Arshi FF:AFTER YOU:Chap 7 pg 42(23th March)

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Uzii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Mystery why she left him,I think this is something abt her health as she does not want him to suffer.

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ZANADI
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OMG Mini
you just brought me to tears.

This is too good. Really. You don't have to wory about your writing skills or anything else.

You are awesome.

The way AR fighted for his Doll was just amazing. I don't get now what the reason for her brake up was but my feeling is that she got one good reason and actually didn't want to brake the relationship.
I can guess what it is and this bring allready tears into my eyes.

Poor AR. I hope he is going to get his happyness in future.

Love it. Every bit of it. Update next part soon.

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Thank You so much Zana,

Hmmm... Her reasons... I just hope are good enough... coz this LOVE is just too hard to let go.

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Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: yoga123
Simply superb...thanks to ZANADI for recommending...

ThanQ... 😊

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

That was a great update... u did great describing about Arnav's thoughts and feelings as he lived thru his past... I feel for him...just wish he had known the exact reason for break up...

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yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Awesome chapter...thanks for the PM

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inamajar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

This was such a heart-wrenching story. Beautifully written!!

How he had given it his all and lost on his love whom he still misses. Did he get the answers

from her as to why she broke up. Though he has fallen in love with his Fiance but still he misses his

first love. Will he be able to move on with his Fiance who is giving him everything she

has. If his first love gave him answers were they valid enough.

Ah! looking forward to the last part!!

Edited by inamajar - 10 years ago

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nimko

@nimko

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

hey ...
it awesome and emational update too..
the beginning is like that means AWESOME then i don't what happen next ... ()
but i love it ...
plzzz update sooon ...
and thanks for PM ...