and rushed to her. Before he reached, A Shadow blocked his Path.

He widened his eyes in horror and Uttered, 'Sanyu?'

>>>>>>>

'Which room did he went? Dammit..' Randhir's rage and worries were on his peak now. He was searching in each and every room for her like a insane person.

>>>>>>>

'Hello Father? Its nice meeting you after so long.' It was Sanyukta with the pistol in her hands pointed towards Kishore.

'Sanyu.. You're alive? What are you doing here? And you did all this? Why are you doing this to my daughter? Just let her go and we will all go home together.' Kishore thought to trap her in his talks but she was a genius after all.

'No.. No.. No.. My dearest father. I'm not coming back to you. Infact you're going to hell.' She smirked at him.

'Sanyu dont you dare..' Before he could utter some non-sense words she shot his left leg and he screamed in pain.

'No father. I'm not going to listen to you.. After what I'm have gone through.' She remember each and every torcher on her skin, for her singing, even once for her dignity.

'You're going to die.' She was out of her senses. She looked dangerous and cancerous. Her eyes were hell red and her anger had no limits today.

She was about to shot him again when she felt his Presence and yet he was standing right there.

'Randhir..?' She chirped absent-mindedly.

Randhir rushed towards her and saw the whole scene. He was shocked.

'Baccha.. You dont wanna do this right? Give me the gun in my hands.' He softly spoke with tears arousing slowly.

'Randhir.. Please! This is my plan. Dont interfere. If you ever loved me.' She gazed in his eyes and shot another leg with his screams echoed in the whole building.

'Sanyu please.. Forgive me..' Kishore pleaded for mercy.

'You had no mercy that time, daddy. Why would I give you the thing which you didnt even think to give me when I was dying in the garbage begging for my brother..' She shouted and screamed roaring all pain of her dark childhood.

'Look at me baccha.. We can do this together right? Now give me the gun.' Randhir pleaded with his heart beating fast.

'I'm Sorry. But its my REVENGE!!' And She shot him on the head. She screamed and cried for her deed and again shot him. She was shooting at his body as if all her pain was being realised.

The body was lying with the pool of blood. Randhir ran to Sanyukta and snatched the gun from her hand. She shook her hand and screaming her father's name.

She wasnt listening. She was just being violent and she pushed herself on the ground to witness her father's dead body which was brutally murdered by her.

She smiled and dizziness took over her senses. Parth rushed inside the room and Randhir held her in his arms with the tears brimming down his face.

'Sanyu.. Sssh! Baby! Its okay! Come on! Lets go from here.. Parth..' She heard his last words and the silence prevailed.

>>>>>>>>>

'Randhir.. You have to understand.. We have to take Sanyukta away from here. She is not safe here after what she has done.' Parth screamed at his face where Randhir was still numb.

'I think Parth is right. Sanyu is not safe here, London police will find her at any cost after they got to know about the murder.' Ankit tried to explain the consequences.

Randhir was helpless. He didn't wanted Sanyukta to face any of this neither he trusted Parth.

'I don't trust you Parth then how can you expect me to give my life in your hands. Ankit, Sanyukta needs care and love which wasn't present in her childhood. From the day I met her I TREATED HER AS A CHILD. I GAVE HER LOVE OF A FATHER, MOTHER, BROTHER AND A LOVER. She is just too innocent Ankit. You know she has these nightmares at night.. I feed her food at midnight because she doesn't eat at dinner.. Who will take care of her when she wont be around me? I WONT LEAVE HER.' Randhir declared his statement for both of them. The three of them heard Sanyukta's voice from the car.

Randhir ran inside the car and saw Sanyukta murmuring in her sleep.

'Randhir...' She called innocently.

Randhir sat on the sit resting her head in his lap. He continuously caressed her hairs.

'Yeah baccha.. You need something?' He kissed her forehead.

'Water..' She murmured and sat with his support.

'Here.. Slowly..' He made her gulped the water from bottle from his hands and he stared outside at the two guys who were trying to send Sanyukta away from Randhir.

Ankit smiled and understood that Sanyukta needs Randhir most this time. She would get lost if Randhir wont be there.

He decided something for them or he can say for him and them. He smirked.

To be continued..


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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
uHmm wat 2 sae..
read ol prts in a goO!!
it wz fantstc,
loved itt 2 da core...
cn't wait fo nxt,
updt soon...
n thnxxx fo da pm
😊 ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Awsme updte
Loved it to the core


It was rely very scary
Sanyu hide everything from rd
She decided to kill her dad

She kidnapped her step sis
Rd n ankit hell worried for her

She shot her dad
Her dad was so ruthless trying to trap her again
Bt now this is not going to hppn

Rd tried to stop sanyu
Bt she killed him

In all this parth helped her

Parth n ankit wants to sanyu go away from rd

Bt sandhir cnt stay away from each other
Ankit planned sumthing


Cnt wait for next


Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

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