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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: rachandeep

wow tht was fab!!! btw who plays vicky?? i was looking 4 his pik on the first page werent there.....but fab!!!! 👏 kinda similar to the first chapter of the book if i remember correctly....kinda different aswell 😉 uve done a good job keep it up!

now u can c vicky...i put a pic up😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

me too...reading is way easier than writing

yup! and my point was jus proved- tat was an awesum part! i would write a longer comment but i have too much hw...ill comment more in detail later if possible😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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she thinks its a ghost.. lolz

continue soooooooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: brainychild92

she thinks its a ghost.. lolz

continue soooooooooonn

lol frm what i can remmeber of the book he is a ghost........neways tht was a great part.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: brainychild92

she thinks its a ghost.. lolz

continue soooooooooonn

it is a ghost...she can c ghosts, talk to ghosts and fight with them...she's a mediator

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys

do u think i shuld add angad in this part of the story coz he was gonna only come in the 2nd series....i've got a part 4 him not that important...coz i just cant write it without him coz am soo used to the name in every i read that i think its weird without him...i think i knw wat ur all gonna say but i just wanna c 😃 😉 am weird innit 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hun if u feel angad is a vital part of the story then go ahead lol dont jus write him in 4the fun of it....altough yea it feels weird without him 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: rachandeep

hun if u feel angad is a vital part of the story then go ahead lol dont jus write him in 4the fun of it....altough yea it feels weird without him 😆 😆

not important but a msn frend😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rachandeep



lol frm what i can remmeber of the book he is a ghost........neways tht was a great part.....



really....... i didnt know cuz i never read the book.. thats kool.. just never knew wat a mediocar was 😳 😳

well still it was a great part so whoevers fanfic this is....... contine soooooooooooonnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The Mediators: The Guy Who Lives In My

Room

Chapter 3

We see lots of clothes scattered around the floor and Kripa who's looking for something which she can't find. "stupid shirt" muttered Kripa to her self while throwing clothes out of her bag. "you looking for this" said someone behind her.

It was Sameer holding the shirt she was looking for. "you idiot where did you come from, you nearly gave me a heart attack" said Kripa trying to snatch her shirt but Sameer was a few inches taller than her and he was holding his hand up so she couldn't reach. "Well you didn't get any heart attack innit?" Kripa was about to say something back but he interrupted her "by the way that's a rhetorical question".

Kripa was angry by now coz 1 he was not giving her shirt and then secondly annoying her. "Give that back" said Kripa jumping to get it but he was just damn tall. "No" he said just standing there. "damn you give that shirt or else you'll be sorry" "wateva" said Sameer not bothered about what she said. Kripa punched him hard in the stomach and snatched her shirt from him. " I warned you to give it back but you never listened to me and that's what you get when you annoy me" smiled kripa

"I never knew a shorty like you could hit that hard" he didn't know why but he just loved annoying her. Kripa couldn't just believe it, she just punched him so that he could shut up and leave her alone but he still was here, all the ghosts she ever fighted with always left her alone when she punched "you're impossible" "I know" he replied. "I need to change so can you get out of my room"said Kripa angriliy "a little correction miss this is not your room but our room" he quoted 'our'.

"since when did it become our room" asked Kripa. "I lived in this room for the past 180 yrs so am not the one leaving this room just coz your here"he said stubbornly "fine then am leaving this room" replied Kripa.

"kool…I can live in peace again by the way I was just wondering what will you tell you're mum" asked Sameer. T

his question made Kripa think she couldn't tell her mum that that a ghost was in her room, nobody knows that Kripa can see ghosts except her and of course her online best friend, he's the only one who knows that she can see ghosts and anyways he wasn't freaked out when she told him, coz he can see ghosts aswell. She shared everything with him and trusted him so that's why she told him about her deepest secret. Its not like she didn't trust her mum but it was gonna be hard telling her mum and anyways he was more near her age and could understand her. Kripa thought about it for a long time then she came to a decision. "ok then ummm I am gonna share this room with you but then if you break my rules then I swear I'll-"

"wait darling what rules" he asked. She started going on about what he was allowed and not allowed to do "wait I actually take that back…looks like lecture time…any ways who said I have to listen to her talking…blah blah blah….is she ever gonna stop talking…wow man looks like she has long a list of rules" thought Sameer.

"if you ever break one of those rules then I swear I will hit you" said Kripa. "OMG did she just say she'll hit me…damn she hits like one of those boxers…I am gonna die by next week if she keeps hitting me…I wasn't even listening to what she was saying…I think I should have listened I mean its better to die of boredom than her hitting me…arghh help mummy" Sameer thought. Kripa smiled to herself coz she knew he wasn't listening to her when she was talking to him "this is gonna be fun" she said in her head.

"please can you get of our room" Kripa said smilling. 'She just smiled at me' thought Sameer 'there's seriously something wrong with her'. He disappeared from the room just as quickly as he appeared. "good riddance" said Kripa freely. "did you say something" he asked. "ughhh" Kripa shouted "will you stop doing that its scary...if I am right you just broke one of my rules" "uh-oh" said Sameer before could disappear he saw a hand punching his face. "bye-bye" Kripa smiled and went in the bathroom to change.

Note: I'll try and post another part today but first I need to finish my hw's and help clean up this house. Plz post ur comments or even complaints. I know it's boring but I'll try to cont faster so we can have our Angad in here

Preview: Kripa's first day in school and Kripa makes a shocking revelation

Edited by hot_girl_2525 - 18 years ago

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