Saath Nibhana Sathiya AR FF #2 DISCONT. - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
what u think... of people waiting or not..?????
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
I'm waiting for the part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
sorry guyz mumma calling me for dinner
agar raat mai bhai pc use nhi karega toh raat mai update kar dungi

warna tomorrow morning


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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
m also waiting... plsss try n post tonight only...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: tacker_karan

Heyy kriti

thnx fr d msg regarding saathiya
I don't remember I had read few parts from somewhere b4 too bit thn I lost d connection fr dis story
So thnx fr d msg...
n yea abt d story...I hv always loved reading arrange marriage n love after marriage type of stories n u gave me an apt ff on my fav couple AR...
I like d shy shilpa though wid high aims but still d dedication towards her husband n family is admirable
thn cmes armaan...he is diff frm d original character as he believes in old rituals n isnot in favour of females flourishing...something new fr d character...but still his respect fr his mom, care fr nikki n rahul n never ending love fr his wife is commendable...I just love him... <3
n d other characters like anji n atul r gr8 as a pair wid dere set of problems...I like nikki- d rebel...hope she does help ridhima wid her dreams...
I really like rahul...n I want a bit more attention to his character esp his bonding wid armaa n ridhima...
n now wid d pregnancy track along wid d mbbs complications it is even more intriguing...
So overall its an awsm attempt...wud lyk to read ahead...do pm me abt d updates...n yes if u hv an old completed story on AR do send me d link...
thnx
tc


thank u for ur comment dear 😃
yeah will try to give a little more attention to rahul's character
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devil_kriti

sorry guyz mumma calling me for dinner

agar raat mai bhai pc use nhi karega toh raat mai update kar dungi

warna tomorrow morning


pout plz update na i m waiting from so long plz ab or mat tadpao jaldi se update karo na
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: palakajenian

huff
finally my reading is completed !!!!
superb story loved it
prologue nd cs is really nice loved all the characters nd their nature is describes really well
so ridhz want to become doc nd no one is supporting her nd armaan he love nd respect his mother alot can do anything for her
part 1
loved ridhz nd anjy bond
loved how anjy pacify or can say calm her when she is panicking abt her life after her marriage
ridhz situation nd her fear is natural as a bride who doesn't know anything abt her husband
same situation is in mallik mansion where armaan is getting ready nd his brother rahul nd Nikki comes in his room nd share a lovely moment too
then again back to gupta mansion atul oh god he is really a jerk he is so wat can i say a very bad he beats anjali
feeling bad for her :-(
part 2:
again finally the wedding ritual is complete
but don't take it wrong its just my views but i think the wedding can be elaborated more i mean you just gave a quick review of the wedding if u elaborate it more or give or show some little gestures or moments of ar like u show after bidaai i like that
armaans small small gestures is really sweet like the one when he offers his hand to ridhz when they reach mallik mansion
nd then when doing some ritual when ridhz is abt to fall due to heavy lehnga armaans hold her from shoulder this small small gestures of armaan is really sweet an adorable loved it
then loved nikki nd ridhz talk when nikki is leaving ridhz to armaan room
then armaan he is so sweet yaar i mean he is ready to give ridhz time if she ready for this relation
loved how ridhz shyly stop armaan
their sr moment is really passionate nd hot ;-)
part 3:
the morning ar moments is really romantic loved how armasn is shocked seeing ridhz talking so much nd the eay he kissed her ;-) nd beautiful loved thier moments
nd nd then the muh dikhayi rasam
dadi is a bit strict but sweet too
she cares for ridhz too the way she said nikki to take ridhz for lunch nd call Arman too is really sweet of her
Then part 4 :
everyone is having dinner and billy announce d armaan to go on a two days business trip nd my poor ridhz got sad listening to this but next moment her sadness fly away when billi said ridhz to accompany him their loved the scene
then loved ar moment in their bedroom how passionate arman is for ridhz loved their moment
part 5:
then again u in the morning ridhz rasoi pujan rasam is done nd then she cook breakfast for everyone nd everyone praises her nd give gift to he except armaan
loved ar moments in the car when armaan gift ridhz a mobile ph
loved how on ridhz saying he come inside gupta house with her
so anjy is pregnant loved how everyone is happy for her specially ridhz
part6:
honeymoon special ;-)
but again u didn't show any ar moments their
i was expecting something special romantic nd lots of ar moments in this but u only show the temple confession
nd its worth
loved the confession how ridhz got worried for armaan nd just run to find him without caring anything thats true love or the best moment of ar life i just loved that moment its soo beautiful nd perfect
so there is two months leap in the story now nd everyone life has changed for better
atul realised his mistake nd is behaving gud with anjali nd is also had a tough past behind his behavior
all's well when end wells
part7:
everything is changed now loved the changes ridhz is a house wife now
so ridhz is also pregnant wow i m soo happy nd excited
loved how excited everyone is specially armaan
the way he first didn't believe it its cute scene
loved how armaan is getting desperate to spend time with ridhz but everyone is not leaving ridjz ananya nd Dadi is busy giving advice to ridhz of wat to do nd wat not
loved the ar moments in the room when which they share after dinner the dong sequence is
really amazing nd song
yaar teri bindiya re ...
but in next part
morning is loved how everyone is happy nd excited l for the baby ar moments is soo beautiful ,adorable nd cute
loved how armaan is not waking when ridhz came to wake him up loved their this moment its so cute
but this happy morning turn into a serious nd cursing one for all when ridhz tell her wish to study medical nd become doctor to all
i don't beleive this that armaan will react like this nd he will be this much rude to both ridhz nd nikki
poor nikki when she sided ridhz everyone behaves like this to her so rude nd bad
and armaan i m really disappointed with him
tgen after this he didn't even talk with ridhz till days2
moreover he didn't even listen to ridhz once very bad
but finally next part mein ridhz ne use mana hi liya
loved armaan's surprises nd orders ridhz nd take her to farmhouse in a way pampers her too loved
how everyone from ridhz family got happy knowing abt ridhz pregnancy specially anjy
loved sister's talk abt the baby md their life
but nikki she is planning something but wat???

sorry if i missed something coz its really difficult to comment of last 15 part together in one comment :-P
this story is really amazing i want to read it more sorry if by any chance or by my comment u didn't like anything
do continue soon nd do pm me the password of part 15 i want to read that too nd also add me to ur pm list too
bye tc


omg such a lengthy comment

thank u so much dear

ok now answers to ur few questions

dear i was busy that time with my study and exams and this ff just distracting
so wanted to wrap this story
but never happen



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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Jess2014

Hi

First of all, I must saw it is an amazing FF

Right from the start,

how AR got married and how Riddhima

surrendered to him on their wedding night

Then the way and cultures of both families

were very well shown,

Their confession was really sweet

and Riddhima had got worried as Armaan was not back and

finally they both realised and confessed.

After that, Riddhima got pregnant,

a news that made the entire family joyful

but when Riddhima asked if she could study more,

Armaan stopped her from speaking any furtherand was upset at her

and finally he reconciled when Riddhima brought him lunch in his office.

and then Armaan surprised Riddhima by taking her to their family gathering

where everyone blessed AR and

Anjali-Riddhima conversation was really nice.


Waiting to read the next part

And please PM me the next update 😊


Thanks for the previous PM


Take care...

Jess


thank u dear

n I send u pm for pt 15 plz comment on that update
dan I'll send u pw for new update

Edited by Devil_kriti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99

Part 16


hey guyz this FF is shifted to blog


password only to those who commented

readers check next post for more information


guyz I am going to make PM list based upon comments on this part

toh sab comment kar dena


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Posted: 10 years ago

Note for New and Silent Readers

First comment on all the previous update before asking for any password

And comment means a full detailed comment

One or two words comments are not acceptable

Note for Old reader

Plz do not expect any pw after posting those two-three words comment

and I'm going to check all your previous comments record before adding u in my readers list


I won't be adding anyone or pm anyone who has not commented on the previous parts.

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