Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #5 OS 8 1~7 Link to #6: Pg 1 - Page 65

Oh ladies, Shri 420, one of my mum's favourite movie! What happened to angry young man? Found the right warmth in the storm? Sweet beginning but how will Romeo find Juliet now? Is he going to hang out in LaxmiNagar or look for the rickshawwala to bring his heroine to him? Great start!

wow...super sweey and cute ...i love it..

Hai.. New story.

Awesome start smitha!!! Loved it!!!

awesome

awesome start, love this song" pyaar hua ikrar hua " the ultimate love song

Smita, waiting for the next part.

Smita di, my bribe for u to give an update today..

For The Other Woman:

This was quite literally Didi ki Saut!

A strong, punishing, brave Khushi and a sincere, apologetic, redeeming Arnav ka perrrfeectt balance 👍🏼 Ussme Arnav wooing aur Khushi getting-wooed ka tadka... what an entertaining read!!!

There is always this subtle humor and sensuality in your writing which I admire. Also, I loved the many names Khushi (You) effortlessly came up for Arnav Singh Raizada 😆

Uff yeh Anjali aur usski co-dependency! You really focussed on IPK's Anjali and brought this out well

Also, I loved the 'chutnification' you do by peppering English with Hindi 😃

The pics you post go a long way in reminding me of IPK and giving me visuals to imagine better but when there are too many pics when there are multiple posts on one page then not all pics load/ the page doesnt load/ my browser crashes 😭