SS : ''Finally, its over'' [ EPILOGUE UPDATED ] [ COMPLETED ] - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: katheriene

Good updates😊

loved sandhir in this story😊
Uupdate soon


thnks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: -whitepearl-

amazing story
I really like the bonding between sandhir <3
read all the parts in one go
continue soonish

Khushi


ya i will soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: shalbi

dis is a really good story line.. Would like to read it.. Hav send U a request do accept it and p.m me when U update


ya i will pm u ...

dont wrry about it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

Nice updates... continue soon..



THNKS I WILL SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: unishaz

nice..
Thanks for pm..


u welcome... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Hi !
Finally I read this one..(others r still pending i knw.. But time constaints..:/)
This was EPIC Purnima.. If i m not wrong 😳 amazing work.. :)

P.S:ay I call u Purzi frm nw..!? It will be shorter 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: RisingAsh

Hi !
Finally I read this one..(others r still pending i knw.. But time constaints..:/)
This was EPIC Purnima.. If i m not wrong 😳 amazing work.. :)

P.S:ay I call u Purzi frm nw..!? It will be shorter 😳


ofcourse u can call me i m not havg any pblm...

thnku so much u liked it ...

i m so happy for that...

i m waiting for ur comment in all the ss which i m uploading...

thnku for ur comment...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Finally, its over - PART 4 :


After this, possessiveness, anger n physical n mental tortures r a regular routine. After everything I had to apologise.' I said tears making their way from my eyes.

Randhir stopped the car, cupped my face, wiped my tears n then hugged me n we were hugging each other for gpd knows how much tym...


Why don't you leave him??' randhir asked breaking the hug

coz I can't, I m addicted, I m addicted to him, his presence, his tortures, his possessiveness, his obsession. I m too weak to leave him. Yeah I don't love him anymore but he is my addiction, my worst addiction' I said clearing my feelings for Karan

you wna get over with it ?' randhir asked lifting my face up

yes I want but I can't' I was too weak to say anything else n I cried n cried . but this tym randhir wiped my tears n kiss my cheeks. agr dobara royi to soch lena m bahut gussa hounga kyunki I hate if anything I do is erased n ur tears will erase my kiss' he made me smile again.

He drove back to home.

I couldn't walk, I was too weak , he lifted me up to our apartment , made me lie on bed n gave me juice, he made me sit, his cold, wet body was really too hot to handle, but no I can't think anything about him, he is my boy friend's best friend. Shut up sanyu' I told myself.

There was an awkward silence between us n I decided to break it karan nhi aaya abhi?'

he is at Khandala with his friends. I just called him n he said that' randhir replied looking down. He was feeling really awkward but I knew he was falling for me n so do I ...

chlo uh sleep on bed n I ll sleep here' he said pointing towards couch in the bedroom

randhir there's another bedroom too. U go n sleep there, its uncomfortable to sleep here' I was really concernd for him

no I ll sleep here, you may need something at ni8 n u r too weak to even get up' he said adjusting himself on couch.

We dozed off. In the middle of ni8, I needed water but I couldn't get up. I tried to call randhir but my voice was too low to be audible. I tried to get up but I fell on the ground .

Randhir woke up with a sudden thud 'sanyu, tum thik to ho na?? dhyaan ni rkha jata?? mujhe bol deti kuch chiye tha to, khud kyu uthi?? Pagl kahi ki.. Chot lg jati to??' He was saying without any pause. His care fr me was driving me crazy.. 'how cn any1 be so concerned for me even if he knows that I m already in relationship'

I thoughthe made me sit on the bed n get me water. He wad helping me in lying down on bed but suddenly his bracelet get tucked in my dress. Both of us tried hard but couldn't get it out. n he ended up lying on me.

We both were hell tired n I don't knw when i dozed off in his arms.When I walk up, I saw him lying beside me, his bracelet still tucked in my dress but he had removed that bracelet from his hand.. I was looking at his face, so cute while sleeping n so hot all the tym.

I winked at myself .. he woke up n was feeling really awkward to see him sleeping beside me'sorry mujhe pta hi nhi chla mujhe kb nind aa gyi. M sorry' he explained..'shh...' I put my finger on his lips... 'its okay, I trst u' I said'sanyu main hm dono k liye breakfast lata hu' he said sitting up on bed..

AT NIGHT

Karan came back fully drunk. It was not the first time, he used to go out with his friends, once in a month.

That ni8 randhir was out for some work n karan's anger was on cloud 9. His one friend told him that I m a s**t n all. He came in the room n beated me up like a punching bag. He was out of his sensesn he didn't even realize the extent to which he hurted me. I don't know what happened next.


Next morning I woke up at 10, my whole body aching like hell

I heard some sounds from the hall

Karan pagl ho tum? How dare u touch her? Look at her condition. There's a limit. U r disgusting mr. karan srivastav. Its all over now, ab na wo yaha rhegi, na main?' it was randhir's voice.

randhir please don't do this yaar. I can't lose both of u. please understand' karan was pleading

no ab tumhari yhi punishment h..!!! uh hv tortured her so much, this punishment is not even 10% of that torture' randhir raised his voice


I was standing at the bedroom door hearing this

chlo sanyu, now u ll live in my apartment' randhir held my wrist n get me out of that house. He had hired a flat in the same building.

randhir, ye kya kia tumne? Meri life k decisions tum kaise le skte ho??' I was angry at him

shhh..' he cupped my face I m ur friend n I cant see you suffering' he cont.

but I wanna live with karan. Uh know na I m addicted n jo b ho he loves me.' I said ignoring him

okay fine, agr karan khud tumhe le jane aayega to u can go but tbtk u hv to be here. Let him realize ur value' randhir said. I could clearly see his eyes full of tears.


Aftr 2 hours

randhir, please open the door..' I heard karan's voice...

I ll not even talk to u unless u accept ur mistake n apologize sanyu' said randhir without even opening the door

okay I ll do as u say..' karan's voice was really low


Randhir opened the door n I saw a changed karan, his eyes swollen, I knew he has been crying.

I forgot everything n hugged him... sorry sanyu..' he said

Shhh.. don't say anything' I cut his sentence n we walked back to our apartment.

Karan was being really nice to me after that incident, maybe becoz of the fear to loosing randhir. I knew that he ll never realize my value coz I didn't have any value for him..

On the contrary, me n randhir were coming really close.. we had an unexplainable feeling for each other


One fine night, me n randhir were working late ni8 in our office. We were alone in the office. Karan was out of city n other staff had gone to their homes. Actually it was randhir' photoshoot for magazine n we were selecting n editing pics.


Suddenly randhir looked at me n I looked back at him.

His eyes were filled with love for me. He came closer to me cupping my face..

He was looking really intense.. he came really closer, our lips about to meet.


I stood up n tried to go out of the cabin. He held my wrist n pushed in softly to the wall n came closer to me, really close.. brushing his lips with mine... n then an intense kiss.

I know u love me too' said randhir looking directly in my eyes

no I don't' I said ignoring the eye contact

I know u do but u cant because of karan n I promise I ll not force u until u get over with him' he replied lifting my face up.

I avoided him a bit but I couldn't

I completed my work maintaining some distance with randhir.


But I knew I love him I knew It was really difficult to resist... I knew I can't live without karan too... I was just looking forward to be able to leave karan n be with randhir...


To be continue...


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Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
rd kissed sanyu tht too twce...
i didnt get sanyu's POV...y she is bearing all tortres of karan...
i jst want sandhir to b togthr...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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very very superb awesome lovely update
love it.update asap.😃
Edited by sudipto-69 - 10 years ago

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