Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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Asma

@asmanichatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#491

Shayad meri shaadi ka khayal dil mein aaya hai, issi liye papa ne mere tumhe chai pe bulaya hai 😆
How a story changes based on who narrates it! More later.

Edited by asmanichatri - 10 years ago

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 10 years ago

#492

Okay you did not reveal till the end lol!!! Hmm I have to wait for one more update to get the real reason behind Arshi situation now.

Loved the update, please update soon Radhika!!!!!!

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#493

Oh f**king hell! (Excuse my French.)

Grave error matlab?

How can Arnav's absence be a grave error? Is this when Poonam does whatever she did that made Khushi leave college? But then, that doesn't give Arnav or Lavanya enough time to get into any sort of altercation with her.

Or do they manage to do that even without Khushi attending the same college?

Is Arnav guilty in the present merely because he excused himself that day? Or did he do something concrete to warrant all this guilt?

Have you ever read Expelliarmus? Did you know that you two could be twins as far as cliff-hangers are concerned?

All this never-ending suspense will kill me only.

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: kclovearshi

But you surely disappointed Semanti by not pairing him with La 😳

Nah, I'm cool. 😆

Two neurotic people in a relationship would really suck.

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Also, I cannot even with how juvenile-teenage-boy Arnav is about this little fascination.

Uff. What is most infuriating is ki most boys his age are like this.

If there are any 18 year old girls reading this story and my comment, never date a college boy. They will have flashes of maturity and occasional epiphanies and will mean to do what is best.

But mostly, they'll be idiots. Pfft.

(But full points to you, YB, for the one-way mirror moment and the awkward hug in the sweet shop. Full of sweet uncertainty and a longing for something indefinable.)

This story is such an intelligent and realistic take on class issues among 'educated', big-city folk, along with being such a fabulous reading of Delhi and its people.

P.S. If you are not a halwai, how do you know so much about making sweets? Is it just Google? It has somehow never occurred to me to Google 'How to make the perfect kalakand.'

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swtsam

@swtsam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#496

awesome loved it...cant wait to read more..
plzzz pm me ur updtes...waiting..

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inamajar

@inamajar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Beautifully written. There is a melancholy feel in every update. Why is it?

It still left a sad feeling to the over all situation though it is Khushi who has been & put through all the tough hand life has shown her. Why was it no one stood up for Khushi. She has always kept away or been helpful to whomever have been around her. She saved a life, instead life dealt her with tough choices.

Should not have Arnav been home, after having heard what his Mother had to say when it concerned Khushi. He knowing Khushi's over all situation should have been the one to at least shield her from his mother's wrath.

Still hoping Khushi had managed to finish up college earlier & was continuing with something else at the Univ. But Going by the statement of Anjali, if her mother was responsible for ensuring Khushi was thrown out of college, were was Arnav's Dad's voice to protect the Girl who ensured He lived. Disheartening that people misuse their money power and half the time it is not noticed. Why did not at least Anjali & Aakash help her out? 😒 Why was it none of them bothered to keep in touch to ensure she was alright later on but for Aakash, who has been abroad most of the time.

Ah! Craving for Answers to so many Questions left hanging and the need to know more sooner as to how Khushi came out of this, as a strong person she is today. Hopefully this time around the New ons will behave well as and when they meet her, just like Arnav has started to try to make amends.

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#498

i know money do everything in this world..it gives respect, luxury of life and security...it gives everything but PEACE OF MIND...

well written about Delhi, in each and every chapter the way u r describing about delhi is vey beautiful...and one more thing regarding sweets oh man...i guess u r a very good cook 😛😛😛😛😛...

arnav and akash bonding is good...anjali i love the way she is carefree and simple...arnav is very confusing person as of now...

may be arnavs mother insults them, regarding arnav consoles kushi na at sweet shop, she thinks kushi is using arnav's father situation...something like that😉😉😉😉😉😉...

i will sto my imaginations and wait for the next chapter ...

thnaks for the lovely chapter...

cheers..

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#499

I like tough women, but liking Poonam Raizada or even trying to be neutral about her until she rains hell in K's life is becoming very difficult!

Arnav is so very real! He's a regular guy with his own shortcomings & regrets! I like that!

Khushi-Oh, I like her more & more with each chapter! She's wonderfully normal! She's just so regular! No eccentricities! I like that!

Anjali-She's been consistently likeable from the very beginning! And, I like her even more for telling her mother to drop the bitchy attitude!

So, basically, Mrs. Raizada does something during that evening tea, that, probably changes K's life, unimaginably?

I like Aakash! And, a part of me is still rooting for Aakash-Khushi!

Oh, Mrs. Raizada is turning out to be the character that causes some major plot twists, here! She's, definitely the one that's most calculative, there, from whatever has been told so far, at least!

Another interesting chapter, Radhika! I don't know how you do it! But, you outdo yourself with each chapter! You tease your readers with information, bits & pieces! And, you do it so brilliantly, that nobody even wants to complain! It's amazing!