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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Heyy...I've got a suggestion for you...
Well...you hve written dat...Rey is 25 yrs old n he is 3 years older dan Veer...so veer should be 22 years old...whereas u hv written he is 21.
Now...Taani is shown 24 yrs old n is 3 yrs older dan Nandu...so..nandu is 21...
Now...veer n nandu study in same year...still nandu is 21 n veer 22 (as I calculated above)...
Now... Rey is 5 yrs older dan Aditya...so aditya should be 20...bt u hv written dat he is 17...
Now...Taani is 5 years older dan Aditi...so Aditi should be 19...whereas u hv written dat she is 16...
So...2 make it a bit more convincing, can u do sum changes...like this??-
Taani- 24 Rey- 25 (or u can take 25 fr Taani as well)
Nandu n Veer- 22
Aditi n Aditya- 20
I m jst suggesting...ok?? So...gussa mat hona..😛 n yes...plz make these changes if possible...ok??

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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Nice update
Waiting for Taarey part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Amazing please give me PM please please
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
I will Update on Sunday here is D promo for next part
Reyaansh singhania's house...

song playing in background ...

Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshani
Kuch Kum Gili Hai Barishien 😭

Edited by pranita01041985 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Sorry & Request Note
U all are so sweet that u all r reading & bearing with my story 😃 but i m here to tell u all
that ...I will Upload next part today @ 11 .30 pm @ night ...or tomorrow afternoon ...becoz

Coz of D heavy Rain here their is no electricity in m area from yesterday night inverters are also not working 😭😭

& i come to give u info about it on cyber cafe...

Story is ready... just waiting for electricity ... it s in my computer wordpad so pls wait for the Next i surely give u update ...😊

so sorry for Delay & reqwuest to u all wait till.. i give u all nxt update PM's
Edited by pranita01041985 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
No problem
v can wait fot d update
no worries
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
No problem at all...waiting...thanks for pm...😊
Edited by SwarSrushti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Note & chapter 6

( little bit of time Of GMT( Greenwich Mean Time) Discrebe for to know in d story what time which Date & person doing in it )

Wrote & describe... I want to tell u all ...that sunrise's time's & sunset time r all different on whole world ... If any problem in making & connoting time I given below GMT timing of world

GMT mean Green which mean time it meaning is Noon Greenwich Mean Time is rarely the exact moment when the sun crosses the Greenwich meridian and reaches its highest point in the sky there, because of Earth's uneven speed in its elliptic orbit and its axial tilt. This event may be up to 16 minutes away from noon GMT, a discrepancy calculated by the equation of time. Noon is the annual average (i.e. mean) time of this event, prompting the inclusion of "mean" in "Greenwich Mean Time"...GMT-8 Standard Time is 8 hours behind Greenwich Mean Time (GMT-8).


Countries in GMT-8 Time Zone...

The following countries use GMT-8 as their Time Zone.Pitcairn Islands (No Summer Time / Daylight Saving Time is used.) USA & Canada: Pacific Time Zone (During Pacific Daylight Saving Time:GMT-7)

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From here story start ...******************

Veer & Nandini + Gang...Taani & Aditi all Are in India its 12 in after noon so ... But long away from here ... in Newyork on same day (USA is -8 hrs back from us ...) here D morning is just started...here in winter season snow is everywhere in the street & house the Churches... playground... water fall's & tree are mostly covered by Snow ...in in here people working time are very less in winter's & they work from home so u can say the road & street are very less in num of people in winter here...

so we went Direct the richest area of Newyork it where D world rich & richest people lives... some of are business man in constructions .. Some of R investors.. some of R player actor & many more ...they all live in far way from main city on Newyork. here also is one particular person leaves N ...in here from 2/3 yrs he establish his reputation & company in Newyork in the age of 25 ... very well .. Incredible.

All the youngster follow his dedication in work ... coz he has so many different type of company in Newyork ...like Construction ... Hotels ... shipping's & his favorite & D love of his life is ..." Dancing... so we present u all D heartthrob of billions & D idol for his family & friends.. with his all well wisher's ... D Reyaansh Singhania...<3


Reyaansh Singhania's has a Mansion called is "Singhania's ". but he did not leave their... coz he live in D main city ... by beach side ... D Mansion we told u in short that it has big ... Lawn's/ gardens / fountains / Back pool sides ... front porch ...Back porch... Entrance gate...cars & bikes...

When we enter in A mansion from main door ... right side is D idol of Krishna..& left side is hall ... wooden style kitchen ... Study room ... Music room ...Rehearsal hall ... Own Gym ... own theater.. Own Spa ...Backyard ... Barn's ... Store room's in undergrounds.. Servant quarters ...security statues ...down stair it's 3 bedroom for outsider...& 1 waiting room & rest room & a office for the meeting if there is some IMP meeting is held so he come to the D mansion... only that part of the mansion is open ... rest of the mansion he did not put his feet..

In other area of D mansion ... upper part of it has in 5 master bed room in right side & 6 mass master bedroom... on left side ...from them 3 r for queen sized & 3 for king sized. Above on D 3rd floor is a garden in whole 3rd floor is a garden.. There are mostly roses & zarbera's from different verities u called it as a castle is as well.

We will let u know everything in brief later.. Now we move their where he uses to live daily ... It a beach side area... Away from his all messy work's he get time for another love of his life..& with her all memories ...he is living her wish & her dream..Without knowing her

A soft music is playing in D music room + studio room & middle of it A person is ready for his daily routine of dance... Plsss Imagine D move on D word of song & lyrics )

Hummm hummm hum hum hummm hum hummm hum hum hummm hum hum,...

Suddenly he get's up & started dancing... His favorite style Lyrical hip hop...

Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshani
Kuch Kum Gili Hai Barishien

Kuch Kum Lehrati Hai Hawa
Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Khawishein

Tham Sa Gaya Hai Yeh Waqt Aise
Tere Liye Hi Thehra Ho Jaiisee

Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm

*** (( he put his hand on D mirror & while sliding down ...his hand's he imaginary feel her love's presence's ) )

Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshani
Kuch Kum Gili Hai Barishien

Kuch Kum Lehrati Hai Hawa
Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Khawishein

Tham Sa Gaya Hai Yeh Waqt Aise
Tere Liye Hi Thehra Ho Jaiisee

*** (( He then hold of a curtain & round it on himself ))

Kyun Meri Saaans Bhi Kuch Feeki Si Hai
Duriyon Se Hui Nazdiki Si Hai

Kyun Meri Saaans Bhi Kuch Feeki Si Hai
Duriyon Se Hui Nazdiki Si Hai

Jaane Kya Yeh Baat Hai
Har Saba Abb Raat Hai


Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshani
Kuch Kum Gili Hai Barishien

Kuch Kum Lehrati Hai Hawa
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Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Khawishein

Tham Sa Gaya Hai Yeh Waqt Aise
Tere Liye Hi Thehra Ho Jaiisee

*** ((Than he hold of a roses which he take out from the vase which is on side table ))

Phool Meheke Nahi Kuch Gumsum Say Hai
Jaise Roothe Hue Kuch Yeh Tumse Hai

Phool Meheke Nahi Kuch Gumsum Say Hai
Jaise Roothe Hue Kuch Yeh Tumse Hai
Khusbooien Dhal Gai Saath Tum Abb Jo Nahi

***(( When he did not get the fragrance of her in ( which smell's like rose) that rose he feel like to die every second to get it...)))

Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshani
Kuch Kum Gili Hai Barishien

Kuch Kum Lehrati Hai Hawa
Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Khawishein

Tham Sa Gaya Hai Yeh Waqt Aise
Tere Liye Hi Thehra Ho Jaiisee
Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm
Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm😭

***((( Song ends & he drop's on his knee & grab his hair in pain.. Tear are striking down on his cheeks...))

End of Part 6 here nxt update on next Sunday so sorry for delay ... good night Take care u all .. love u all a lot J

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Promo for chap 7

Aditya's Entry in next part

& some sad stuffs

when will i update dn't know

little bizi in works but i will try to update soon ...
Edited by pranita01041985 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
😔

pls comment to my note's
Edited by pranita01041985 - 10 years ago

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