My last love-A sandhir ss(Part 9 updated)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone, i am back with another story .. i know my so many works are going on .. but this story popped in my mind,so m posting it her ...
Hope you all like it ...
Do read,like and leave your precious feedbacks ...

PROLOGE


"Papa,dekho na ye gudia kitni cute hai,hum ise bhi apne sath lekar jayenge Delhi"- Said a 3 years old randhir cutely holding new born baby girl

"Arey beta hum ise kaise sath lekar jaa sakte hai,ye bohat choti hai abhi apni maa k sath hi reh sakti hai ye"- Said harsh shekhawat

"Haan beta hum log ise baad mein lekar aayenge jab ye badi ho jayegi"- Said renuka shekhawat

"Par mujhe abhi sath mein lekar jana hai ise sath mein,dekho na kitni sweet hai ye,kitne chote chote hath hai iske aur pair bhi dekho"- Randhir said holding taking her hands in his hands.

"Beta abhi ise kaise lekar jaoge tum,ye royegi toh kaise chup karaoge tum,pareshan ho jayoge tum"- Said kishore aggarwal

"Abhi toh chodkar ja rahe hai kishore,par gudia ko hum apne ghar ki beti banana chahte hai,hum apni is dosti ko rishtedari mein badalna chahte hai .. agar tumhein aur bhabhi ji ko koi aitraz na ho toh"- Said harsh smilling

"Arey humein kya aitraz hoga,humein toh balki khushi hogi agar hamari gudia ki shadi randhir beta se ho"- kishore said happily

"Toh tai raha,jab randhir is layak ho jayega k apni aur gudia ki responsibility sambhal sake,toh hum gudia ko apni gudia bana lenge"- Renuka said happily
"Anju tumhein toh koi aitraz nahi hai na"- She continued looking at anju aggarwal

"Mujhe koi aitraz nahi hai,balki mujhe toh khushi hogi agar meri bachi tumhare ghar mein jayegi renuka"- Anju said weakly ...

She was weak because she has recently given birth to her little gudia


After one week,shekhawats shifted to Delhi ... in this one week,randhir played and enjoyed with his cute gudia ..

Aggarwals were staying happily ... they named their daughter sanyukta ...





So guys kaisa laga prologue ...
Hope you all liked it ...
do like and leave your precious comments ...
I will continue only if i will get good response .


I am not in favour of child marriage,but for sake of story,i have to write this ...


P.S- for pms buddy me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept
love to read it
continue soon
with love
RIDDHIMA
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my! This is so freakin' awesome!
The prologue is so intriguing and mind jolting. So we are gonna see a child marriage track... I'm hooked already.
The Randhir in the prologue is so adorable... Ah! He has already claimed his gudiya. That was so sweet of him.
Ohho! So both the families are friends.. Now this was unexpected.
I'm eagerly waiting for the first chapter.
Do update it soonish!!!

Regards
Keya
Edited by -foreverhers- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww...so cute gudiya...
loved it...
thnks fr pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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cute start. loved it. thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was very cute update😊
Continue soon
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Its beautiful story. Plz continue and update soon. Nd thanx for the pm.
Edited by gudia11 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Proloug was amzng
I luved it
Would luv to read it


Update soon
Wtng

Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey.. this was such a cute update..
Liked it a lot...
Update soon😛

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