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Posted: 18 years ago

#121

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#122

Hello guys… Kaise ho aap sab.. well I'am really very sorry is baar humne aap sabhi ko dil se dil thak part 11 ke liye bohat wait karwaya hain… actually my life has become so hectic..college , phir exams… so likhne ka time hi nahi mila…main apne kaan pakadthi hoon & agli baar se poori koshish karungi ki part jaldi post karoon.. chaliye ab main apni blah blah blah band karthi hoon aur zara story par nazar daalthi hoon… tho iske liye pehle dekhthe hain recap..
Recap :- tho ab pichle part mein humne dekha ki raj aur khushi ki engagement hui…. Unke beech pyaari si meeti si nok-jhok chal rahi thi.. isi beech wahaan charu aayi aur khushi ko raj se aur bhi naraaz kar diya…. Ab dekhthe hain ki aage kya hotha hain….

"DIL SE DIL THAK :- PART 12"

raj sees that khushi usse bade ghusse se ghoor rahi hain… woh foran charu ko chod detha hain & stands by khushi.. khushi gives him again a stern look….
Raj :- woh khushi..sorry…. charu ne……
khushi :- maine tumse kuch poocha kya tum mujhe bata kyun rahe ho…. Tumhe joh karne hain woh karo…. Mujhse kuch mat kaho.. main ho kaun tumhari jisse tum aise explanation de rahe ho… &am p;nb sp; isse pehle ki raj kuch kehtha the last dance of the evening is announced…. Raj bina kuch kahe just drags khushi to the dance floor….
Song in the background :-
"Shaam Hai Jaam Hai Aur Hain Nasha…..
Tan Bhi Hai Mann Bhi Hai Pighla Huaan……..
Chhayi Hai Ranginiya Phir Bhi Hai Betaabiyan……
Kyun Dhadakta Hain Dil……..
Kyun Yeh Kehta Hain Dil…..
{raj forces khushi to dance , who is least interested }
Deewanon Ko Ab Tak Nahi Hai Yeh Pata…..
Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya………
Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya………
Do Ghadi Mein Yahaan Jaane Kya Hoga….
Jo Hamesha Tha Mera Dil Mera Hoga…….
{khushi looks at raj with a scared expression of losing him}
Kaun Kiske Dil Mein Hain Faisala Hoga…..
Faisala Hai Yahi Jeet Hogi Meri…….
Deewaanon Ab Tak Nahi Hai Yeh Pata….
Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya…….
Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya………
Aaon Main Tumse Kahu Baat Chupke Se
Rang Badlegi Pal Mein Raat Chupke Se
{khushi remembers when she & raj were dancing then thinks about raj & charu dancing together }
Tumko Le Jaaunga Phir Saath Chhupke Se
{raj just smiles at khushi who is getting angry }
Jaaoge Tum Kahaan Dekho Main Hu Yahaan
Deewaanon Ab Tak Nahi Hai Yeh Pata
Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya………..
Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya……..
Gaana hothe hi khushi wahaan se jaane lagthi hain.. par raj catches khushi's palm in his hand… par khushi leaves his hand in an instance…raj tries to say something.. par khushi usse bolne ka mouka diye baghair hi wahaan se chali jaathi hain… raj feels very bad.. he sees his palm jahaan se abhi abhi khushi apna haath chudavakar gayi hain.. he sees the hand & suddenly realizes that uske haath par khoon laga hain… raj just wonders ki yeh khoon uske haath mein kaise phir he realizes that may be khushi is hurt….. raj runs outside to see khushi.. but then jab thak woh bahar jaatha he sees khushi going away in her car {I mean with anjali , kripa & veer }.. par jaathe waqt khushi bas ek baar peeche dekhthi hain & raj sees her… woh khushi ke aankhon ke saara dard pad paa raha tha…. Khushi gives him a hurt look & she turns away.. raj just sees her going & then says :- damnnnnnn….. {saying this he kicks hard on the ground }
Raj wahiin ka wahiin khada hua pareshaan ho raha hotha hain… usse samaj mein nahi aa raha hotha hain ki ab woh khushi ko kaise manaye… woh jaantha tha ki khushi is waqt usse bohat zyada naraaz hogi… phir raj sochtha hain ki he will try calling khushi… raj khushi ka number try kartha hain… khushi jo ki ab bhi gaadi mein hain bohat hi ghussa mein hain aur udaas bhi.. she sees that it is raj calling & she immediately cuts the call… raj dubara call kartha hain aur phir khushi cuts the call again… ab raj sends a message to khushi saying he is extremely sorry… khushi ko raj ka message dekhkar aur bhi zyada ghussa aatha hain & then she switches off her cell phone… raj tries calling khushi's cell but all in vain… he realizes that kashish ne apna phone off kar diya hain… raj ab bhi bada pareshaan wahaan ghoom raha hotha hain jab kavya , angad uske pass aathe hain….
Angad :- raj tu abhi thak bahar kyun khada hain ?? khushi tho kab ka chali gayi..{he says in a kind off teasing way}
Raj bas angad ko ek stare de kar wapas wahiin phirne lagtha hain..
Kavya :- raj agar tu sochtha hain ki tere aise ghoomne se khushi abhi yahaan wapas ajayegi tho.. main tujhse kehna chahtha hoon ki better luck next time…ab tho khushi chali gayi hain…
Angad :- thoda sa sabar kar le raj… kuch dino ke time ke baad tho woh tere hi pass rahegi..aur koi bhi tujhse usse durr nahi kar sakega… bas thoda sa sabar…
{angad & kavya continue teasing him jab bhi raj koi bhi baat par react nahi kartha….}
Angad :- raj anything wrong ??
Raj:- nahi nothing wrong….
Kavya :- raj kuch tho gadbhad hain…dekhna na hum tabse tujhe chaidne ki koshish kar rahe hain par tujh par tho koi asar hi nahii ho raha hain…. Ab bol kya baat ho gayi ??
Raj:- koi serious baat nahi hain…. Bas aise hi..ek chotti si pareshaani aagayi hain…
Angad :- achcha chal serious baat nahi hain tho bhi batao humein ki tu kiss liye is tarah pareshaan ghoom raha hain….
Raj :- woh actually khushi mujhse bohat naraaz hokar chali gayi.. main usse maafi maangna chahtha tha par woh chali gayi…
Kavya :- lekin raj party mein tho teri aur khushi ki ladayi almost solve hone waali thi na…
Raj :- {sighs & says } almost hone hi waali thi lekin meri ghalthi ki wajah se woh mujhse aur naraaz ho gayi…
Angad :- lekin tune kiya kya ???
Raj :- zyada kuch nahi kiya maine… main tho bas charu ke saath dance kar raha tha aur khushi mujhse naraaz ho gayi…
Kavya {hits his fore-head & says}:- dhat teriki…. Satyanaas… raj tera na kabhi kuch nahi ho saktha… tu ek dum bhondhu hain…..
Raj :-{confused} kyun main kyun bhondhu hoon… maine aisa kya kiya… aur kavya tu bata tu mujhko aise kyun keh raha hain…
Angad :- raj kavya aisa isliye keh raha hain kyunki yeh tujhe chotti si baat lagthi hain..
Raj :- haan chotti si baat tho hain maine bas charu ke saath dance kiya..
Kavya :- raj tune charu ke saath dance kiya yeh tujhe choti si baat lagthi hain….raj samjha karo isse badi baat koi ho nahi sakthi….
Raj :- matlab ??
Angad :- matlab yeh raj kii jab koi ladki apne pyaar , apne humsafar ko kissi aur ladki ke kareeb jaathe dekhthi hain… tho obviously us ladki ko jalan tho hogi hi na…
Kavya :- raj tu bhi na aaj tumhari aur khushi ki engagement thi aur tujhe aaj ke din apna saara dhyaan , importance khushi ko dena chahiye tha.. lekin tune tho uska dil dukaya….
Raj feels very guilty usko baar baar khushi ke aankhein yaad aa rahi hothi hain which had so much of pain in them….
Raj again starts walking to & fro… & then he says :- ab main kya karoon ?? & ; ;nbs p;
Kavya:- simple si baat hain raj jaa manale usse…
Raj :- manalu.. par kaise… aur agar woh nahi maani tho… {he gulps down his saliva & continues walking to & fro..}
Angad :- {raj ko stop kartha hain aur kehtha hain} tu pehle tho yun majnuo ki tarah chakar maarna chod aur khushi ko manane ke tarike soch….
Raj :- teri tho…..angad tune yeh majnu kisse bola….
Angad :- majnu nahi tho tujhe aur kya boloon… ab chal yahaan time waste karna chod aur khushi ko maanane ke tarike soch aur jaakar manale usse…
Raj :- theek hain..main jaatha hoon… I hope ki woh maan jaye….
Kavya :- I'am sure uska ghussa ab thak utar gaya hoga….
Angad:- {teasingly says } haan even me sure ki khushi ka ghussa ab thak tho thanda pad hi gaya hoga…{then angad continues cheekily} lekin raj agar khushi ka ghussa kum na hua ho tab tho tumhari….tumhari…..
Raj :- meri kya ??
Angad :- tab tho tumhari khair nahi… yeh kehkar angad wahaan se bhaag jaatha hain…. Raj tries to run behind him & catch him… jab kavya kehtha hain:- raj yeh angad ko tho har waqt hasi mazaak soojthi rehthi hain tu jaa aur manale kashish ko…
Raj :- achcha theek hain main chaltha hoon… aur tu angad se kehna ki main usse wapas aane ke baad dekh loonga….
Isse pehle ki kavya koi jawaab detha peeche se awaaz aathi hain :- agar teri khair rahi tho…..angad wapas hasna shuru kartha hain… raj bas angad ko dekhtha hain joh peeche khada tha…. Raj smiles & says :- tujhe tho main aakar batatha hoon.. abhi main tho main chala….
Phir raj wahaan se nikal jaatha hain is umeed se ki woh khushi ko mana lega….. dusari taraf khushi ghar pohanch chuki hain…. Khushi apne kamre mein window ke pass baiti hui hothi hain… she has her eyes closed… bahar thandi hawa chal rahi hothi hain… & hawa ki wajah se khushi ke baal uske chehre par aane lagthi hain.. par khushi unhe hatathi nahi balki she remains sitting in the same position with her head rested back & tears rolling down her cheek…. Khushi ko raj se ghussa nahi hotha , bas woh udaas hothi hain… woh naraaz isliye hothi hain kyunke usne apne pyaar ko kissi aur ke bahon mein dekha…. Khushi opens her eyes gradually & wipes her tears… jab khushi ki nazar raj ke pehannayi engagement ring par padthi hain… khushi remembers when raj told her that ab is ungli par sirf uska hakh hain… & then starts talking to herself :- kyun har baar tum mera dil thod the ho raj.. tum har baar aisa kuch karthe ho joh mujhe bohat hurt kartha hain… in pichle do saalo mein maine jabhi chahha ki tum apne pyaar ka izhaar mujhse karo tum nahi kar paye…. Aur na hi main tumse keh paayi ki main tumse pyaar karthi hoon….lekin mujhe laga ki aaj humare sagayi ke din tho tum mujhse kahoge ki tum mujhse pyaar karthe ho…. Lekin nahi… aaj phir tumne mujhe hurt kiya….khushi ke aasoo double raftar se behne lagthe hain….. then khushi apne cell ko dekhthi hain joh wahiin pass mein padi hothi hain…. She goes to take the cell… she switches it on… uske on karthe hi raj ka naam flash hotha hain.. she sees that raj is calling her…. Raj actually jabse gaadi mein baita he is trying to call khushi… khushi ko raj ka number dekhthe hi ghussa aatha hain & she just throws her cell… cell toot jaathi hain woh bhi bohat hi buri tarike se….. phir khushi goes to her bed & hugs the teddy-bear joh raj ne usse diya tha..{remember in the previous parts }… khushi starts talking to the teddy-bear… ab khushi ka ghussa bhi kum ho jaatha hain… she realizes that may be she is just over-reacting…. Khushi :-{to the teddy-bear} jaanthe ho… mujhe raj pe bada ghussa aa raha hain.. patah nahi khud ko kya samajtha hain… jab dekho mera dil dhukaya jaatha hain… aane tho usse… is baar usse maafi kissi bhi keemat par nahi milegi… chahe kuch bhi ho jaye is baar main usse nahi maaf karoongi…. Lekin agar main usse maaf nahi karoongi tho main kaise khush rahoongi…… aur waise bhi us raj se koi bhi zyada waqt thak naraaz nahi reh saktha…. Raj hain hi aisa…patah hain woh ek number ka bhudhu hain… jab dekho tab mujhse ladne ke bahane dhoond the rehtha hain… hamesha mujhe irritate karthe rehtha hain…lekin jab bhi main uske saath hothi hoon tho mujhe har cheez achchi lagne lagthi hain… jab bhi woh mere saath hotha hain mujhe kissi se darr nahi lagtha… main apne aap ko uske saath bohat hi secure paathi hoon…. Aur jaanthe ho ki aapko humein gift bhi raj ne hi kiya… woh bhi humari pehli mulaqat ke baad… mujhe tho aaj bhi yaad hain jis tarah hum dono pehli baar mile the… tab mein aur ab mein kitna farq hain… tab bhi raj meri zindagi mein tha aur aaj bhi raj woh meri zindagi mein hain… lekin tab humari pehli mulaqat ke baad main raj se nafrat karthi thi , phir hum dost bane , phir main raj ko achche se jaanne lagi , phir hum bohat achche dost bane..aur aaj main raj se beintahaan mohabbat karthi hoon..aur main jaanthi hoon ki raj bhi mujhse pyaar kartha hain , haan lekin ab thak is bhudhujii ne apne pyaar ka ikraar nahi kiya hain…raj ka ek photo uske bed ke pass ki side table pe hotha hain… khushi touches raj's photo & says :- bhudhu…bilkul bhudhu….lekin mujhe is bhudhu se hi pyaar hain… haan pyaar hain…. She hugs the teddy tightly….. khushi raj ke khayalo mein khoyi hui hothi hain jab usse uske window ke pass kuch awaaz aane lagthi hain… khushi thoda sa ghabraathi hain.. & she walks to the window… she peeps outside….& says :- kaun hain… {usse aur awaaz sunayi dethi hain} maine poocha kaun hain wahaan ??? {zara darr darr ke kehthi hain}
Tabhi wahaan ki electricity chali jaathi hain… khushi ko aur bhi zyada darr lagne lagtha hain… then khushi decides to go & call veer to check.. khushi mudthi hain & then she starts walking jab koi khushi ka dupatta pakadtha hain… the person pulls khushi back.. khushi tries to free herself par usse nahi ho raha hotha hain…
Khushi :- yeh kya batameezi hain……kaun hain ??{her voice starts getting choked}
Then that person begins to move close to her & khushi hits back at the wall… phir khushi slowly whispers :- rajjjjjjjj….
Raj turns on the lighter….aur us light mein sirf un dono ke chehre dikhthe hain… khushi joh ab thak bohat daari hui hothi hain raj ko apne saamne dekhkar foran uske baho mein chali jaathi hain… she hugs him very tight…
Raj keeps caressing her hair… & softly has a hand on her waist..
raj kehtha hain :- darr gayi thi kya ??
khushi moves away from raj & just nods her head as yes & keeps looking at him…
raj :- hmmm…
ab khushi kehthi hain :- waise tum is waqt yahaan kya kar rahe ho ???
raj :- kyun mujhe nahi aana chahiye tha kya ??
khushi moves away from there & says :- nahi mujhe laga tum busy hoge… isliye maine poochcha…
raj :- busy..nahi main tho busy nahi tha… waise tumne mere calls kyun nahi liye…
khushi :- mujhe laga tum apne poorani so called dost
charu ke saath busy ho… isliye maine socha ki agar main phone utaoongi tho tum disturb ho jaoge…
khushi yeh saari baatein aayine ke saamne khadi hokar kehthi rehthi hain.. she just takes a brush & keeps combing her hair…. & at the same time she keeps seeing raj's reaction in the mirror… {she keeps seeing his reaction in the lighter's light}
raj smiles at khushi's remarks & says :- oh…I see… tho aapko laga ki main busy hoon woh bhi charu ke saath… yeh kehthe kehthe he hugs khushi from behind & pulls her closer to himself pulling her waist more closer to himself… raj ke aise karthe hi khushi stops combing… khushi feels raj's touch…. {the power comes I mean electricity}She sees the way raj was looking at her in the mirror she closes her eyes tight not able to take his gaze….
Then raj slowly whispers in her ears :- tho kya keh rahi thi aap… main charu ke saath busy tha…bolo na… ab chup kyun ho….
Khushi just takes her hand to her waist & catches hold of raj's hand & removes it around her waist & starts going away from there without having eye-contact with raj… raj this time holds her dupatta again….
Khushi :- raj yeh kya kar rahe ho ??? chodo mujhe… aur jao yahaan se..kyun aaye ho yahaan… jao….
Raj leaves khushi immediately… khushi wahiin khadi hothi hain…. Raj realizes that khushi is crying…. Raj walks in front of her & catches her by her shoulder..
Raj :- khushi I'am sorry…. Main nahi jaantha tha ki maine joh kiya tumhe usse itna bura lagega.. I never wanted to hurt you..i'am really very sorry….
Khushi keeps looking down , she does not react to what raj is saying.. she keeps staring at the ground…. Raj moves his hand to her face & makes her face him…
Raj dheere se khushi ke aassoo pohanchtha hain…. Khushi just goes into his arms & hugs him tight…..
Raj keeps calming her down… & then separates her & says :- khushi mujhe maaf kar do.. mera irada tumhe chot pohanchane ka nahi tha…. Mera yakeen maano khushi meri zindagi mein tumhari jagah koi bhi nahi le saktha…. Patah nahi woh charu wahaan kaise aagayi… aur usne joh bhi baatein kaha uske liye main tumse maafi maangtha hoon khushi…
Khushi :- nahi raj..ismein tumhari koi ghalthi nahi hain… maine bas over-react kiya… tumhe maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain….
Raj:- zaroorat hain khushi , maafi maangne ki zaroorat hain… maine jane , unjane tumhe kuch pal ke liye hi sahi tumhe dard diya…..{yeh baat kehkar raj khushi ka haath letha hain jahaan khushi ko cut hua hain , the blood has dried over the wound} raj touches khushi's zakhm slowly… tho khushi says :- ahhhh…..
Raj :- kya hua dard ho raha hain kya ???
Khushi nods her head as yes…
Raj :- achcha chalo tum mere saath aao….
Raj takes khushi to the washroom.. he takes to the basin & then slowly places her hand under the water.. aise karthe waqt khushi ooo , aa kar rahi thi… aur raj ko uske har ada par pyaar aa raha tha… then he takes her back to the room & makes her sit on the bed….
Raj :- tum yahiin baito main abhi aaya…. Raj walks around the room searching for something… khushi looks at him moving from this corner to the other corner looking for something…..
Khushi :- kya dhoond rahe ho raj ???
Raj :- nahi kuch nahi.. tum bas chup chaap baiti raho…
Khushi:- ok..{she says coolly & places a finger on her lips}
Raj phir idhar udhar phirke kabhi koi shelf kholtha tho kabhi koi aur shelf…. Phir tang aake woh khushi ke pass aakar khada hotha aur khushi ko aise dekhtha hain jaise ki he is asking for help… par khushi kuch nahi bolthi..aur bas raj pe apni nazar tikki rakhthi hain…
Tab raj kehtha hain:- khushi meri madat karo na…
Khushi ab bhi kuch nahi bolthi… tho raj phir se kehtha hain :- khushi please meri madat karo…. Aur mujhe batao ki first-aid kit kahaan rakha hain ???
Khushi raj ko peeche kuch ishara karthi hain par raj samaj nahi paatha….
Aur woh kehtha hain :- kyaa ishara kar rahi ho khushi… mooh mein kya ladoo hain… bolo na… aur tum aise kyun baiti ho.. jaise kissi chote se bachche ko uski teacher ne kaha finger on the lip… bolo khushi.. {he gets irritated}
Khushi finally speaks :- tum hi ne tho kaha ki main chup chaap baitu..kuch na boloon…. Aur ab jab main chup hoon tho tum mujh par ghussa ho rahe ho.. tum tho yeh bhi nahi soch rahe ho ki mujhe chot lagi hain…..{she makes a sad face childishly}
Raj smiles at khushi's innocence & says :- achcha sorry… lo maine apne kaan pakde..{he says holding his ear} ab tho bata do ki first-aid kit kahaan hain…
Khushi:- first-aid kit woh wahaan par hain..us aage ki shelf mein right side par….
Raj :- theek hain.. main abhi usse lekar aatha hoon..
Raj goes to the shelf gets the first-aid kit.. he comes back to khushi sits on his kness in front of her & then takes a cotton & starts cleaning the wound… then he takes another cotton which is soaked in spirit{dettol may be} & starts cleaning the wound…. Raj ke aise karthe samay khushi bar baar dard mein sisakthi rahi…she pulls her hand twice or thrice.. par raj takes it back…
Khushi:- raj dard ho raha hain..
Raj :- {catches her palm firmly & says } khushi almost ho hi gaya… bas yeh akhri baar mujhe yeh lagane do.. phir mein patti band doonga…..
Khushi :- lekin raj jal raha hain….
Raj :- ho gaya..hogaya…
Then raj places the cotton…aur khushi shouts in pain:-ahhhhhhh…. Khushi ke aankhon mein dard ke wajah se aasoo aa jaathe hain…
Raj sees this & says :- shhhhhh…shhhhhhhhh……. {he places a hand on her mouth} Khushi kya kar rahi ho kyun chilla rahi ho… agar kissi ne bhi tumhare chillane ki awaaz sun li tho patah nahi woh kya sochega mere bare main…. He smiles saying this…
Khushi yeh baat sunkar muskura dethi hain…..
Khushi moves raj's hand from her mouth & says :- raj tum bhi na….{she smiles}
Raj :- now that's like my khushi…
khushi :- achcha jee meri khushi…..
raj :- haan meri khushi jiske chehre par hamesha ek khushi hothi hain….
Khushi:- hmm…tho mujhe ek baat batao agar kissi wajah se aane waale kal mein mere chehre ki hasi kahiin ghum ho gayi tho tab tum kya karoge ??
Raj:- main aisi naubhat aane hi nahi doonga…. Tumhare chehre ki muskaan meri zimedaari hain… aur main kuch bhi karoonga lekin tumhare chehre ki khushi ko kabhi kahiin khone nahi doonga.. yeh mere wadaa hain tumse khushi.. main marthe dum thak tumhari yeh khushi , tumhari muskaan tumhare chehre par qayam rakhoonga….. yakeen maano khushi agar tumhari khushi ke liye mujhe marna bhi pada tho ….{ marna ki baat raj ke mooh se sunthe hi khushi places her hand on his mouth}
Khushi:- raj tum marne ki baat kyun kar rahe ho ???
Raj:- nahi khushi main sach keh raha hoon agar tumhari ek muskaan ke liye mujhe apni jaan gawana bhi pade tho main peeche nahi hatoonga…
hasthe-hasthe apni jaan de doonga…. Yeh mera wadaa hain tumse aur apne aap se bhi… main kabhi bhi tumhare chehre par ek bhi udaasi , shikan nahi aane doonga…main tumhare aankhon se kabhi aasoo ko chalak ne nahi doonga…..{khushi ki aankh bhar aathi hain} raj just rubs off the tearing welling-up in her eyes…
raj:- ab chalo tum yeh rona-dhona band karo.. mujhe tum is tarah bilkul bhi achchi nahi lagthi….
Khushi :- tho kiss tarah achchi lagthi hoon main tumhe…
Raj :- hmm..let me think… tum mujhe hasthe-khelthe.. ladthe-jagadthe achchi lagthi ho…. Khushi waise main tumse ek baat kahoon….
Khushi :- haan kaho kya kehna hain..
Raj :- {keeps a serious face & says } khushi I have a feeling that hum dono ki zindagi humari sagayi se pehle hi bohat achchi thi….
Khushi kind off gets shocked & says :- kya matlab hain tumhara raj….
Raj :-{he hides his smiles & says} matlab kuch khaas nahi..main tho bas yahii kehna chah raha tha ki humari sagayi se pehle tum hamesha mujhse ladthi rehthi thi , har baat par mujhse chidthi thi… lekin ab dekho na joh main keh raha hoon tum woh maan rahi ho… mere kissi bhi baat par mujhe daant nahi rahi ho.. tho isliye main keh raha tha ki humari pehle ki zindagi zyada achchi thi..samjhi..{he hits her fore-head lightly}
Khushi starts hitting raj…& says :- raj main tumhe nahi chod doongi…& she continues hitting him on his arm….
Raj:- are khushi kya kar rahi ho ??? mujhe maarna band karo… aur yaad rakho main tumhara hone wala pati hoon aur ho chukka mangetar bhi….
Khushi:- haan haan.. yaad hain mujhe…lekin main tumhe ab bhi marroongi jab tum mere mangtar ho aur tab bhi maroongi jab tum mere pati ho jaoge…aur yeh hakh mujhse koi nahi cheen saktha…..samjhe….
Khushi:- {haath jhodtha hain aur kehtha hain } achcha meri maa main samaj gaya..
Khushi :- achcha tho ab tum jao… bohat dhair ho gayi hain…
Raj :- main jaun Itni jaldi…….{he makes a sad face}
Khushi :- raj agar koi aagaya tho woh humein chaidna band nahi karenge…. Ab chalo jao tum….
Raj :- {says sadly} achcha theek hain main jaatha hoon….
Raj thoda agge jaatha hain , then he turns around & says :- khushi…
Khushi :- {gives him a stern look & says } ab kya
hain ??
raj :- woh tum mujhe see off karne khidki thak tho aa hi sakthi ho na….
Khushi :- raj tum na kabhi nahi sudhar sakthe….
Khushi comes to him catches his hand & says:- so mr.raj garewal let me walk you out to the window…
Raj walks near the window & then says to khushi :- jaana zaroori hain….
Khushi :- haan jao ab….
Raj :- haan jaa raha hoon…bye….
Khushi :- haan bye ab jao….
Raj :- lekin khushi main keh raha tha kii…..
Khushi :- jaoooooooooo…………
Finally Raj wahaan se chala jaatha hain…. Khushi sees him walking slowly towards his car outside the gate & says pagal….
Phir khushi wahaan par se jaane lagthi hain… she keeps smiling to herself… she kisses her engagement ring… jab peeche window ke pass se raj ki awaaz aathi hain :- ahem..ahem….
Khushi turns around surprised & is totally embarrassed…
Raj [who is standing outside the window says ] :- tho kya kar rahi thi khushi….
Khushi feels even more shy & to avoid raj's question she says:- tum gaye nahi ab thak…
Raj :- nahi main tho jaa hi raha tha… lekin dil ne mera saath na diya aur main yahaan wapas kiicha chala aaya tumhare pass.. {he says this & winks at her}
Khushi :- raj ab tum jao yahaan se warna main tumse baat nahi karoongi…
Raj :- khushi yeh tho sahi baat nahi hui… aur ab tum yeh blackmailing chod do aur mere saath chalo….
Khushi:- tumhare saath chaloon kahaan…
Raj :- are yaar chalo na mere saath….
Khushi :- raj tum kahiin pagal tho nahi ho gaye ho na.. itne late main tumhare saath chaloon… waise tho is mein koi problem nahi hain tumhare saath chalna mein….
Raj :- tho phir chalo na mere saath..{he nudges her}
Khushi :- par raj main aaj bohat thak gayi hoon….
Raj yeh baat sunkar bada udaas ho jaatha hain par he keeps a smile on his face & says :- achcha theek hain.. main chaltha hoon…. Raj begins to walk back….
Khushi sees that raj is sounding low…. So she immediately comes out of her room…. Raj reaches the car..he sits inside…..& keeps talking to himself :- agar khushi mere saath aathi tho kitna achcha hotha… he sighs…. Tabhi usse uski gaadi ke door ke khulne ka awaaz sunayi detha hain… he immediately looks at who has opened the door… he sees khushi sitting inside the car….
Khushi sits inside & gives a warm smile to raj…. Raj is just too lost in her…
Khushi :- kya raj mujhe aise hi dekhthe rahoge kya… chalna nahi hain kya ??
raj comes out of his thoughts & says :- ha..annn…. waise khushi tumne tho kaha tha ki tum thak gayi ho tum aana nahi chahthi….
Khushi :- woh actually maine socha ki kyun main khammaka tumhara dil dukaoon… isliye main chali aayi…
Raj:- lekin khushi tum tho thak gayi thi na… agar tum chaho tho hum kissi aur din chal lenge…aaj nahi tho koi aur din hi sahi…
Khushi :- raj ab tum yeh baatein karna chod do..aur chalo…… ab meri saari thakaan durr ho gayi hain.. chaloooooooooo…..
Raj smiles at her & then he starts driving… raj after sometime reaches the place..& khushi realizes that they are at the beach…{guys I know shimla mein beach nahi hain par hum ek artificial beach create karthe hain} J
Khushi sees raj & smiles…
Raj :- jaantha hoon tumhe beach bohat pasand hain.. isliye maine socha ki tumhare saath kuch waqt yahaan akele guzaroon…
Khushi :- that's soo sweet of you raj…
Raj :- ab chalo.. hum walk pe chalthe hain…
Raj gets down the car , then he goes to khushi's side opens the door..phir they both start walking hand in hand…. They start walking slowly…..
{point to be noted :- beach is empty as it's night time}
Khushi :- raj yeh zindagi bhi badi ajeeb hain na….
Raj looks at her smiles & says :- kyun tumhe zindagi mein kya ajeeb nazar aatha hain….
Khushi :- raj dekho na mujhe tho kal hi baat lagthi hain jab tum aur main mile the.. aur main aaj thak humari woh pehli takraar nahi bhool payi… mujhe aaj bhi yaad hain main tumse bohat ghussa thi us din… aur dekho na aaj wahii main hoon aur wahii tum ho lekin haalat kitne badal gaye hain…
Raj :- haan khushi tumne bilkul sahi kaha… haalat badal gaye hain…joh do log kabhi ek dusare ka saamna nahi karna chahthe the aaj wahii do log haatho mein haath dal ke apne aane wale kal ke sapne dekh rahe hain…
Khushi :- mujhe to yeh vishwaas hi nahi ho raha hain ki aaj humari sagayi hui hain… aur kuch din baad humari shaddi hain….
Raj :- haan mujhe bhi vishwaas nahi ho raha hain ki tum aaj mere itne kareeb ho… tum kuch dino mein meri ho jaogi… shayad issi ko takdeeer kehtha hain….
Khushi :- aur issi takdeer se tho kabhi kabhi darr lagne lagtha hain…{she says worried}
Raj :- kaise darr khushi….
Khushi :- raj yeh darr ki main kahiin tumhe kho na baitu.. main kahiin tumse durr na ho jaun….yeh darr ki kabhi hum alag ho gaye tho… agar na chahthe hue bhi is takdeer ne dil ke khilaaf jaakar humari raahein badal di tho…. Tab kya hoga….
khushi gets all teary… raj comes & stands in front of her wipes her tears & says :- khushi tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakthi hoon main tumhe kissi bhi pal mein nahi chod doonga..chahhe mujhe saari duniyaan se ladna pada… lekin agar tum meri zindagi mein nahi rahi tho main saari duniyaan bhula doonga..lekin tumhe har haal mein apne pass wapas le aaonga… yeh mere wadaa hain tumse khushi…wadaa….
Khushi just looks at him & hugs him tight…. Then dono alag hothe hain..aur khushi raj ko ishara karthi hain ki let us continue walking…. Khushi chalne lagthi hain…par raj wahiin rukhtha hain & he pulls khushi near him..
Raj :- khushi mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha…..
Khushi :- haan bolo na raj kya kehna hain tumhe…
Raj :- khushi woh actually main tumse yeh kehna chahtha hoon kiii…kiiii…
Khushi :- kiii kya raj ???agge bhi tho bolo…. {her hearts starts beating faster as she knows what raj is trying to say}
Raj :- kii… woh darasal baat yeh hain kiiii.. kii main tumse yeh kehna chahtha tha kii…. {raj stops }
Khushi :- raj tum yahiin rukho main jaa rahi hoon.. tabse main yeh woh kiye jaa rahe ho… jab tum theek se bol paoge tab tum mujhse kehna..{she says irritatedly}
Khushi phir apna mooh dusari taraf kar lethi hain jab raj touches her chin & makes her look towards him…
Raj slowly goes down on his knees & says :- khushi main tumse kehna chah raha hoon ki main tumse pyaar kartha hoon.. {khushi ke chehre par ek badi si batisi smile aathi hain}
Raj continues :- khushi main in do saalo mein kabhi tumse keh nahi paya..ki haan main tumse pyaar kartha hoon… nahi jee saktha tumhare bina… main zindagi ke har kadam par tumhara saath chahtha hoon…. Tho main aaj tumse poochtha hoon khushi zindagi ke har kadam par kya tum mere saath chalogi….. he extends his hand…. Khushi looks at him , she smiles & then finally gets her hand & slowly & places it on raj's hand… raj smiles gets up & hugs khushi… both get lost in each other….woh bas ek dusare ke bahoon mein khud ko bhule jaa rahe the…. Raj then separates khushi & says :- khushi ab tumhari baari say you love me….
Khushi :- {shyly nods her head in a no & says} naah…
She tries going back into his arms par raj does not allow her & says :- khushi pehle say you love me…
Khushi :- achcha theek hain… you love me….
Yeh kehthe hi khushi raj ki baho mein chali jaathi hain….

Then raj starts singing…holding khushi tight…

" Pehla Pehla Pyar Hain……
Pehli Pehli Baar Hain….
Jaan Ke Bhi Anjaana……
Kaisa Mera Yaar Hain…..
{raj tightens his grip on her waist}
Uski Nazar, Palkon Ki Chilman Se Mujhe Dekhti, Uski Nazar……..
Uski Haya, Apni Hi Chaahat Ka Raaz Kholti, Uski Haya…
{khushi raj ko dekh rahi hothi hain from the corner of her eye}
Chhup Ke Kare Jo Wafa, Aisa Mera Yaar Hain…
Pehla Pehla Pyar Hain…
Wo Hai Nisha, Wo Hi Meri Zindagi Ki Bhor Hai, Wo Hai Nisha…
Use Hai Pata, Uske Hi Haathon Mein Meri Dor Hai, Use Hai Pata…
Khushi moves away from raj goes close to his ear & whispers :- I love you raj….. & raj takes her in his arms & he continues the song…..
Saare Jahan Se Juda, Aisa Mera Pyaar Hain….
Pehla Pehla Pyar Hain……
Pehli Pehli Baar Hain………"

Raj , khushi separate & raj kisses khushi on her
fore-head….
Then khushi aur raj alag hothe hain… & then khushi paani mein jaakar khelne lagthi hain…. Raj bas paani ke bahar taherkar usse dekh raha hotha hain…. Khushi raj ko ishara karthi hain to come to the water & play par raj ishare se maana kar detha hain…. Phir khushi splashes water on raj…
Raj:- khushi yeh kya kiya….
Khushi looks at him & says :- maine tho kuch nahi kiya.. [she bends down aur phir paani splash karthi hain on raj] bas is tarah se paani splash kiya…. [she again splashes water]
Raj :- khushi kya kar rahi ho ?? main tumhe chod doonga nahi….
Khushi :- {teasingly says } pehle mujhe pakdo tho sahi… & starts running…..
Raj runs into the water..& then tries to catch khushi jo ki paani mein bade teezi se bhage jaa rahi thi… phir finally raj gets hold of her & catches her firmly by her waist…
Raj:- ab bhaag kar kahaan jaaogi….
Khushi :- raj chodo na mujhe please…
Raj :- nahi chod doonga… kabhi nahi chod doonga….
Phir raj dheere se increases his grip hold on khushi's waist..pulls her really close to himself… raj pulls her so close that they can feel each other breath….
Raj moves khushi hair to one side & his lips touches her neck… khushi closes her eyes tight…. While raj continues kissing her & caressing her hair…
Khushi just whispers :- rajjj…yeh kya kar rahe ho….
Raj :- main kya kar raha hoon… main tho
apni ho chuki mangetaar ke saath , aur
apni hone waali biwi ke saath pyaar kar raha hoon… he just touches her neck…. Khushi turns around & hugs him & just melts in his arms…. Raj & khushi are in a tight hug… raj has his hand around khushi's waist & khushi has her hand around his neck….
Both do not want to leave each other…. None of them loosen their grip on each other…. Then phir raj moves away from her touches her cheek… kisses her either side of the cheeks…khushi moves her hand to his eyes & closes them & then kisses him on his fore-head… then final ly their lips start coming closer & then they kiss……

Song in the background :-
"Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge…..
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge…..
Maine Socha Na Tha……..
Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge…….
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge…….
Maine Socha Na Tha………
Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen……
Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen……
Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen…….
Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen……
Maine Socha Na Tha……
Dil Ki Daali Pe Kaliyaan Si Khilne Lagi……
Jab Nigaahein Nigaahon Se Milne Lagi…..
Dil Ki Daali Pe Kaliyaan Si Khilne Lagi…….
Jab Nigaahein Nigaahon Se Milne Lagi…..
Ek Din Is Tarah Hosh Kho Jayenge…..
Paas Aaye To Madhosh Ho Jayenge…….
Maine Socha Na Tha……
Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge……
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge…….
Maine Socha Na Tha……..
Jagamagati Hui Jaagti Raat Hain………
Raat Hai Ya Sitaaron Ki Barsaat Hain…….
Jagamagati Hui Jaagti Raat Hain…….
Raat Hai Ya Sitaaron Ki Barsaat Hain…….
Ek Din Dil Ki Raahon Mein Apne Liye…….
Jal Uthenge Mohabbat Ke Itne Diye…….
Maine Socha Na Tha…….
Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen…….
Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen……
Maine Socha Na Tha……..
Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge……..
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge……
Maine Socha Na Tha…….
Maine Socha Na Tha……
Maine Socha Na Tha …….."

Khushi & raj continue to kiss & their kiss gets deepening…

Uffff….yaar..yeh lo yeh part yahaan khatam ho gayi.. ab isse zyada mujhse likha nahi jayega…. I hope aap sabhi ko yeh part achcha laga ho… & I even hope ki this part was long enough…..
Sorry maine aap sab ko itna wait karways story post karne ke liye….
Ab yeh jaanne ke liye ki after such a romantic scene aage kya hoga… raj , khushi kaise react karenge.. kya unke beech jhagda hoga ya phir pyaar… etc etc baato ke liye wait kijiye dil se dil thak part 13 ka….

Me eagerly waiting for your comments , compliments & suggestion please do send them….

Guys if any mistakes me sorry as I have not edited it…

Take care……
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Love
Surya….😳

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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Aatif

@aatif_bilal

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#123

great part surya jii

please chek my ff page no 24

i post msg 4 u please read

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Aatif

@aatif_bilal

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#124

PART 9

& kashish shoked

K:kiyaaaaaaa

N:haa kashish who tum se piyar

karta hain

K:but us ne to mujhe nahii bataya

N:mujhe lagta hain k who tum se

piyar karta hain

K:tumhe lagta hain per poora yaqeen

to nahi hain

N:us waqt jab tum aur apurva dance

ker rahe the tab bhi tabhi us ne

tum ko dekha to whoo khud

jaan bhooj ker haar gaya

K:aacha

N:haaa & who tum ko apurva k

nazdeek nahi dekh sakta

K:ooooooo kiya tum such bol rahe

hoo

N:nahiii jhoot bol rahe hoon

kashish main such hii kah

rahe hoon

K:aacha

N:kashish ab bhi dair nahii huie

hain jao kashish sujal k pass

jaojao kashish sujal k pass

jao

& WAHA PER SUJAL ATA HAIN

K:sir kiya app muj se piyar

karte hoon

S:haa kashish but tum to apurva

se piyar karte hoo na

K:nahii who to main ase hii ker rahe

thi

S:aacha kiya karna chahte the tum

K:sir mere baat ka matlub hain k

mujhe nahi pata tha k app muj

se piyar karte hai

S:oooooo

K:sir main bhii app se piyar karte hoon

main to dekhna chahte the k app muj

se piyar karte hain ya nahi

S:haa main tum se piyar karta hoon

K:whooo to mujhe app ki friend

naina ne bataya is baree main

warna humra milan nahi hota

N:ok sujal kashish main chalte hoon

mujhe der hooo rahe hain mujhe chalna

hain & wase bhi mera kaam tha do

premiyo ko milana

K:thankx naina

N:u r welcome kashish ye bhi mujhe

sujal ne sikhya

S:😊

😊

N:😊

😊

K:😊ooooo😊😊😊

😊

& NAINA CHALE JATE HAIN

& SUJAL KASHISH DONO BAAT KARTE HAIN

part 9

END

I HOPE U LIKE IT

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LOVE

MONA😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#125

Gr8 going mona 👏👏👏

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#126

👏just awesome part suri mindblowing 👏👏👏👏

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KulBin

@KulBin

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#127

omg surya ummmm simply Superb.... 👏 toog good, 👏
amazing part yaar... 👏 I mean it was mindblowing part... 👏
wonderful work by you... 😛 👏 👏
dear after reading this part no complaints y u posted it late... 😃 u r forgiven hehe... 😉
yaar bahot achha present kiya hai words mei aapne is fiction ko.... 😛 👏 i loved reading every bit of it yaar.. 😉 😛 👏
n as usual cant wait for ur next part par plz surya dear is baar zara jaldi hi post kar do... 😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 18 years ago

#128

thanks a lot mona dear for ur comments... 😃 ur story is going very goodd.... 👏 continue soon please.... 😃

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8
👏just awesome part suri mindblowing 👏👏👏👏

no thanku sooo much R.S dear...me happy u liked the part....😃😃😃😃

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: KulBin
omg surya ummmm simply Superb.... 👏 toog good, 👏
amazing part yaar... 👏 I mean it was mindblowing part... 👏
wonderful work by you... 😛 👏 👏
dear after reading this part no complaints y u posted it late... 😃 u r forgiven hehe... 😉
yaar bahot achha present kiya hai words mei aapne is fiction ko.... 😛 👏 i loved reading every bit of it yaar.. 😉 😛 👏
n as usual cant wait for ur next part par plz surya dear is baar zara jaldi hi post kar do... 😊

thanks a ton kulbin dear....me pukka koshish karoongi ki jaldi se agli part post kar doon....😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃