A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 27

Originally posted by: vrushan143

nice update but y so so so small part, liked d way swayam consolled sharon i was expecting one hug of each other while der conversation . its okay plz update next part little long yaar

Originally posted by: i_yatharthk

ittu sa update tha yaar yeh to...but koi nahi...

swayam ka consolation to sharon...

nice that u didn't give any hug of them...unke char. waise nahi lagte ki vo hug kare...

sharon being a head strong girl and him too the same...

yeh update toh chota de diya but agla update bada chahiye...

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

I wanna read more of it :( endless updates of it

I really appreciate ur writing in this particular update

Swayam's state of mind was very well defined how confused he was with his words and feeling and after yelling at him which he din want he finally decided to have a word with Sharon

Surly his words were soothing for the girl who needed a support :( who need someone by her side

'Mein kuch nhi hinge dunga' ^_^ a step further he has started to care and protect her ^_^

Will Sharon go :o won't he ?? Isn't the deal thing over so why will he stay ?? Sorry bit confused

Thanks for update ^_^

Keep writing 😃

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update dear
awww d way he console her
i loved it

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

superb update... concerned swayam 😳 ... plz update soon... 😃

Originally posted by: avya98

This was awesome

The both of u truly rock

In love with the ff

Update soon !!!!!!!

Originally posted by: 8085548022

It was good

swayam's concern for sharon was shown nicely

but atleast there could be a hug

U are taking this ss too slow i guess

they had started feeling for each other though

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

What The HELL DIDU!!!
Itna chota partt!! *pout*
hayee par fir bhi it was mast!
Kya kahu, kya karuu!!!
Meri di hai hi mahaan writer!!!
Kya likha hai diduuu!
Beautifully penned down!

Swayam's blamings...
his insults..
Sharons feelings ..*sigh*
Lovely!!
Fir Swayam cursing...
damn u!!!! heeh
Mast tha diduuU!
Fir woh consoling..
how perfect can it be..
woh words.. woh sentences
just magnifiquee diduu!
FABULOUS!
Dil chu diya diduuu!!

Hehe!
Loved loved loved it!
Love u moreee

PAR AB UPDATE!!
Aur am back EQUALS to jaldi updates!
Samjhe!!?

Love,
Restless
(ONLY MY NAME!)

Originally posted by: ujwalv

so small update..bt loved it..😊

it was very well written..

starting part was unexpected..the way swayam behaved..

bt later consoling part was nice..

hope sharon wapas nahi jayegi..

Originally posted by: vishalfool

nice update...