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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#381

Awww what sweet ending to a sweet story of love at first sight.😃

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#382

Smita di, u ended it so soon. It was such a cute and sweet story... And this song is perfect for One Rainy Night

Ik ladkee bhigee bhagee see, sotee rato me jagee see

Milee ik ajnabee se, koyee aage naa pichhe

Tum hee kaho yeh koyee bat hai hmm...- (2)

Dil hee dil me chalee jatee hain
Bighdee bighdee chalee aatee hain- (2)

Dundhalatee huwee balkhatee huwee, sawan key sunee rato me

Milee ik ajnabee se, koyee aage naa pichhe

Tum hee kaho yeh koyee bat hai

Hmm... ek ladkee bhigee bhagee see

Tan bhiga hai sar gila hai, usaka koyee pech bhee dhila hai - (2)

Tan ti jhuktee chaltee ruktee, niklee andheree rato me

Milee ik ajnabee se, koyee aage naa pichhe

Tum hee kaho yeh koyee bat hai

Hmm... ek ladkee bhigee bhagee see

Eagerly Waiting for the next one...

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#383

Smita, cant believe the story ended already. So Sanka devi found her Rajkumar afterall!!!!

This story was surely "Love at first sight in the rain".

Barsaat mein tumse milen hum sajan, humse mile tum, barsaat mein!!!!!

Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#384

oh its ended so quickly ...loved it so much

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#385

Such a cute and beautiful story

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#386

Chalo ek or kahani aaj end ho gyi. M going to miss dis story.

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#387

M eagrly waiting fr ur new concept.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#388

And he did not waste anytime in tying her to him. Buaji must be glad that someone else will put up with her Sanki niece. Elopement would have been nice too but of course barsaat main! Love it. Well done!