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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: rajeev_eijaz
AMAZING, MINDBLASITNG, MINDBLOWING PART!!!

i loved it asusual!!!

thankx for remembering my BDAY and wishing mee 😳

Saraa

saara dear mujhe khushi hain ki tumhe yeh part achcha laga.... no thanku for your comments....😃 me surely will continue soon...😊😃😛

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Adildagr8
Too good....gr8....mindblowing....fantastic...luv ur style of writing 👏....cudn't comemnt last tyme....but both da parts were worth reading......Suri...u and ur story rocks.......u r a gr8 writer...waise bhi frnd kiski hoo lolx....takecare...

adi me was waiting for your comments since i posted the 9th part... ab me very khush that you commented...😊😛😃 ab itne sweet comment ke liye no thanku....😃 adi ek baat bolu i'am able to write so well only because of friend's like you & shrutu..... you people are my motivation to write better....😃

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: KulBin
hey SURYA lovely gift on his b'day to all of us.... 😊
how nice of u dear.... thanks alot.... 😊
indeed a very sweet & superb part.... 👏 👏
wow gari mei khushi almost apne dil ki baat bolne hi wali thi 😉 k...... OMG... 😕 but wo hospital mei ek dusre ka khayal rakhana... very cute 😛
ek saal story aage badha di wow..... 😃
muje lagta hai ki Anurag-Prerna ka rishta honewala hoga... 😳 just a guess u c... 😆 lol Raj-Khushi ne to ab tak apne pyaar ka izhaar bhi nahi kiya..... 😳
yaar maza aa gaya.... 😛 n lovely song(tumse mil k) i simply love dat song... 😃 hehheh lol 😆
n yes it was indeed a lambawala part heheheh.... 😃
will b waiting for 11th part... 😊

kulbin dear me very very glad that you liked the treat.. thanku sooo much for such a lovely comment....i loved your comment totally...😊 tho tumhe lagtha hain ki anurag aur prerna ka rishta hone jaa raha hain....well dekhthe hain kya hotha hain ???😉 ek baat bolu kulbin this part was the biggest part i have written till date..😃 me will surely try & continue soon....😃

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8
Suri in short just mindblowing 👏 baki detail coments baad mian 😉

R.S dear comments ke liye no shukriya..😊😛😃 me will be waiting for your detailed comments....😛

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nikhat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#65

surya nice part sach mein tum ne main suspence par aakar rok diya pls 11 part jaldi likhna

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: nikhat_niki
surya nice part sach mein tum ne main suspence par aakar rok diya pls 11 part jaldi likhna

thanks for your comments niki...😊😛😃 i know the suspense might be troubling you every second..but i'am sure the next part will have all the answers..............😉 me will surely continue soon...😃

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illuminated.

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Posted: 18 years ago

#67

CONT SOOOOOOON RS AND SURII!!!! 😳 😳

me waiting eagerlyy to read!!!! 😭 😭 😭

Saraa

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komal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#68

Hey ppl im sure most of u must be not knowin me also .....well im the writer of LAMHE which seemd to be almost disappeared so b4 it goes of completely im back with LAMHE...... 😳
I'm sure u ppl mustve forgot the story almost so heres a small recap to remind u all
RECAP:Abhi n Kashish reach Shimla their meeting is over but Abhi forces Kashish 4 one more day stay in shimla
kashish sees Sujal's pic n cries and Abhi sees but does not understand the reason behind her tears
He goes to a bar to hang out n der he meets hid old frnd SUJAL .......Abhi n sujal talk n abhi realises that Kashish n Sujal
love each other and he n Sujal make a plan 2 surprise Kashish....

The next everything is like it is evryday ...Kashish has packed her bags....
She goes to her cupboard and opens it n takes out a pic frm the drawer
Itz Sujal's pic.....
Kashish:Main jaa rahi hoon Sujal......jaa rahi hoon humesha ke liye .....yahan aayi thi toh socha tha tumse ek baar mil loongi ya phir
kam se kam tumhe ek baar dekh loongi par shayad humari kismat ko yeh manzoor nahi.......shayad humari kismat mein judaai hi
likhi hai ab hum kabhi nahi milenge kabhi nahi i miss u sujal
And tears start falling frm her cheeks and she hugs the pic......
But sujal is thinking something else.........
Sujal: I miss u Kashish par ab aur nahi Main tumhe kahiin nahi jaane doonga Kashish .........bas bahut ho gayi yeh doori ab mujhse ................yeh judaai aur bardaasht
nahi hoti.......nahi hoti main aa raha hoon kashish aa raha hoon main hum bahut jald milenge bahut jald......
And he leaves his house.....
Abhi n Kashish are on their way to the airport when.....
Abhi(to the driver):arre bhaiya do min gaadi toh rokna
Kashish:kyun kya huwa
Abhi:arre woh mujhe kuch chahiye tha
Kashish:kyaaa.....
Abhi:tum ruko toh bas 2 min....
Kashish:acha theek hai par jaldi aana
Abhi goes sumwhere inside sum shop n frm der he calls Sujal
Abhi:sujal kahan hai tu .......hum bas airport pohonchne hi waale hai tum wahan jald hi aajao
Sujal:haan main bhi bas almost pohonch hi gaya hoon tum waisa hi karna jaise plan hua tha
Abhi:haan haan bilkul waisa hi karoonga
Sujal:ok den bye

Abhi comes back n tells the driver 2 start driving
Kashish:le liya
Abhi:kya
Kashish:jo tum lene gaye the
Abhi:acha wohhh haan haan le liya
Kashish:hmmm ok
Abhi:arre Kashish main tumhe kuch bolna hi bhool gaya
Kashish:kyaaa
Abhi:tumhe pata hai kal raat jab main woh pub main gaya toh wahan mujhe kon mila
Kashish:kon
Abhi:mera ek bahut puraana dost......
Kashish:haan toh
Abhi:toh kuch nahi usne mujhse apni prem kahani kahi bahut dard bhari thi bechari ki kahani
uski premika ne usse isliye chod diya kyunki uske family ne uski famile ke saath dhoka kiya
ab isme mere bicahre dost ki kya galthi
Kashish(lil surprised):kyaa kaha tumne apne us dost ka naaaam
Abhi:arre maine toh uska naam bataya hi nahi
Kashish:toh ab bata do naa(shes desperate to know the name)
Abhi:arre tum itni excited kyun ho rahi ho mera dost hai
Kashish:abhiii ok baba nahi batana hai toh mat batao
Abhi:hm ab tum itna keh hi rahi ho toh bata deta hoon uska naam hai.........SUJAL
kashish:kyaaa SUJAL
Abhi:kya tum usse jaanti ho
Kashish(hiding her face):nahi toh main toh bas yunhi pooch rahi thi
Abhi(smiling mischeviously):okok

They reach the airport......Kashish is thinking sumthing...
Kashish:kahiin yeh mera Sujal hi toh nahii .......wahi hoga kyunki sujal bhi london gaya tha padhai karne aur abhi bhi toh london se hi aaya hai
kassh main kal abhi ko mana na karti toh shayad main sujal se mil paati maine kyun mana kiya yaaaaaaaar(n she hits her head)
Abhi:kashish kya hua kin khayalon mein khoyi hui ho
Kashish:wooh wooh kuch nahi bas soch rahi thi ki hum ghar kab tak pohochenge
Abhi:ismein sochne waali konsi baat hai hum ghar jald hi pohonch jayenge
Kashish:haan
Abhi:pata nahi tumhe kya ho gaya hai
He gets a call......
Abhi:hello haan sujal bol
kashish geta a big shock hearing sujal
Sum1:ap kon hai
kashish gets a big shock hearing sujal
She starts hearing what abhi is spking on the phone..
Abhi:jee ap kon aur is phone se kyun baat kar rahe hai
Sum1:dekhiye yeh jiska bhi phone hai unka accident ho gaya hai
Abhi:what sujal ka accident
Kashish is even more shocked now.....She pulls the phone frm abhi
Kashish:kya hua sujal ko
Sum1:dekhiye maam inka accident hogaya hai aur hum inhe city hospital lekar ja rahe hai ap jaldi aajaye
Kashish:ok main abhi aati hoon
Kashish(to Abhi):abhi jaldi chalo sujal hospital mein hai
Abhi:lekin kashish humari flight
Kashish:abhi tumhara dost wahan zindagi aur maut ke beech lad raha hai aur tumhe flight ki padi hai
Abhi:oh c'mon kashish itna serious accident bhi nahi hua hai ki woh mar jaye bach jayega woh
Kashish(very angry):tum apne aap ko dost kehte ho abhi sharam aani chahiye tumhe apni is dosti par
Abhi:kya yaaar tum bhi hes jus a frnd koi bhai nahi hai ki itni fikar karein hum uski
Kashish(slaps him):yahi hai tumhari dosti bas wahan sujal bechara apni jaan se hi lad raha hai aur tum......
Abhi(angrily):Kashish tumhe kyun itni padi hai uski hes my frnd after all
Kashish:ure frnd hes ure frnd nowayz ho hi nahi sakta mera sujal kabhi itne ghatiya logon se dosti kar hi nahi sakta
Abhi:mera sujal???
Kashish:haan mera sujal mera pyaar meri zindagi jo is waqt khatre mein hai jaa rahi hoon main uske paas(she turns 2 go but suddenly stops)
Sum1 frm behind:kya hua kashish ruk kyun gayi apne sujal ko bachaogi nahi
Kashish turns bak and is shocked 2 see sujal standin der....She runs to him
Kashish(hugs him tightly):tum theek ho sujal and her tears r falling n falling
Kashish suddenly realises what is she doing n turn aback...
Kashish:tumhe toh kuch nahi hua phir woh phone
Sujal:woh phone maine karwaya tha
Kashish(sarcastically):ohh toh tum phir mujhe darana chahte the aur yahan rokna chahte the
Sujal:nahi main toh sirf tumhe yeh ehsaas dilana chahta tha ki tum mujhse kitna pyaar karti ho ki tum mujhe takleef mein nahi dekh sakti
Kashish(turns away):aisa kuch nahi hai kuch nahi main toh bas ek insaan hone ka farz nibha rahi thi
Sujal:insaan hone ka farz kya ek insaan dusre insaan ko takleef mein dekhkar itna pareshan ho jaata hai ki khud ko hi bhool jaye yeh bhool jaye ki uska sabse acha dost kaisa hai
aur us insaan ke liye apne sabse ache dost ko thappad mar kar uski dosti thukra tha sirf us inasaan ke liye nahi kashish nahi yeh insaaniyat nahi tumhara pyaar hai jo mujhe takleef mein nahi dekh sakta
Kashish:nahi sujal pyar yeh toh kabka mit chuka hai main tumhe kabka bhool chuki hoon
Sujal:agar tum mujhe bhool chuki ho toh kyun ab bhi meri tasveer apne paas rakhti ho kyun apne khayalon mein aaj bhi mujhe yaad karti ho
kyun mujhe yaad karke roti ho kyun aakhir kyun tumhara mann karta hai ki mujhe ek baar door se hi sahi dekh lo kyunnn kashish..
Kashish:haan haan nahi bhool payi hoon main tumhe roti hoon aj bhi tumhari tasveer dekh kar tumhe dekhne liye yeh aankhen taras jaati hai
par.....
Sujal:par kya kashish jab hum dono ek dusre ko aj tak nahi bula paaye toh kyun yeh doori kyun yeh ajnabi jaisse rehne
Kashish:kyunki humare raaste alag hai humare parivaron ke raaste alag hai
Sujal:kya hum dono milkar in raaston ko mila nahi sakte
Kashish:nahi mila sakte yeh raaste ab ek doosre se itne alag itne khafa hai ki milna chahte hi nahi
Sujal:koshish karne se toh sab kuch ho jaata hai kashish toh kya humare do parivar nahi mil sakte aur phir humara pyar itna kamzor nahi ki bas itni choti si baat se
hume alag karde humare pyaar mein toh itni taakat hai ki hum do parivaaron ko kya do mulko ko mila sakte hai bas ismein mujhe tumhara saath chahiye
Tum dogi na mera saath kashish(n he [uts his hand forward)
Kashish:kya is kashish ne ja tak apne sujal ka saath choda hai jo ab chodegi
And she holds his hand
Abhi cums frm behind
Abhi:aur main
Kashish:tum chale jao yahan se aj se humari dosti kahatam
Sujal:arre kashish agar tum isse dosti khatam kar dogi toh hum ek kaise hote
Kashish:matlab
Sujal:matlab ki yeh sab jo abhi hua na woh mera aur abhi ka plan tha aur isne meri bahut madat ki hai tumhe paane mein
Kashish:im sorry abhi plz mujhe maaf kardo maine tumhe kitna bhala bura kaha aur thappad bhi maara
Abhi:ushi thappad ki wajah se maaf karta hoon par nxt time thoda dheere marna yaaar
Kashish:offo abhi tum bhi(n she goes n hugs abhi)
Sujal(very innocently):abhi ho itna pyar se hug diya aur mujhe
Kashish shys off n goes n hugs sujal too..........

So,ppl here ends 28th part
hope u ppl liked it
so now kya hoga nxt
hw will K n S make their families meet
Janne ke liye
Keep waiting and Keep commentin on my story 😉

tc,
kimmy

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nikhat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#69

hi komal after a long time
nice part

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

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kimmy dear thanku sooo much ki tumne story post ki.... this hug is for you for posting the story...🤗 kimmy you know tumhe aur tumhari story ko hum kabhi bhi , kissi bhi haal mein bhool hi nahi sakthe... 😃 ab is part ke baare mein main kya kahoon it was totally wonderful , brilliant , excellent , fantastic...super coolllllllllll.... mujhe yeh part padke bohat zyada mazaa aaya.. mera dil tho poori tarah se khushhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
ho gaya... seriously yaar the part totally rocked...
sujal , kasish mil gaye... yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
yahoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
this is totally awesome.... 👏
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ab mazaa aayega when sujal , kashish ke pariwaar aamne-saamne aayenge.. i hope is baar woh log koi adchan na create kare.. agar un logo ne koi problem create ki tho mujhse bura koi nahi hoga..
🤢
ab next part jaldi se post karna..me waiting for it eagerly... 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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