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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
very very nice and interesting.
love it. update asap.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Paravi

Very nice concept
Would love to read
Update ASAP
Love Janavi




Thank u so much janavi ..
vl try to update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

very very nice and interesting.

love it. update asap.😃





Thank u so much dear ..
vl try to update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Awesome start...;)
Waiting for the update!!
Update soon and thanks for the PM :)
Love
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Intresting ... Yrrr
Do continue
Do update 1st part
Nd thank you for p.m me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Honey-FLAB

Awesome start...;)
Waiting for the update!!
Update soon and thanks for the PM :)
Love
Anu





Thank u so much dear .
.vl try to update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: NRGANATRA

Intresting ... Yrrr
Do continue
Do update 1st part
Nd thank you for p.m me

Thank u so much dear ..vl try to update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
1st of all thank you to all those which commented on prologue 😃 ...
I am trying alot but due to shortage of time,typing nahi kar pa rahi ...
I am busy since morning .. message,calls,wall posts on fb,whatsapps p bday wishes ka rply karne mein ..
But now finally i got time ...
So here you go ... Do read,like and comment ..



PART - 1 CHILDHOOD FIGHTS


"Randhir, mein tere sath nahi khelne wali,itni zor se koi hath pakadta hai kya"- shouted a 12 years old sanyukta.

"Arey agar mein tera hath nahi pakadta aur tera hath choot jata toh hum log har jate na sanyu "- a 14 years old randhir said politely

"kitni bar bolun tujhe,mujhe sanyu mat bola kar,only my family & my near ones calls me sanyu,tere jaise bandar nahi"- sanyukta said irritatingly

"tu jitni bar bhi bol,i will call you sanyu only"- said randhir showing her his tounge.

"sanyu, randhir please tum dono ladna band karoge"- said an irritated parth

"kab se khade hokar tumhari ladai dekh rahe hai,parth u take randhir to your house and i will take sanyu to home"- said vidushi in an irritated voice.

"Tu mujhe kyun aise bol rahi hai,sari galati toh iski hai,tu toh mujhe hi bol rahi hai vidushi, mujhe pata hai,ab parth tera boyfriend hai toh tu iske best friend,is bandar ki hi side legi,tu meri behan nahi rahi ab tu parayi hogayi"- said sanyukta shkwing fake tears to take vidushi on her side

Vidushi wiped her tears and hugged her ...

"aisi koi baat nahi hai sanyu, my sweet heart sis, teri jagah koi nahi le sakta aur ye TERA BANDAR toh bilkul bhi nhi"- said vidushi stressing on word tera bandar and winking at randhir & parth .

Randhir & parth smilled,which wasn't noticed by sanyukta

"Sach mein,tu world ki best sister hai"- Said an innocent sanyukta flashing her 32 teeth and showing her tounge to randhir

Randhir smilled on her innocence.

"Chal ab ghar chalte hai,warna tera hittler bhayi Ankit chillayega hum dono pe"- vidushi said and took sanyukta inside home.

OUTSIDE




"This girl is crazy man,and innocent too"- said randhir blushing remembring vidushi's words Tera bandar

"Tu use bata kyun nahi deta apne dil ki baat"- parth asked

"Yaar wo kya khak samjhegi meri feelings ko,she is just a grl of 12 years .. bachi hai bilkul wo,she is just in 8th class ... and more over mein uski innocence khatam nahi karna chahta relationship ke chakkar mein"- said randhir smilling remembring her innocent face

"Yaar u can try at least,i don't think that she is that dumb"- said parth teasing randhir

"Parth tu please meri sanyu k bare mein aisa mat bol,you know na i can't tolerate a word about her"- said randhir in a pleading way

"Arey mazak kar raha tha mein toh,pata hai mujhe k tu apni saaannnyyyuuu k bare mein kuch nahi sun sakta"- said parth laughing ..

"Chal ab bohat hogya,ghar chal ab"- said randhir trying to save himself from parth's teasings

And then parth & randhir went to their homes .. thinking about their respective girls.



IN AGGARWAL'S HOME



"Tu itna kyun over react kar rahi thi,hath hi toh pakda hua tha usne,tera gala toh nahi daba dia tha, aur agar wo nahi pakadta hath toh tum dono hi har jate"- said vidushi making fun of sanyukta

"Arey yaar hath pakadne ki baat nahi,par wo ajeeb se way se hath pakadta hai,aur ajeeb way se meri taraf dekhta hai,acha nahi lagta mujhe"- said sanyukta seriously

"Tu bhi na sanyu, aise hi sochti rehti hai kuch bhi,bachpan se jante hai hum use,acha ladka hai wo"- said vidushi entring their room.

"tu ab uski side mat le,tu meri sis hai,uski nahi jo uski side le rahi hai"- said sanyukta looking herself in mirror

"Yaar tu na over react kart hai har baat par,randhir itni achi tarah se baat karta hai tujhse"- said vidushi threwing herself on bed.

"Yaar tu uski baat khatam kar ab,tune kal raat ko mere sone k baad parth se kya baat ki thi"- said sanyukta laying beside her

"Sanyu, tu abhi bachi hai,jitni batein tujhe sunni chahiye utni tujhe suna di thi,baki ki kuch mere liye bhi chorde"- said vidushi blushing

"Arey jab itni batein sun sakti hoon mein tum dono ki toh baki kyun nahi,aur i swear maine kisi ko nahi bataya k jab tu baat karti hai parth se toh mein bhi batein sunti hoon ek ear phone se"- said sanyukta out of cruosity

"chod na sanyu, please, band kar ab itni jasoosi kar rahi hai"- said vidushi

"Please please please bata de"- said sanyukta pleeding

"Tum dono padhayi nahi kar sakti .. jab dekhi gossip karti rehti ho"- said Ankit angrily

"Sorry bhayia,wo bas hum log padhayi hi start karne wale the"- said both vidushi & sanyukta

And then they started studing and ankit left ...





So guys,finally after so many troubles i posted ...
i did my work ... now its your turn to like & comment ...


p.s- for pms send me buddy request.
Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Thanks for pm
Happy birthday to you👏
Awesome update👏
Sanyu is so innocent 😊
Loved rd's behavior towards sanyu😊
Vidhusi & parth were good too
Update soon
Edited by katheriene - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Today is ur b'day
Happy b'day yr

The update was awsme
I so luved it
It was cute

Sandhir n vidharth awsme
Rd luvs sanyu bt he don't want to confess
Vidharth knows dat n they teases her

Bt sanyu don't lyk his behaviour
Ankit the Hitler

Wtng for next
Update asap

Luv u yr
Keep smiling

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