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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Param_love

OMG...Mickey the update was awesome n mind blowing😳👏

Love it to the core❤️
SanDhir had same condition😉
Mandap mai bada mazza aaiga...Excited 😃🤣
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
thx 4 pm



Aww thanks dear am very happy u liked it 😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Finallly here...read all parts in one go...
super duper and awsome one as always...just loved this concept...sanyu parth bonding was so nice...best friend..thank god u didnt make love triangle...really hate...
coming to sandhir fantastic metsss...lollsss...their fights ...never changed...lols...BB...
somewhere i had guess this was going to happen...meet at wedding day...one of my wish is like something...hehe...
eagerly waiting con.ssoonnn!!!!
nd sorry for late...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
hi mickey read all parts together it was superb
beautiful
updates
loved it
surf excel part was so funny
sanyu nd parth friendship was too gud
sanyu nd parth families r superb
loved dem
nd one suggestion give d page no of updates in 1 st page dat will be easy to read for new readers like me nd d page no r part 1 page1
part 2 page 4
part 3 page 7
part4 page 10

plz send me d pm when ever u update dis
continue soon :))))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

Finallly here...read all parts in one go...
super duper and awsome one as always...just loved this concept...sanyu parth bonding was so nice...best friend..thank god u didnt make love triangle...really hate...
coming to sandhir fantastic metsss...lollsss...their fights ...never changed...lols...BB...
somewhere i had guess this was going to happen...meet at wedding day...one of my wish is like something...hehe...
eagerly waiting con.ssoonnn!!!!
nd sorry for late...



Aww my sweet frnd is back.. i hope you are dng good... am very happy u liked my story... arey yaara why to say sorry... no issues... pakka will update soon...

loads of love...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: anu_anya

hi mickey read all parts together it was superb
beautiful
updates
loved it
surf excel part was so funny
sanyu nd parth friendship was too gud
sanyu nd parth families r superb
loved dem
nd one suggestion give d page no of updates in 1 st page dat will be easy to read for new readers like me nd d page no r part 1 page1
part 2 page 4
part 3 page 7
part4 page 10

plz send me d pm when ever u update dis
continue soon :))))



Thank u so much dear... thanks a lot... ya actually I normally keep the index in first page.. but this time in the first page itself I have kept the story.. but sure will do some & keep the Index with # thanks a lot for suggesting... am very happy u liked my story... if time permits u can read my previous story " Love Beyond Limits"...

love you,
Mickey.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
hey nice story pliz update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Hello all...

I am back again... I know am very late... yaar year ending so much of work & other stuff... so sorry. Once again I thank each & every one for liking my story... here goes the story. I hope you like it.

Part 5:

In Shekawat mansion:

Yoyo told about Randhir's condition to Mr. & Mrs. Shekawat.

H: ye paagal hai kya? Will any one keep such condition.. this fellow will never agree to marriage. He won't let me live peacefully.

Y: Uncle pls, calmdown. I have taken care of this. I have already discussed with Parth.

H: Parth?

Y: yes, Parth Kashyap.

H: Kashyap,means he would be Vardhan's son. Great what he said?

Y: He told to Sanyukta & made me talk with her. You know even babhi is also excited with this. God's grace she even accepted and told she will talk to her parents and make them accept. So don't worry about proposal, first tell me you are okay with this or not.

H & R: If all are okay with this we don't have any problem. we are excited for this. All Old rituals. First let me talk with Mr. Agarwal once.

Y: No no not now. give them some time. Let them think and will call after some time.

H: Good Idea. Mera beta.. thank you so much... you don't know how much help & what you are doing to us...

Y: Uncle, you are calling me as beta and again saying thanks? Not fair... you are also like my parents. And Randhir, my only friend not only friend , he is my elder brother. So Pls don't make me feel like I am out sider.

Re: bass bas enough of the Sentiment.. now lets go & plan about the wedding.

All giggled and went from there.

In Agarwal mansion:

P: Uncle, I have spoken with Randhir, he is very nice guy. You know he even accepted our stupid's condition. These are made for each other. He also excited with this & said will talk to his parents. So for now lets wait some time.

All accepted for this.

After 2 days..

Harsh called Aggarwal and said they are okay with the proposal and said let us do what our children wish.. Both talked very carefully so that other won't get disturbed. Decided to meet pandit for a good muhurat.

Muhurat got decided & preparations started at both mansions... All were happy as the date is nearby all started work immediately & rituals begun.

On the other hand Randhir is irritated as his plan got back fired as the girl agreed. With his mom's request he went for shopping.

In the mall..

Yoyo insisted Randhir to buy some Sherwani & other clothes.

Y: Bhai.. yaara shaadhi hai.. koyi office ka official meeting nahi... pls select some good & traditional dress..

R: Shut up . I am already confused how can a girl accepted my proposal? Is she that much brainless?

Y: What's your problem, as you said we brought such girl only, now no more arguments & select. First select one saree for babhi..

R: Are you mad? Me selecting saree and that for a girl?

Y: FYI, only girls wear saree, I don't know if you have.. before completing sentence he got a glance from Randhir.

R: Look I am not gonna do such, if you want you go & select, I am not doing such.

Y: // making a puppy face// theek hai bhai.. you don't do anything for me.. hmm I will manage.. // he said in such a way which irritated Randhir more//.

R: stop your drama. Let me select a saree, look am doing all this only for you. He got a wink from Yoyo.

Y: I know u bhai very well.. Randhir smiled at Yoyo's antics as he even knew he can't cutoff Yoyo's words. As he is his best buddy.

They selected a beautiful red saree..

Y: Bhai, maanna padega, you always have best choice.. saree is very beautiful.. //meanwhile he got a call// chalo bhai theek hai, you carry on with shopping, I have a little work and will come soon. // saying he left from there//

While entering into lift he bumped a girl.

S: Idiot, can't you see..

R: Not again...don't you have any other work? Always come infront of me? Look am already irritated, just get lost from here before I do any.

S: O M G.. am scared.. pls don't do any.. bewakoof .. you always come and blaming me..

R: Excuse me, I am interested in talking with you... in your dreams, look at yourself, Jugli billi always ready to fight... I know I am hot & good looking so you might be thinking of something else..

S: oye chup kar apni bakwas.. me interested in a Sadu like you... never.. FYI I am getting married in few days...

R: Pls stop joking ha.. you getting married.. Who is that poor fellow accepted you, my sincere condolence to him... I think he got vexed with his life that's why accepted you. See I bet he will definitely run away on seeing your face in your suhagraat itself.

S: Shut up you idiot, your girl will run away from mandap only.. no one accepts such a sadu like you.. I pity if any girl agree to marry you.

Both stopped their bickering when lift got stopped suddenly.

S: Oh god.. what happened.. why lift got stopped.

R: It got scared on seeing you, that's why.

S: Shut up, do something. Wait a sec, you did this intentionally right?

R: Hold on miss, I planned all this so that I can spend some time with you right? you and your filmy thoughts & fantasies..

S: I knew very well. Remember, I know Karate, Kung fu & other marshal arts also, so don't even dare to have any wrong intentions.

Randhir face palmed.

R: Jungli billi, kripiya karke, can you pls shut your mouth for few min, because of your nonsense I am not even able to think.

Again both started fighting and after few min lift doors got opened. & both went out & continued their shopping.

Sanyu has selected a beautiful designer wear sherwani.

To herself: This is beautiful. I hope it looks good on you and kept it aside.

Suddenly Randhir stormed there and took of the Sherwani.

S: stupid, give it to me, I have selected it.

R: heheh no baby. If you selected you should keep in your bag, not side, I took it & kept in my bag so this is mine.

S: look don't argue, I liked it, now give it to me.

R: Never now.

S to Sales man: Bhayya, do you have other piece? I need the same dress.

Sa M : Sorry ma'am this is only piece as this is new arrival & designer wear.

S: Pls bhayya, check once, I have liked that dress a lot & selected for my fianc.

Sa M : Sorry ma'am.

Randhir was enjoying all this. Sanyu looked at Randhir..

R: Tit for tat baby go & select a new one & winked at her. Saying he left from there.

Sanyu stomped her foot on floor in anger. Shouted, Sadu I won't leave you..

Near Bill counter, Randhir kept his shopping ba aside as he got a phone call. Sanyu took off the saree from his bag and Randhir noticed it.

R: Oye I thought you are brainless, you are thief also, give my saree back. That is for my fiance.

S: hehe now never. Any thing is fair in love & war boss. You have taken my dress, now I did the same.. In your words, Tit for Tat. Now go to hell & do what ever you want.

R: Chorni, you have taken it... Give it.

Sanyu went to bill counter & billed also.

S: Now its mine. Go & select a new one Sadu & winked at him and left from there leaving fuming Randhir behind.


Tadaa... done.. howz it???? yaara pls don't forget to give ur feedback which motivates me a lot...

Love you,
Mickey.




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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Mickeyyy...
this part was so damn hilarious..
superb..
I just love their fighting..
I'm just waiting for that moment jab ye dono shadi ke mandap me ek doosre ke samne aayenge.. 🤣
it will be a hell lot of fun... 🤣
plzz update soonish
love
Ashka
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Nice update.
Their never ending fights. Lol
karate nd kung fu wala line was hilarious.
Update soon.
Nd pls pm me if u can.
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Posted: 10 years ago
U updated after a long tym
Bt u were busy koi ni


The update was awsme yr
I so luved it

Rd was hell shocked to know dat the girl agreed to his condition

Sandhir shpping for each other
Yoyo is really close to rd
Rd yoyo ki baat ni taal skta

Rd selected saree for sanyu

Sandhir encounter n as alwz both strted fighting lyk tom n jerry
Really their fights r so funny
Both r so adorable


Lift band hogi r iska blame sanyu rd pe laaga rhi thi
Really she's too much

Sanyu selected sherwani for his would be husband
R uske would be husband ne hi vo chori kr li

Really that was so funny

Bt sanyu b kam ni h usne sari chura life

Now it will be fun to see when they will see each other in those clothes

Eagerly wtng for next
Update soon

Keep smiling

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