AR/ARSH FF Sunn Leyna #2 Part 47 Pg 114 (26 Aug'17)

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

awesome.. Read it all in a go.. Loved it..

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

This is getting better and better..

Loving it..

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ritika malikk

@Yudkbhislove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

As you can guess i was busy toh mhuje koi idea nahi tha ki u updated ..abhi i will read par sorry comment toh badme millega

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

awsm part.
luvd it.
superb one
cont asap.
thnx for the pm
t.c..

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Iqbal_009

@Iqbal_009

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

superb update love it please update soon

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rihanna

@rihanna09

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Again a wonderful part...no words to say about this part and not to forget the fantastic writer ..I always say you write so beautifully and describe each and every emotions perfectly .

finally shilpa is ready to accept armaan. I am eagerly waiting for All the passionate moments Comming all the way. I don't know how long I have to wait for the next part...i cant wait more.. I am really dying to have all the updates right now .i m waiting for the arsh days without annanya atul anjali during their russian trip...plzzz continue soon...please update soon...

And yes I didn't receive your pms for this update though I am a regular active

reader...so do pm me the next time you update.

Edited by rihanna09 - 10 years ago

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

ok so finally humari 'nai' queen ne bata diya k muma is role model for all the nai's

armaan bechara ...shilpa bechari...shilpa ko armaan ne pareshan kar rakha hai...n armaan ko shilpa ne

yeah!! shilpa kept fast for armaan...wohooo

n armaan gave her a engagement ring,mangalsutra,and sindoor too...shilpa accepted them...yipeee

awesome part dear

loved it

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Hi!!! 🤗 😳

Remember me? The same girl who can't be punctual , Ever! 😔...

Nuksaan toh mera he hai , i miss out this amazing story 🤔...

Mai ne kabhi nai socha tha k Armaan kabhi aisa bhi kare ga 😳...

Like total changed banda 😲...

But i liked his way of showing Shilpa The-Bright-Side-Of-Life 😉...

N what i liked even more was his Guilt-List-Mein-Add-Karne-Wale-Guilt ☺️...

Like no wrong in doing that , Biwi hai , Haq hai 😳...

The point is k khandan mein se koi Mental Hospital kyun nai pohancha? 🤣...

Ahana-Ayaan : The Darlings , Atleast unme se ek toh hai...

Love their interaction with Shilpa 👍🏼...

Ahana kitne nakhre wali hai , Bilkul apni Mom pe gai hai 😉...

Latest chappy , mera fav hai , with all the closeness , more interaction n all 😃...

My sab se fav scene was 'The Ring' scene , how very chalak of Armaan to bring small size , Aj kal uska dimag over-time chal raha hai lagta hai 😆...

Then the emotions thing , Karun na karun? , Kiya toh kyun kiya? , i'm loving the way u describe them all ...

I just love each and every thing about this story , so different from others , So Great 👍🏼..

One of the best thing is that u make banner for all the parts , i like it 😃...

I hope to read more soon-ish! 😳...

N thanks for the PMs 😊

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madhuri

@soniaraheja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

first ring ..thn maglsutra...thts awesome...fabulous update...wow yrr armaan ..he did fantastic job..loved the way they both r behaving with each other...
love the way she is loving our hero...yr let her love him so mch..ek pal k liye b duurrr na jaa sake armaan se...i loved loved this update...waiting fr neext update...plz jaldi update kro...kab update krogi plzzz batao naaa...wait nai hota aaj kal ...plzzz

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Look whose hereee Sammm😎
seedhi baat no bakwaaas 😆update ke feedback ka to pata hee hai tumhe :P SUN LEYNA ko dedicate kardeee hai maine apni life🤣 uthte baithte sote jaagte bass tallan aur armaaan peecha nahi chorte mera😳 SISS I love u r such a grt writer :)

For me first comes the banner and it stands out yaar...ur merges r perfect hamesha bt this time it was beyond perfecttt :P

aur ab pesh hai ek khaaas gift for my one and only beloved

tallannn...uske tarif mein jitna kahu kum hai :@

yeh de dena usko taake apne sar pe maare aur phir mera kaha sune u knw wht Iam saying right😉😳
armaan to hero nahiii bad boy ban gaya hai...band bajaate bajaate bechare ki khudki band baj gayi hai...khaa jaegi isko tallan -_- abb uske peeche paro to problem aur na aproo to bhi kya kare koi :( acha kiya usne jo khunnas mein sindooor lagaa diya...mast scene laga mjhe woh😛
Iam a big fan of arsh bed scenes here :O misunderstand mt krooo :P cute scenes hote hai the way they hug and chipkooo😆and agey bhi wld love to read frm u :P
ring scene amazinggg...lotion lagaake kaun engaged hota hai...tum aur tumhre thoughts...🤣
Shower scene came out hot and decent :) I wishh for a change armaan na rokta apeaap ko to meri umr bhar ki wish poori hoti :@ aise naseeb kaha choroo now tallan will fight with herself and cme out khulkee...pyar ka ishaar hona baki hai bass jaldi karva dooo mujhse sabr nahi ho rha aur🤪
"Dekho!! tum hatto abhi... please.." Her life was in her throat... what if anyone would see this?? She can't bear it even behind the close door and here he was ready for a whole exhibition!! kaha se atey hai tumhe yeh dialogues...haste haste jaan jaegi meri sach mein😆😆😆😆
Tie scene undoubtedly mera fav hai...pagalkhane bhijvake chorega yeh hayeee ^_^

ahana aur ayaan ko bhej do mere paas...itne pyaare hai na 😳
dekho naya saal agaya mera comment ate ate...Happy New yr and hope update bhi jald ayega is saal mein :P
Keep writing and making my dreams come true😛
-Ladddooo