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Nice first chap
will read others n then cmmnt, so, till den,
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loved the way in which u narrated the caring rd...
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Oye darling Awesome... eagerly waiting wat gonna happen next...
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WOW.. CARING RANDHIR...

YE KARAN PAGAL HAI KYA????
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Originally posted by: saddahaqrox

Nice first chap

will read others n then cmmnt, so, till den,
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K I WILL WAIT FOR UR COMMENT
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loved the way in which u narrated the caring rd...


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THNKU SO MUCH
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Oye darling Awesome... eagerly waiting wat gonna happen next...


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WOW.. CARING RANDHIR...

YE KARAN PAGAL HAI KYA????


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''Finally, its over'' - PART 3 :


MORNING

Karan, main ja rhi hu. See you in the office!!!' I exclaimed as I was picking my phone up from the table. I didn't even waited for his reply n continued all the best randhir for ur interview. Bye' n I rushed out of the apartment

IN OFFICE

Boss was talking to randhir while I entered his cabin.' Randhir, uh need to design ur portfolio, I mean ur photographs r good but design a proper portfolio, n this girl will help u' he said while pointing at me.

AT HOME

randhir it ll be an outdoor photoshoot so better be prepared' I said as I saw randhir looking for his best clothes.

karan tum bhi chloge?' I asked as he used to go with me for outdoor shoot to keep on check if I flirt with some1.

no sanyu, I don't need to go. N I have an ad film shoot tmrw so uh both go'

( yeah why would u go, you trst your best friend na - I thought )

NEXT DAY

AFTER PHOTOSHOOT

Wow sanyu..!!! Mumbai is such a beautiful city', he said as we both were walking barefooted on sand at a beach.

Yeah it is' I said in a really low voice. I was sad by the only fact that I hv to go to that house again, to that devil of hell.

Sanyu, tum karan k sath khush nhi ho na.????' randhir said as if he was reading my mind

No randhir, I m really very happym ur friend is really handsome, so r u' I winked at him trying to divert the topic. I showed him his pics in my camera n he was really impressed

you r really awesome photographer' he said while switching pics.

sanyu tum topics ache se divert kr leti ho but u hv to tell me about ur relation. I know kl din tumhe karan ne hi dhkka dia tha. I m ur friend too n I promise I ll not say anything to karan' he said looking into my eyes.I m really tired of his behaviours' I said frowningwhich behavior, sanyu?' he asked cupping my faceActually...'


I was about to tell him but suddenly rain started n I rushed here n there to find a shelter but he was just standing in the rain with arms open as if he was welcoming his first rain in Mumbai.I forgot everything n was just looking at him. I thought to njoy the rain with him coz I was getting a chance to be free, even though for sometym .

I started dancing in the rain n that day I saw the old me. I realized how karan has changed me, how I have become just a random girl. N I realized that I m special

Yes uh r special' he said as if he read my mind, again.sanyu let's go home. It's too late n I don't want that he say uh anything again.

I know he ll not say anything to me but will make uh feel like hell' he cont. I saw care n love for me in his eyes.sorry randhir, you must be thinking that I m such an emotional fool. Uh must be thinking that I m speaking against my own boyfriend n ur bestest friend' I frowned as I realized the reality. nhi sanyu,


I m thinking that uh r really dedicated to ur love, you bear his tortures without saying anything. I knw it hurts u really' he said looking cutely in my eyes


He was the first guy who understood me really well n his existence made me feel alive after a long tym. I was shivering with cold as we headed towards car.

He looked really worried n made me sit in car n switch on the heater. I looked in his eyes n we had an eyelock for god knows how much tym.


ON THE WAY BACK HOME


sanyu, tell me na how this all started, how he started torturing u, why does he go with u in every outdoor shoot, why he doubts u so much??? Tell na sanyu.' He asked trying to concentrate on driving but was worried for me.

FLASHBACK

5 years back

I met Karan and was memerised with his looks n work but he never paid attention to me until whn we had to work on same project n went to Ooty together.

We became friends n 3 years back, he proposed me on my birthday n I was already in love with him so I accepted. Everything was going nice but 1 day, he came back home bursting out of anger. I was in the kitchen preparing coffee when he came n shook me so hard that boiling coffee split on my hand.

ye kya kia karan? Kya hua h tumhe???' I asked

He didn't answered n slapped me hard. I hv never seen him like this.

Yeah he was short temperd but he never evn scolded me'

After 4 slaps, he held my wrist n pushed me out of the house. I could see tears in his eyes n I knew there was something really wrong. I was standing out of the house for about 3 hours, completely numb n broken.


Then when his anger cooled up a bit, he opened the door lifted me up n started interrogation.

ye kya h itne close kya kr rhi ho tum? Pasand h kya wo?? Apme he model k sath itne close hoti ho ya ye special h' he asked me showing some pucs of me n a model standing really close as I was telling him how to pose n it was a beach shoot so u can imagine guy's clothes

I was broken..

You dont trust me? I was just telling him the pose' I xplained crying

itne close jakr?' he raised his voice

I m sorry.. aagey se dhyan rkhungi' I was too broken to say anything else

its okay but I ll go with u in ur every photoshoot' he said pointing a finger at me. mind you, don't even try to do anything like this again' he cont.

Okay' I said n moved towards my room, like a zombie, expressionless, tears dropping from my eyes..

Flashback ends.


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