ArHi SS: Weight of the world - Chapter 3: Pg 18, 01-June

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

WOW!! fantastic update...loved it dear...

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arhi_love_boni

@arhi_love_boni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

nice concept👏👏👏...its new and definitely a very important issue that this story deals with through khushi and other characters...arnav khushi convo and the way khushi expressed her thoughts to arnav...i really liked this chapter...thanks for the PM😛😛😛

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nida

@fattou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

really loved their conversation

amazing update

thanx 4 update

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cosmina

@cosmina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

i'm so glad you decided to enjoy us with another creation! thanks to Twiggy too !

what can i say,this is just my life story,except i'm not smart and confident like our heroine😔

i like the way you made her,and i like how Arnav feel about Anjali,they are close ,he love and respect his sister.thank you very much for this gift,it's a real pleasure to read your work,is not just light love and heavy feelings,it has a lot of brain involved too.it's refreshing to read something smart and funny and in the same time something who touch your heart!

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

This update, for me, was about connections. Connections that may may defy definitions of 'lasting friendships' but significant connections that are brief yet full of meaning.

I am not sure where to start with my own connections with your update.. I felt satiated at the end of reading that update, much like Khushi who seemed satisfied with her meeting. Those moments when I take a longer route driving back, or switch off the engine and sit in the darkness of the car to garner some moments of silence replete with peace before I enter the lights of the house. Those moments when the loud call of a craving is louder than all the names called, labels bestowed. Those moments when that craving is satisfied by a short story or a verse from poem or a tweet from a stranger... This update was all that and more.

Rockbarbie - That's it.. :)

Edited by Mirabell - 10 years ago

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

that was a classy update...there are no simple solutions ...and even if u think to hell with all others and live as to how you want to there is still a small part of you that craves for being looked beyond the picture...

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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

interesting dear...

thanks for the PM

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

One can easily empathise with Anjali.

Doesn't this happen to most women?

After childbirth, so many of us put on weight and then starve ourselves trying to lose the added weight.

And whatever we might say about being happy in our own skin, we all do try to be like the thin girls we see around us. And this gets wirse as time goes by.

This story is special as this Khushi is so real.

Like her I go off sometimes for a walk by myself just to feel the wind in my hair and to be alone for a while.

Arnav had to be a chef!

Khushi the foodie, and Arnav the chef.

The irony of life.

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Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

awesome update, Thanks for PM.

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

That was so brilliant. The way you put every words to describe Khushi is amazing.

Every other women face problem like anjali. Even I am facing same.

But I really hate people when they try to be sympathetic with me about my wait and I really don't let those people get me on this.

Your story is so amazing and so real and most of us can relate with Khushi.

Their meeting was amazing and talks after that shows how arnav feel about her sister. But I don't understand if he himself know how Khushi feels then why he ask her for coffee first and then says he will email his phone no? If he really wants to go coffee with her then why he didn't exchange his no right their.

Is he also like other or simply feeling nervous that Khushi might refuse his offer? I really want to know how he feels after meeting with her, knowing that they exchange list of email till now.

Awesome update dear loved it.