Taayam FF:THE PAST UNTURNED(chapter 7up page 36 #pm later)

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Diya

@foreverlazy

Dazzler

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

ya Sanvi they are my favourite b8ut you know i want a flirting character and i really have no plans to fix Sanju with Varun plus Parth is more of Manik to me then Prithvi now

I love Sanvi!!!

Aw... Rohan then?

I don't know. I think Prithvi will always be a bigger part of my heart than Manik. People who don't know about Prithvi would be shocked to see their Manik in such a chocolate boy type of role.

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Diya

@foreverlazy

Dazzler

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

ya you are my inspiration
and will always be
excited i know even i am
annoy 😆😆😆

Aw... that's so sweet!

Then stop annoying us woman!

It's not funny, this serious business.

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Diya

@foreverlazy

Dazzler

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

i never wanted to make it abusive because this isn't a mature story
line of the year wow that's a big time i feel like crying in happiness
i have more Taarey fans but you know what in that chapter i guess Ranveer gained more attention
lovey dovey in this story
does it even makes sense???
when everything is so bad and you struggle to live and beg for forgiveness and peace you romence happily seriously???
that is something i feel myself lame
and when i don't like things myself i really don't feel it capable for others to read
ya i will put scenes but not totally lovey dovey
same goes with Swaron no lovey dovey

Yeah, I get where you're coming from. But there are just people who find abusive relationships to be hot, especially on this forum, but that's not cool.

Ranveer has a bigger fanbase than all of them. 😆

Lovey-dovey is okay in my opinion because it adds a sort of freshness after tears and angst. But lots of lovey-dovey fluff is pretty sickening. And I for one can't write romantic scenes to save my life, so people always complain about that.

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Diya

@foreverlazy

Dazzler

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

i'll try on Vishakha i may bring her if that changes can be made in the plot
but atleast not right now
just bringing and dumping everyone practically makes no sense
you can assume their reaction they will hate Taayam
and devil i don't know your reason but ya he is a devil

I get where you're coming from here.

Devil because he's just an awful person.

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Diya

@foreverlazy

Dazzler

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

May that would remain a may
ok i don't know dear i have plans but you know things sometimes change
if i don't do this to them then dear what is the use of this story???
plotting destroying this is his beat
Sneha Kapoor ya i did mention but i did alot of changes in the plot after that so she is not there in the story and Karan Wahi is my favourite so Rohan is Karan Wahi
ya i love creating devils

Tell me!

All right, all right. Torture Taani and Swayam.

Again, DEVIL!

Cool... Karan Wahi... Is he with Kriya?

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Shrisha

@...Shrisha...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: White_Flower

I love Sanvi!!!
Aw... Rohan then?
I don't know. I think Prithvi will always be a bigger part of my heart than Manik. People who don't know about Prithvi would be shocked to see their Manik in such a chocolate boy type of role.

no dear Rohan won't be with Sanju they are besties i have no plans to fix anyone with anyone right now lets see i do wanted to do something like that but i'll do that only when people start excepting them too here people aren't still totally ready to accept Taayam and adding them might cause me lose readers but atleast at the end i will fix out the singles but till then keep thinking who goes with him. and ya i loved the chocolate boy Prithvi that was the reason i started watching KYY and you know i love the Manik character but for Parth i love him more as Prithvi then Manik but i love the character Manik more than Prithvi Manik is really a strong character and a intense lower like me would love more of Manik ofcourse. i don't even know the lowers of Manan even know Prithvi ever existed both were two contrary characters and Parth was really fabulous in both

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Shrisha

@...Shrisha...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: White_Flower

Aw... that's so sweet!
Then stop annoying us woman!
It's not funny, this serious business.

hey Diya i am sill 16 don't snatch the girl tag from me

and untill annoying is healthy everything is fair

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Shrisha

@...Shrisha...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: White_Flower

Yeah, I get where you're coming from. But there are just people who find abusive relationships to be hot, especially on this forum, but that's not cool.
Ranveer has a bigger fanbase than all of them. 😆
Lovey-dovey is okay in my opinion because it adds a sort of freshness after tears and angst. But lots of lovey-dovey fluff is pretty sickening. And I for one can't write romantic scenes to save my life, so people always complain about that.

ya right in no sense is abusive relationships are hot and i really believe that when you write something strong atleast the entire chapter should be strong or atleast if you have started it strong end it the way it was you know there i showed Ranveer as a villain and if in the end i showed Taani in a innocent loving way then i don't thing the chapter would have made any sense it works when you start in a good way and end up with a fight or hurt but vice versa for me no ya after hurt in the same chapter if things are solved its ok but two different situations two different places two different people totally a big no that's what makes me love your story you give the reader what they want having grammer mistakes and then those great message words in the story it takes practically an hour to read and understand what the writer actually wants to say and at the end we are just wasting readers

Ranveer go my Ranveer just don't create another fighting fanbase in this forum Kriyaansh and Taarey are enough😆😆😆

ya lovey dovey is ok but as i said little too much really feels as if this is not a real life connected story but some fantasy with probably the fact that you know what the next chapter is going to be

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Shrisha

@...Shrisha...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: White_Flower

I get where you're coming from here.
Devil because he's just an awful person.

ok let me say it he is much more than awful

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Shrisha

@...Shrisha...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: White_Flower

Tell me!
All right, all right. Torture Taani and Swayam.
Again, DEVIL!
Cool... Karan Wahi... Is he with Kriya?

it fun to tourcher them😉

Karan Wahi and Shakti will make a good couple isn't end but as i said wait till the end or if people start accepting

but ya unlike all other stories in TR in no ways i am making Kria Shivam a couple god i am fed up even Kriya needs a change right

but you know what Diya i started this story much before Lavin Sneha got married and at that time i had all plans to fix those two you know somewhere i did found them a good couple on screen too.