virman ss - saton janam tre sang part 1 updated 23/12

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sharmi

@sharmi1992

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

nice pt dear...plz try 2 translat hindi wrds into english coz i donno hindi n hope u ll consider my req not mistak me...bw plz tel me armaan n virat are same char r diff.sorry yaar i really confused tats y ...
tanq fr d pm dear n cont soon d nxt pt...

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Unres...

Wow a awesome start...
It was really good...
It was superrr...
Manvi was married...
Poor Manvi she has to live in aathasram...
Awww there is a friendship between Virman...
Awww Virat goes everynight to Manvi room...
Manvi knows about Virat feelings...
Poor Virman both died...
It was really sad but a awesome part...
I hope you update soon...
Thanks for the PM...

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panamaa

@panamaa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Awesome update dil.

Loved it.

First part was awesome of first janam.

Manvi condition was very poor as her husband was also not with him.

Dil u portray manvi pain very beautifully.

This badi masa was so cruel towads manvi.

Loved damini as she cared and loved manvi a lot like a mother.

Poor manvi has to live in ashram.

Loves virman part so much virat care and unconditional love towards manvi.

Letter was so heart touching.

Both virman died in this part.

Mindblowing whole update.

Now waiting for next part.

Marry christmas and advance happy new year dil.

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS MINDBLOWING START. BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN WHOLE PART AND IT WAS COMPLETE PACKAGE. FEEL REALLY BAD 4 MANVI WHO SUFFERED A LOT FIRST BECOZ OF HER HUSBAND WHO LEFT HER. SECONDLY BADI MASA WAS SO RUDE TOWARDS HER. THIRD SHE SUFFERED BECOZ OF DISEASE SHE HAD. DAMINI WAS REALLY VERY SWEET SASU MAA A MOTHERLY FIGURE WHO LOVED AND CARED MANVI A LOT. POOR MANVI HAD TO GO TO ASHRAM. VED CHARACTER IS ALSO VERY NYC AND POLITE. AWESOME VIRMAN SCENES WERE SO GUD. LOVED VIRAT CARE AND LOVE TOWARDS MANVI. FINALLY MANVI CAME TO KNOW ABOUT VIRAT FEELINGS BUT SHE LEFT. LAST PART WAS SO SAD WHERE VIRMANS DIED BUT DEAR U WROTE WHOLE UPDATE VERY BEAUTIFULLY . BUT PLZ CAREFUL NEXT TIME ABOUT MIXING RIDHIMA AND ARMAAN NAME WITH VIRAT AND MANVI. WAITING FOR NEXT PART DEAR SO PLZ UPDATE SOON.MARRY CHRITMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR IN A ADVANCE DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Outstanding start dear...
Past of virman was really hurting n sad ending...
But lv virman pure n selfless love for each other...
Egrly waiting for present ...
Thanks alot for pm dear
Keep rocking