Betrayal - An Uncertain Future! Complete! Sequel Link on First Pg! - Page 10

Wow it was amazing chapter!
Loved your take on arshi's hate marriage.
I wish arnav wouldn't be foolish and khushi wouldn't be bechari in the show.
Do continue soon.

Fantastic Start!!!!

wow!! loved it...
one way its good that whole truth about sham was out to arnav...
cant wait to read the next...

superb story... waiting for the next update...

finally am here
woohooo man
wow i knew it
what kappa will ask
that this will be full of her twists turns shocks surprises and what not
yeh DM is this really ASR
nope this cant be ASR
abbey gaddhe agar khushi ne tujhe sochne pe majboor naa kiya hota toh you would have gone ahead and ruined both your lives
which he still did
once khushi family comes then tell them how you got married
no really married like you said
you do need pandit phere and another witness
so this is still not marriage
could he not have taken her to court and then marry her
hello the man has enough influence for them to be married that moment itself
parr bheja kaam kahan karta hai iinka
when he is angry
shame she didnt have the guts to knife him
but she sure used it to stop him by threatening herself
and he stopped
why not because he loves
but he didnt want to be responsible for her death
now what does that tell you about him
well that if you try you can make him see reason
so he knows how shyam met her
aur video clipping dikhao inki
you realise that you were kinda responsible for your dii house breaking down
kinda not completely
as peeps like that snake could have slipped on anyone else
shame it was khushi
bechari ki toh kismat phooti hai
one side you have lusting after her creep
and other ASR
what a place to be stuck in
but glad she made him see some sense
though they are allegedly still married
now the hell breaks loose when they go back
waise how can they throw arnav outta his house
last time i checked well hoped it was arnav house not anjali
and pray tell me what kind of family is raizadas
one hand they claim to be religious and upholder of customs
and yet have let their daughter i.e. anjali to stay back with her husband
instead of letting her settle down with her husband
not to forget about la
his live in girlfriend
they are such hypocrites i tell ya
sorry to say that but come on

very nice. could you please send me pms as you update

A different approach. liked it