A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago
Keep updating i am first time commenying but i read it full from start i join india forums yesterday that's why
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Posted: 10 years ago
heya ani and nabanita
sorry 4 not commenting on the previous chapter
really nice updates
i thot sharon wud leave
but thnku 4 making sharon stay
the way sharon understands her
responsibility is really gud
and swayam is soo understanding
the dance part was a pure bliss
the decent and protective swayam
the way he held her
the way she understands the situation
swayam too stands wid her
all were very well writtten
and the part whr swayam givs sharon his coat
he is sooo protective
small small changes are taking place
in their relationships and that too 4 gud
am sure the story ahead
will be rally very intersting
thnx 4 d pm
nic update update nxt part soon
will be waiting and do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update..
loved it..
excited fr next update..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

Thanks for longer update this time ^_^

The story is heading at good pace neither slow nor too fast ^_^
Love how Swayam show his care towards Sharon
The tie thing was so cute to read ^_^ and he arranged his color even :p
The cloth tore :( mishap was well written and you very nicely wrote swayam's apology and concern for the same

Keep writing and updating ^_^
Thanks :*


thanks a lot sanchi!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 12


They had a connecting flight to catch to return to Mumbai from Nainital via delhi... Swayam and Sharon were seating in the airport lounge ... while Sharon was calmly looking at the ground swayam was continuosly looking at the digital clock getting all impatient...

"still 3 hrs to go..." Swayam muttered... sharon didn't even look at him although she had clearly heard him...


"ummm...sharon... why don't you go and meet your parents??? They are here in delhi right???" swayam looked at her...

"yeah... they are here... but i don't need to go..." She replied without looking at him...

"are they coming here to see you???" he asled...

"no... they don't need to see me..." Swayam was taken aback by her answer... He didn't ask her anything else but Sharon continued...

"right from the childhood I have grown up alone... ispite of having parents I had to grow up alone... You know... mujhe kabhi kisi ne neend se nahi jagaya... mujhe khud alarm sun ke uthna parta tha...roj apne baal khud tie up karna school jane ke liye... Good morning bhi mujhe humesha yato driver uncle ya kaka bolte the... Ghar laut k khud akele table pe khana parta tha...aur fir so jana... Cause mere parents ko to business se fursat hi nahi tha na..." she kept on saying looking at her lap...

For the first time swayam had heard her express herself so openly... he didn't interrupt and quietly listened to her...

"mera koi bhai behen nahi hai... Pata hi nahi apno ka pyaar kya hota hai... isiliye mai Mumbai chali ayi... delhi mein ghutan hota tha... ye janne k baad bhi ki mere apne usi sheher mein hai fir bhi I was alone used to irk me... but yaha Mumbai mein sukun ata hai...anjan seher mein to sabh hi akele hai... Pata hai sir, mai galat thi... kabhi kabhi humein anjaan jagah mein hi khushi milti hai...mujhe meri khushi yahi mili... Rey k shadi mein for example... maine kabhi itni khushi mehsus hi nahi ki thi..yaha pe at least I have people to talk to...rey taani... office mein sab... maria... Aap..." She immediately stopped realizing what she had ended up saying...

Swayam didn't mind it at all... now Sharon was a bit more clear for him... he suddenly remembered that he had seen her cry in the car when she heard the RJ talk about bonding with family...

He so wanted her to pour out all the piled up hurt from her heart...

"wooo sorry... Mai bhi kab se bole jaa rahi hoon..." his reverie was broken by her voice... He focused on her face to find her a bit embarassed...

"its cool...hota hai aisa..." He smiled at her...

Sharon smiled back at him when they heard a huge scream...

"SURPRISEEE!!!!!!!!!!!" swayam and sharon looked up to see three girls standing near them... While sharon's face turned into a bright grin swayam looked at them as if he had seen some alien shouting and screaming in the middle of the airport...

"gunjan , shilpa , lavanya... OH MY GAAAWWWD..." Swayam heard another scream and looked at sharon to find her missing... he looked back at the girls and found sharon with them... Four of them were hugging the hell out olf each other jumping in excitement in the middle of the airport...

"cracked hai..." Swayam chuckled seeing them...

Shilpa , gunjan and lavanya were sharon's kinder garden friends... they were the inseperable four throughout their school life and even after that...

"ye to kamal ka surprise hai yaar..." sharon gave them a huge grin once their jumping show was over...

"wo sab chor... I am not talking to you!!!!! Itna cute aur handsome larka pata liya aur humein bataya nahi...humein nahi bola????" shilpa said dramatically...

"exactly yaar...choice to tera bohut accha hai..." gunjan winked at her... sharon immediately looked back to see whether swayam had heard them or not...to her relief she found the seat empty which meant swayam has gone somewhere...

"kya bakwas kar rahi hai... wo swayam si..." Before she could complete lavanya teased...

"swayam ... Haaa... Nice name..." lavanya elbowed her...

"waise hum jab aye yaha koi to kisi ke ankhon mein lost tha..." gunjan teased her...

"shut up... wo swayam SIR hai... Mai unke company mein kaam karti hoon..." she finally clarified...

"good for us... Chalo beta lag jao..itna cute hai yaar... ek chance le lete hai...shayad hum teeno mein se kisi ko pasand kar le..." shilpa laughed...

Sharon also broke into a feat pf laughter...

They cahtted for almost an hour standing there and finally they were about to leave... sharon hugged them and they turned to leave... Sharon also turned to go to the seat and found swayam seated there now...

" waise shadi mein bulana..." shilpa turned back and shouted... sharon looked back mouthed,... "thaappaad khayegi..."

Swayam smiled because he had seen her friend talk to sharon about her shadi eyeing him... so he understood that they were teasing her with him...

Sharon finally came back and sat beside him... "wo mere friends hai..." sharon said...

"kisiko bhi pata chal jata... tumhari tarah hi cracked hai..." sharon gave him a disgusted look...

"waise ye tumhare liye..." Swayam gave her a box...

"ye kya hai????" sharon asked while taking it...

"dekh lo..." He said casually...

Sharon opened the box to find it full of chocolate...

"OH MY GOD..." sharon beamed in joy... Swayam gave her an amused look...

"wo taani says ki jab pareshani ho to chocolate khani chahiye... Tum thodi der pehele... Umm... so I thought..." he pressed his lips...

"thik hi to keheti hai..." Sharon said , her mouth already full of chocolate...

"array aram se... mai chin nahi lunga..." Before swayam could finish he heard sharon cough...

"freak..." he immediately took out the bottle from the side of his backpack and help it in her mouth...

"drink this... aram se..." he held her shoulder making her drink the water...

Soon sharon calmed down and looked at him... She was almost in his arms whith their faces barely some cm apart...swayam left her awkwardly while she muttered a soft thanks'...both looking in opposite directions...


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LOVE ANI N NABANITA

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Posted: 10 years ago
great update..
finally sharon ne sab kuch bola..
liked sharon n her frnds part..they teasing her n swayam calling them cracked😆
swayam gave her chocolates..aww..hw sweet..loved that...he is so cute..❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chocolate part was sweet :)
Finally sharon spoke up
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update!!!
Chocolate part was awsum
Swayam concern for her...mking her drink water n calm down her:-)
Liked it...sharon spoke abut her childhood , abut her parents NICE
Thank uh for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
As I said earlier the pace of story making it more special in rush no slowness ^_^ and the changes are great
Aaah finally she opened up _/\_ that description was so emotionally emotilnally written koi mujhe subah nhi uthata tha akela table par khana, that connected to her state of mind
:p so Swayam heard Sharon being teased by her friends by his name :p and he din mind being but smiled :3
Did I tell u I can't wait to read further :(

Update soonishhh
Love u both for this FF ^_^
Stay blessed
Thanks
Edited by sanchiswaron - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This chapter was nice
Finally sharon opened in front of swayam
and their bond is developing i liked it
And sharon's friend was fun
thanks for the pm
do update soon

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