Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #5 OS 8 1~7 Link to #6: Pg 1

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pree2605

@pree2605

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#511

Awesome end..

Loved d story entirely...

Waiting fr a new one..

Thnxx fr email..

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nihasan

@nihasan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#512

Omg has it ended

I'm going to miss this a lot

Superbly crafted story

I'm gonna read this once more

Cnt soon

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Rihanna4all

@Rihanna4all

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#513

Lovely. Despite its serious content during the first half iyou made every update always hilarious . ROFL

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#514

Hahahaha i totally luved d ending.

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#515

Finally dis beautiful story came to an end. M going to miss dis. Plz start new one soon.

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#516

That was quite an abrupt ending, although nice, was expecting to see some more romance & shaadi and all you know...

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Moumita

@_Oorja_

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#517

wonderful!! the journey of the other woman becoming the only woman cannot be more beautiful and sweeter than this. Smita like everytime u again won our hearts. god bless you darling. be the magic weaver as u are always.

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sheshnag1952

@sheshnag1952

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#518

Nice ending to a wonderful story. Loved it. Hope u write more of these. Please do write more.

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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#519

Lovely ending! I will miss these two...

...but you will write another story, right?😉😆

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#520

This is the right time to show you how much I love you Smitaji.😳
Another beautiful story ended and as usual we all were waiting/demanding for the next update.
Now that it ends so beautifully...we all are waiting of one jhalak of your next story.
As usual I would like to thank you for writing beautiful stories on Arshi...Reshu a BIG Thank you to you too for posting it.🤗

Here is my another Love note for you Smitaji...

I wish I could hug you...do me a favor, give a tight hug to you lovely daughter and think that I am receving the love from you.😆

so please give us next story ASAP😳

I wish I could tell you..😳

and finally the three magical words

😳 🤗

aap hamaare saamane nahi toh kya hua hum kissu toh de hi sakte hai...

I really love the way you write each story. I love this hatke OS where Shyam was their Sutradhar..
loved the way Khushi always called him by new name...
He was smitten by her beauty n innocence..
and Khushi was living in the ocean of his Love..
Many readers asked you to write an epilogue of this beautiful OS hope and with the same.
Will you please give an epilogue Lady Santa???!!!!!😳

last but not the least..

aap chaaho ya naa chaaho...
HUm aapki hai Deewani...😳😆

lots of love for my Fruit n Nut.
take care of youselves.

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