let's give it a chance || sandhir ff Part 17 UPDATED ON PAGE 49 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
heya
welcome to the family
read your ff prologue
seems interesting
continue soon
and pm me
keep writing
update soon
with love
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

res

unres moi first😎
the prologue sems interesting.
Something different to read.
Sandhir are goona get divorced .
awwie their fight was so cute .competing for a duvet😆😆.
I have sended you a buddy request and please pm me

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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: parshlover

Nice, continue soon👏👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal

amazing prolouge...keep it up and plz do pm me😉😉😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Utterly sexxxyyy... Lovedd it bbyyy
Updateee sooonishhhg dearooo

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M looking frward to this one
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

"Let's give it a chance..."

Part 1

She woke up only to find her frame entangled with his with in seconds she started cursing him mentally "how can one sleep like this , he had half of this huge bed to sleep buh still he had to land on top of me "
She started pushing him but he didn't even flinch ,his body was quite heavy for her to push aside ,on the top of it he had even gripped her in his embrace.
"Randhir you jerk get of me" she shouted in his ear making him jump on the bed . It didn't took him a second to realize in how much big trouble he was in.
"Look you know this wasn't intentional even you know that." He chipped straightening his hairs with his hands . It was such a cute gesture which even made her blush but her anger was still on cloud 9.
"Yesterday I told you there were some conditions but now there r rules too" she chipped frustrated still controlling the andreline in her cheeks n dashed into the washroom .If she would have stayed a second more over there she definitely would have blushed hard.
He was arranging his stuff in her almirah when she came out of the washroom.
"Randhir gosh this guy " she chipped irritated.
"Now what have I done " he replied confused
"Don't you have manners
One should not peek into a girl's almirah"she chipped picking up the pack of her sanitary napkins and her inner garments and dumping them into the drawer
" i wont peek into your stuff At least I can keep my belongings inside " he replied embarrassed.
"I should have asked her 1st " he thought to himself.
"So here are the rules n conditions" she said handing him the paper .
It read.

( RULES AND CONDITIONS
1. You will stay at a distance of 1 meter and won't ever cross the line.
2. Breakfast and lunch is on you .
3.No interference my my personal matters.
4.you won't come home drunk ever you can drink here but not more thn 2 shots
5.I can ask you anything but you can't.
6.you ll laundry your clothes on your own.
7.No gals n boys I.e your friends allowed here
8.You got to behave properly with everyone in this society they are sophisticated people.
9.if someone will ask you who are you? Just don't tell them you are my husband
10.last but not the least you won't stay out late...
And it you ll it break the clauses you ll be straight away thrown out ...)

His mouth fell in a perfect O shape after reading the entire terms n conditions.
It was way beyond living in a hostel rather much worse but his current situation made him agree to all of them .he needed shelter n food and she was the only one who could help him out as the loss had made his own ppl curse him.They didn't even trust him anymore..
A lone tear tear escaped from his eyes which didn't got unnoticed by her.
"What happened to you .
Are the conditions too much for you " she asked
"No nothing like tht m fine with them".
He turned away and dashed inside the washroom .
Something stabbed her heart for being so cruel on him but then she brushed the thought away remembering what he has done to her an year back
She hasn't done anything to him yet he...
Everything had started falling into right places even though it was just for a month or so.
That lonely feeling had subsided from there hearts somehow in a single day of togetherness.
Will love grow between them in this month?...
Hope you like it
To be continued
#Simmy
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M overwhelmed as it my 1st on if n m loving it here
N a big thanks to Sam di who has helped me with the posting n pms
She has done a lot for me ...
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M overwhelmed with your response thank you so much guys...
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Edited by SimmyScribbles - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Res Unres.. Wah wah.. I so loved it. Mazza agya.. And those rules.. They were hilarious... Lol.. And his reaction.. He is so helpless right now.. Oh my my.. Am really looking fwd.. For what did i just see..?? Moi ko dedicate. What..?? Bola tha naa edit it.. Sunti Ni h .. Chalo ab koi naa. Love u sweety ❤️ Thanks for pm.. 🤣 Update soon. Bye..
Edited by samridhigoodiez - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Nice first part
Getting interesting
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
aweso rules...
very intrstng...
thnks fr pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey I just read ur ff prologue and the 1st part and I loved reading them I have sended u a buddy request if possible plz send me pm me when u update ur ff's next part:)
Love
Manal

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