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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

one more wonderful update

lunch convo wasnt as awkward as i xpected or as easy.. it was perfect..

how shud one react and openup to a person who was dear to u once and meet u after soo long

but seems arnav knew her well enuf to ask for the right questions...

now i started thinking of diff scenarios abt their marriages... they doesnt seem so simple...but will wait for u to unfold slowly

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

So far it seems to be a good meeting between them.

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Those small and sly memories that creep out of nowhere, and make you realise that you are left behind alone, those hurt more than the going away of the person!!!

Loved how they got back into the groove, this itself hints at a very close and comfortable relationship which they shared!!!

Looks like the longing is there for both of them!!

What had happened that they separated!!

Can actually feel those emotions of Khushi!!!!

Your updates are so moving always!!!

Great Job!!!

Take Care!!

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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Khushi and NK shared a very good bond and khushi is missing him la lot.

Arnav and. Maya although divorced are on cordial terms and together taking care of their son.

Who could have his ex wife and her husband s photo in his phone...this really is very intriguing

Arnav and khushi had an intimate relationship once ...what might have happened ?

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

That was a difficult conversation- to make the leap over the chasm of so many years from the point where their relationship had stopped over across the many events that have occurred in the intervening years - parenthood, the loss of a partner in Khushi's case,who seems to clear feel the loss of her husband very keenly, and a divorce, though seemingly amicable, in Arnav's case.

I am really intrigued to know why Khushi really wanted to meet him- just to know about his life or to test herself?

She is clearly in deep mourning, but I wonder what her grief is really for? For the death of someone so young or the loss of a good companion and friend or the loss of a man who was clearly a wonderful father to their child. Probably a mix of all three, but through it all runs a thread, very strong one, that has kept her linked to Arnav.

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Arilip

@Arilip

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Found the story hard to read ...but still good to read...

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manusmithcl

@manusmithcl

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Excellent diction. ..emotions depicted are perfect. . U r blessed girl. ..highly talented. ..can't wait for more. .

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Awesome chapter...after the initial awkwardness gone...Arnav's questions made khushi laugh and khushi's answers to them were awesome...they know each other well but ten years is too long and many things, habits change...there is so much to know about each other now...they are trying to catch up...Arnav is a single parent and it shows how much he loves his son...his ex-wife is already married after divorce and she is still friends with Arnav...loving this story...thanks for the PM

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

very nice story, very well written

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Loved how your portrayed their awkwardness and all,that...I can clearly picture this chapter in my head...I got a little tears eyed when they opened up about their fast...then asking each other questions was just adorable