'Misunderstanding never END' [ PART 14 UPDATED ] [ COMPLETED - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

interesting story di
plz part 2 soon


ya sure dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: simplyprecious

hey thats really good😊😊😊

plz do continue


ya sure i will continue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: shivika838

hey , gr8 start !! it is surely going to be interesting 👏

waiting 4 next part eagerly 😊


posting in few min...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update loved it 👏⭐️😳


thnku so much for comment...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: anuja78

plz continue...
I want to see randhir in sanyu's room...
hehehe


😉 u naughty...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Hey sry for late rpl actully my exams are going on so...

Abt ur update awesome start continue soon!!!!


THNKU I WILL CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Misunderstanding never END" - PART - 2 :


if u like my story plz share ur view its help me to improve my imagination..it is first time..so mistak hoto maf kr dena...

Parth kostuki or vidushi ko call krta he n jiggi or yoyo randhir ko dhundh rhe he Sanyu k room me andhera he n wo bed pe so leti hui he n radhir k bare me soch rhi he Suddenly randhir sanyu k bed pe kudk sanyu k hath pakd leta he..

S- randhir tum yaha kya kr rhe ho...6ii randhir tumne sarab pi he..

R- tumne kaha tha me apne dad jesa hu to ab me dikhauga

S-let me go..mere upar se hato..muje hurt ho rha he R(remind that slap..very angry ) n tightly hold her n she try bt randhir ko hata ni pati n randhir kissed her ..sanyu khudko 6udane ki koshis krtihe bt she can't n then she also kiss him dono control kho dete he ek dushre ko kiss krte he...sanyu randhir ko jor se pakadti he ushse randhir ko usk nakhun lagte he randhir or tighty use kiss krta he n fir sanyu ka fon bajta he it was parth who call her wo dono ek dushre ko 6odte he randhir chala jata he..

Sanyu picup the phone

P- sayunkta jaldi se leb me aao Sanyu jaldi leb jati he vaha kostuki n vidushi bhi hoti he.

V- parth ab to sanyukta bhi aagai bolo hum sabko q bulya he. P(randhir k phon me recording sunata he)

S- ye sab tumne kiya vidushi or mene to randir ko shit!

V- wt rubbish tum sab pagal ho n she lefts

P- tumhe RD se mafi mangni chahye..kostuki agree with him n they all left.. Sanyu puri rat so ni pati wo slap n kiss ka flash back sab yad krti he n she feel gulty Subha randhir uth ta he

RD- aahh mera sar rat ka hangover gya ni n (use bhi ratka flash back aata he) shit ye mene kya kiya he also feel guilty..

Jiggi- randhir bhai ap ratko kaha gye the humne apko kaha kaha ni dhunda... RD remove his shirt n jiggi ne dekha randhir k sholder pe chot lagi he..

Jiggi- randhir bhai ye chot kese lagi Randhir ko kiss yad aata he n sanyu k nakhun se lagi chot yad aati he

R- wo ese he tuje kya. Randhir smile krta he n fir muje sanyu se mafi mangni chahye... Dusri taraf sanyu bhi randhir k liye gift lene jati he. Sanyu to herself Mr.shadu k liye kya lu ku6 samj ni aarha ek to use ese hi sorry ni bol sakti galti badi he...fir wo card leti he mast rose vala...wo randhir ko dhundh rhi he n suddenly parth se takrati he

P- sanyukta ye gift???

S- tumhare liye Randhir ye sun leta he gusse me vapas chala jata he( ye ladki meri mafi k layak ni he)

P- sanyukta?

S- mazak kr rhi thi sadu k liye layi hu sorry bolna he

P- hmmm card n gift??

S- (blushing ) parth me sirf sorry bolne k liye layi hu.

P- to mene kaha ku6 kaha..

Sanyu randhir k pass jati randhir chillata..

Rd- get lost don't disturb me..

S- bt randhir me to..

Rd- I said go u bimbo

S- mind ur tunk

R- oh ab tum muje sikhaogi kya bolna he..

S- u don't deserve my sorry

R- to jao na apni sadi si rondu si sakal leke parth k pass S(card or gift dustbin me fek k chali jati he n randhir bhi.. Parth undono ko ladte dekh leta he n usk mind me ek plan aata he...

parth room me jata he n

P- are randhir vardhan sir ne tumhe library me bulaya he

R- itni rat ko

P- koi kam hoga jo sirf tum kr sakte ho sayad isliye

R( with attitude) - ha unhe pata he k me kis layak hu.. Fir parth sanyu ko msg krta he muje abhi library me milo urgent he..

Randhir library me hota he n sanyu aati he

S- tum yaha kya kr rhe ho

R- tum mere pi6 pi6 yaha bhi aagai.

Parth door bahar se bandh kr deta he..randhir n sanyu door kholne ki koshis krte he bt parth chala jata he..

S- kaha fas gai me ye sadu k sath R- kya kaha tumne..sadu?? Isliye mere liye gift layi thi

S- wo... tt..oo...me...sorry kehna chahti thi bt u don't desrve it..

R- achcha...(sanyu k close jata he) me deserve ni krtA

S- pi6e jao randhir...age mat badho

R- q tumhe to pasnd he na

S- wt rubbish...

R- agar rubbish he to rokti q ni..sach to ye he k me ku6 bhi kru tum muje ni rokogi...randhir hold her both hand n come very close to her..donok lips 1 inch k duri pe he sanyu aakhe bandh krti he...garam saanshein chal rhi he dono ki...

Randhir n sanyu is so close garam saansein chal rhi he sanyu ki aakein bandh he...

so romntic n nearly kiss hone vali hoti he k suddenly randhir saw chipkali n chillata he chipkali

S-(open her eyes) tumhe me chipkali lagti hu

R- no stupid vaha dekho chikali(he is scard)

S- tum chipkali se darte ho..hahaha Mr.Randhir Singh shekhavt ek choti chipkali se darta he

R(with attitude)- darta ni hu bas ghin aati he plz ise hatao sanyukta

S- gai wo ab wo bhi tumse bore hok chali gai..

Sanyu book k case pe hath rkhti he n table se talrati he sari books uspe girne vali hoti he k randhir bichme aajata he...case girta he.. Sanyu niche usk upar randhir n randhir k upar heavy case...

S- hato mere upar se..she try bt wo case bhari he to ni hat ta R- stop moving I m nt confortble its weird.

S- kya weird lag rha he then she realise k randhir ka face bilkul sanyu k ...;)(*opps;)..) She feel unconfortble..

Randhir try hard n case ka ek corner randhir k head pe lagta he n wo behosh ho jata he...

S- randhir aakein kholo...oh god ab ye hi hona baki tha She try hard n wo randhir ko hata ti he n case bhi hat jata he...sanyu is worried randhir k head se blood nikal rha he.. Wo pani se chot saf krti he n randhir ko hosh aata he..

R- wt r u doing..muje firse kiss krne ka irada to ni he n

S- oh plz kiss or tumhe..kadush Randhir sanyu k hath ko dekhta he use bhi chot lag jati he case hatate waqt..randhir chot pani se saf krta he

S- copycat.. Ouchh

R- apna muh bandh kro..u stupid girl...randhir chot pe muhse hawa deta he..


Sanyu smile Fir kafi der bad sanyu ko nind aati he or wo girne vali hoti he n randhir apna sholder aage krta he n sanyu so jati he..


Randhir use dekhta he..usk hathse sanyu k face ko touch krta he usk bal kan k pi6e le jata he...slow background music bajta he...fir randhir bhi sanyu k sar pe sar rakhk so jata he...

Its morning...sanyu aakh kholti he dekhti he k wo puri rat randhir k sholder pe so rhi thi.randhir bhi uth jata he...eye lock...halki se hawa chalti he...n door khulta he peon says tum dono yaha kya kr rhe he


R- hum fas gye the rat koEk annoucment sunai deti he dream team whithin 5min meet me at mech.lab.Sab log jaldise lab me pahochte heVardhansir-dream team ur next task is ready...jo team haregi wo jitne vali team ki slave banengi

R(very happy)- task kya he

V- stop interrupting me

R- sorry sir

S- kabhi ni sudhrega

R(sanyu ko gusse se dekhta he)V-task apko on the spot diya jayega.n team kya hogi wo me batauga..Hum aj jungle jayege

So be ready

Everyone is ready with their bags

They reached the spot..

V- (declare team)

team A- randhir n parth..

Team B- sanyukta n vidushi

Team C- kostuki n sahil

Team D - jignesh n yo yo.


Bcoz ek member kam he yo yo bhi part lega is task me.

Vidushi- I want change my partner

V(with anger)- if u don't like ur partner then go back to ur home...yaha muje loosers ni chahye samje ..is that clear

Vidu- yes sir


V- team A n B ek dusre k against kam kregi n team C n D ek dusre k..jo harega wo slave...ur first task is ek team membr ko dusre team k member ki positive n negative adate batani he

R- ye kesa task he

V- any pro randhir

R- no sir

V- sanyukta tum parth ke bare me bologi...randhir tum sanyukta k bre meKostuki tum jiggi k bare me n yoyo tum kostuki k bare me...

S(to herself) achha hua randhir k bare me bolne ko ni diya

R- ab is looser k bare me positive kaha se lau

V-ye team task he ek dusre ki help kro..shamko milte he..

Precap-randhir parth ki help se essay taiyar krta he sanyu k bare me. sanyu parth ki trif krti he randhir didn't like it. Share ur view


HI frds

i want to tell some thing guys that so many pms i m sendg but no one is readg so i have created new acc so that i can send pms to only readers pls guys if silent readers are there pls comment and like post pls it is a req

and for getting pms send req to this acc ---- ( PURNI143 )



SO HER IS THE LINK AND IF U WANT ANOTHER ANOTHER SS LINKS SO HER U GO LINKS...

SS : LIFE IS UNCERTAIN

SS : YEH HAI AASHIQUI

SS : TOO GOOD TO SHARE

SS : MISUNDERSTANDG NEVER END

FF : SLIP N FALL

SS : FINALLY ITS OVER

Edited by purni143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
yaaayy me first :-) *smirks at everyone *


the update was amazing
thanks for pm :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Me second😭😭😭

yeh toh naainsaafi hain yr...comment type karte karte koi first aa gaya😭😭
anyway, lovely update. gotta go fr dance class, detailed comment after 7.30 pm!love
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Edited by saddahqrocks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Nice update😊
Loved sandhir's moment😊
Continue soon

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