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Shalma/Suman

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was awesome.
At one time I'm laughing and next I'm blushing..
Felt so happy while reading this part.

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Rish_Rubles

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Posted: 11 years ago

Read both parts together, this was one of the best things I have ever read..

Totally loved it, how they met, her innocence, their talks..

second part is awesomeee😳

It was hot and funny and reallly cute..

worth reading and a great idea!

Reallly amazing

Thanks for the pm!

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Rish_Rubles

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Posted: 11 years ago

Edited by Rishaal - 11 years ago

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

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Posted: 11 years ago

What a perfect end!

I like how you maintained their characters throughout.

The suhagraat scene was sweet.

Pls write more OS! 😳

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was lovely..

Sweet, innocent Khushi being awakened...

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awe Khushi was adorable and very cute. Nice update. Thanks for the PM :)

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

So sweet

She was protecting him

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww such a sweet story. When I had started reading I thought it was a sad one but as I continued I was only smiling till the end. This Khushi is so much fun. Aur yeh Arnav bhi kam nahi 😳

But what was this Aakash doing, playing business business in Mumbai when he was supposed to attend his brother's wedding?

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Roshni

@rashika

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Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing second part.
Love Arnav and Khushi in this TS.
What a cute and sweet update.

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madgirl84

@madgirl84

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Posted: 11 years ago

Jeeez this was sho cutee😳

Please pm me your updates too

I'll read all your stories slowly!😊

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