Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I) - Page 80

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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all the chapters in one go and have to say it was such a pleasure reading this piece of work
Ok first of all i really loved the way you have narrated the story! Such an amazing narration! I am a huge fan of writers who convey maximum with minimum words! N you do exactly that! Every word, every sentence is so well thought of n fits in to the scene, in the story so well! I am already in love with your writing!!

Coming to the story! Well you give me Arnav khushi story you give Delhi , you give me schools with snobs, you give me my beloved DU , north campus with BA(h) economics and almost making Arnav my senior ,you send be back down the memory lane with subjects, colleges, calculus ,you give me cp n other places and how can i not fall in love with this story!!! At so many places i can so relate with people places situations that it makes it an even more interesting read!!
In this story i feel there is only one hero and that is khushi!! This is one of those stories where khushi has completely overshadowed arnav! N have to say you have rather made her life a hell! Since the time she has joined New Horizons , she had had nothing but problems! It definitely didnt bring any "new horizons" rather it was more like " the end"school for her which made her life miserable!!
Arnav , i dont know! I still havent been able to understand him. Like nothing abt him has come across very clearly. I mean yes he is brilliant and all but i dont understand his need to marry payal? That too why is he settling for so less? I guess i should withhold my judgement and wait as his character develops more.
And yes i love both akash n Nk! Both are unique in their own way.

There are many things that we dont know like what happened between lavanya n khushi, what Poonam raizada did to khushi and why? The mystery over aman and many other things!!

Needless to say am eagerly waiting for the next part! A big thanks to ky friend Amus who recommended this story to me! I havent read any new story since past eight months and had practically left forum being inactive these past 6-7 months but this story really brought me back!!!
Waiting to see what arnav has bought for khushi!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Your writing is just mind blowing 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sman



Kavi, dimag thand rakho..woh bechara overtime kaam kar raha hai..
btw "but they also had the ability to only see what they wanted to." made me wonder what did Akash mean..his mom knows he is gay but still wants to fix him with Kushi or she knows Kushi is just a friend and still hinting at their pair..kuch bhi ho sakta hai..Radhika will throw a googley at us


Actually it was Semanti who put this idea in my head in one of her earlier comments.

Also if you see, he was always more friendlier with girls. Its like his thoughts were insync with the girl's thoughts. And today when his parents stressed the word "Really", maybe they are telling him that a girl can give him that kind of love and companionship which a guy cannot.

So I rest my theory in front of Radhika and will wait for the answers in the coming updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chapter...I am happy that the Raizadas have not completely ruined khushi...she is working somewhere in addition to maintaining the sweet shop...her mother is in touch with her but her father is not in speaking terms with her...liked NK...he is typical NK...he understood that Arnav is interested in Khushi and it is true that all the Raizadas are obsessed of Khushi...now everyone is trying to help her in some way or the other...Aman is also in search of Khushi...can't wait to see the reunion of all the friends...Have a wonderful vacation...Happy New Year in advance...
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Posted: 10 years ago
First...Very happy to know that both your "boys" are doing fine!!
Second...have a wonderful holiday!!

Chapter...
Fabulous update!!
You have my head reeling with the thoughts of each character.
My fav..

"Yes. She saved Chachu's life, who was fond of her. Chachi got her thrown out of college. She has Friendzoned Aakash for life. I am pursuing her. You want to hire her as the caterer for your wedding. Di has decided that this girl will be her new project. And Jun Jeeju wants to protect the girl from all of us."

Looking forward to more details of the wrongs done to Khushi by the Raizadas.

Arnav has an "envelope" for Khushi...hmmm.

Aman - Friend or foe?? How does he know where Khushi worked??

More later...need to read again. 😊
Edited by IsisMoon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This update needs this song - Jaya Prada among what I presume are Banarsi saris.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q8FaYv0oKcI[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by asmanichatri - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
NK is so perceptive...hmmm...what's in the envelope...I think Aman is interested in Khushi still...looking forward to Arnav Khushi meet...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey YB,
Thank you for this wonderful update and making my b'day special...
So..the plot is getting thicker with focus shifting towards Khushi and Chandini Chowk and Tiwari and Sons...
Highlight will have to be Aman looking for Khushi and Payal begrudgingly respecting Khushi...
I am so happy Khushi did not leave out on her sports completely...When she had to drop out of college and was hurt badly, she used her main talents to lift herself up...namely cooking sweets and sports..
Still what is Aman upto..? why is he searching for Khushi..? Did something happen at the after exam treat..? why did he not contact Arnav..? Will he attend Lavanya's wedding too...? It would be absolute fireworks if he would..

One thing is sure, Khushi has no romantic inclination towards Akash and he knows it well...so where will Anjali's project and Akash mom's really liking lead too.., not to forget NK already comitting himself to Khushi😆...called Khushi Arnav's Bhabhi...👏 Where does Aman fit in this..? Arnav doesn't seem to be bothered about Aman search for Khushi or NK addressing Khushi as his Bhabhi..? True to your words..this whole web is really making me wonder how are you going to pull ARSHI pair up together...?

With Samar Singh and politics entering the already complicated and struggling Khushi's life..seems her troubles are not ending anytime soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...just finished devouring the latest update!!!!!
I found the 'No Gifts' and what does it really mean concept hilarious. Also loved the Clan group thread that Arnav left and Payal is wondering if she should join or not 🤣.

I am also falling in love with NK...the man clearly sees thru all the superficial trappings and zones in on the crux of the matter. The paragraph below totally nails the Raizada and Khushi equation.

"Yes. She saved Chachu's life, who was fond of her. Chachi got her thrown out of college. She has Friendzoned Aakash for life. I am pursuing her. You want to hire her as the caterer for your wedding. Di has decided that this girl will be her new project. And Jun Jeeju wants to protect the girl from all of us."

In addition to Raizada's happening to Khushi, there was the little matter of Tiwari and Sons and Arrival of Renu Bhabhi and Aarav. shashi has pulled away from the family...not only Khushi. The conversation between Khushi and her mom revealed the underlying rift in her life and I want to blame it on the Raizada's but may be there are other guilty people too.

Looking forward to someone wishing Khushi a happy birthday.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am going to buy a separate Field-Notes Book just for this story. It will have two columns - things we know and things we still don't 😆

Now we know for sure that Aarav is Shyam's son (or do we?) but we don't know where Shyam is

Khushi is now with St Joseph's the key rival of Alchemy the college that she had to leave with less than stellar reputation. Haha. Atta girl!

Payal now respects Khushi, which is probably more feeling than she has for Arnav 😆

While I absolutely support a woman retaining her maiden name after marrying, I think we can all agree that Payal should be Payal Singh Raizada after marriage to help Arnav remember her middle name

Anjali is funny. As is NK. And Anjali + Arnav and NK + Arnav have genuinely fun interactions. Maybe you should do one chapter from NK's POV seeing that he seems to know everything.

Aman, I repeat this, stay away from my Khushi. Auuugh.

Mothers were such an important part of this update. Poonam Raizada, Garima Gupta, Seema Malik, Anita Chawla, NK's Mom - I like how you use one theme in each story. Like the whole gift thing here.

I disagree with NK. Arnav is an excellent buyer of gifts. His present for Lavanya as Anita Chawla would say is 'first class' But I might need to reconsider depending on what he has got for Khushi. A gift in an envelope.. that could go any way
Cash - bad idea
Blank cheque - NOOO
Groupon Coupons - honestly I would appreciate this, but not sure about Khushi
A typewritten, double-spaced apology note - gets my approval
A handwritten, perfumed note (been watching Sadqay Tumhaare.. it is okay if you don't know what that is) - mad props

Love how the "Akash must be gay" theory is on an overdrive now. See this is what happens when you write a genuinely good, smart and charming guy - he just cannot be straight

Why would we be mad at you for this update? Ah yes, the cliffhanger. Nah, now we are used to it 😛 Besides you somehow tricked us by writing a chapter with all these little revelations that it almost seemed complete.

Can't wait to read the next chapter, Khushi in a red sari, two boys with gifts for her and what I imagine will be the first pallu drop rabba vey!

Wishing a lovely New Year to you and yours 😊
Edited by asmanichatri - 10 years ago

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