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Posted: 10 years ago
superb story :) loving these updates
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly



PS- Arnav's son is called Mohan. I read a comment where the reader didliked the name. But I think maybe you named him after the famous actor Mohan. Are you a fan?


M, is there a connection why you named the kids as Meera and Mohan?
Meera is indeed said to be the biggest devotee of Mohan according to our scriptures. Is that the reason you named them like that.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aaahhh... Too painful !! Its always so difficult to relive the moments that you've had once with someone with that person not breathing the same air as you ... Its daunting...
Both of them wanted to know everything that happened in these 10 years in each others life but the appropriateness of questions were pulling their curiosity down... Thats uber natural..

Arnav's past though sounds interesting.. I know there will be a lot behind this cool and casual facade but till the time it is all out I'll be scratching my head.

With the kind of pain and grief that you have described for Khushi and her state of mind, I so wanted NK to be around.. Still alive... Thats a rare for me... "Khushi" and the "Face of loss" two oxymorons used here are very affective... You are too good with it !!!

You are doing a fabulous job with this story !!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
The little moments shared as a couple always creep up no matter how brave you are and how hard you are working on moving forward. With time, they will become less painful and may turn into good memories but you described her feelings bang on. She misses NK as a partner, a father and her companion who she has shared many moments with. The awkwardness of the 2 friends meeting again face to face was so palpable but it feels like Arnav knew exactly what to say to break that moment. He also seems to know her well. He goes directly to the point with NK's death as well just like a doctor would. What he ended doing was making her talk about NK and it sounds like she really needed to open up and let the pent up grief come out. Sometimes when you are trying to be brave for others (as in her kid and MIL), you may not have the chance to grieve yourself, to talk about your feelings and memories of that person. I think he did a brilliant job at that. Why is he here though? I know there was the conference and he heard about her loss but he is going beyond the courtesy call of paying his respects. Though he seemed to have had an amicable divorce, it feels like there is something else that is there? Is Mohan autistic? Is he looking for help from her for his son? I love how you are narrating this story with all the nuances of the past and present relationships, how people are coping with life and the hope that the end may not necessarily be the end. It can be a new beginning.
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Posted: 10 years ago
If an authors selection of names is anything to go by then with Meera and Mohan you are right up there on my list :):) I love all Krishna names (duh! ;))

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb one :) Strangers who shared intimacy indeed. Look how he made her open up about her deepest grief and how he knew of the thoughts she had. Even she could read the changes in his eyes, but couldn't ask about him... Really they once must have been very close and now strangers.. Did Arnav know NK? He told Meera that her father was not exactly his friend. Khushi doesn't know Maya at all. While we can see Khushi's past, Arnav is still a mystery, why is he here?
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Posted: 10 years ago
In this day and age of device driven conversations, it was so refreshing to read and relate to a regular old fashioned perfect conversation. The eye contact, the body language, the warming touch - you have done a splendid job just like our mystery Arnav 😊.

I am really enoying the time machine travel you are putting us through. Every memory of Khushi is taking us back, every conversation is keeping us in the present and all the dreams I am imagining is keeping me in the future.

Can't wait for your next update and really hoping that you will solve some of the mysteries of my fellow readers and my dreams.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Finally I have finished reading all three chapters. This story is highly recommended by my friends and it is really worth reading. I am in awe with the maturity of characters and the background of the story. I am dying to know what happened between Arnav & Kushi decade ago before they parted ways. Did they confess their feelings to each other or due to circumstances they got separated without letting know what they feel for each other? Does Meera or Mohan has ASD?

Thanks for the story.

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Posted: 10 years ago
its really very very nice update dear...the rush of emotions...the honesty with which kushi shared her pain...his son...everything is sketched well.thanks for the msg and waiting for the next one

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