ArHi SS: Quiet places (Read warning) [Completed]

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#191

This was good. It tackled the issues within marriage, partners quite well with both of them finally finding a solution to their happiness and that is growth with time. I liked Khushi for finally voicing what she wants and needs from Arnav.

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Very intense and well described piece of writing dear... Nice story:-))

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#193

A fitting end to the SS...or should I say a promising start to a balance, that will find the duo freed, despite the fetters?

Good one as always, RB.

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Natalia

@Natalia

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#194

With all the hoopla going on about 50 Shades of Grey currently, this story kinda fits and feels understandable (sorta). I too still need for some adjusting to do to this arrangement but of it all what matters is the togetherness and the understanding one holds for one another! A very different concept! Appreciated!

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#195

every man has his own antarctica which he himself is afraid to explore due to discretion of society.Given a chance he would proceed but one single opposition and he will cower away. he let khushi have control but being a novice at this she too needed time ...but all's well that ends well, they got the balance right. Very well written👏

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Read this story and I can't figure what was really going now :(

Never a poetic person and never understand the underline meaning and so I really dnT understand the problem between arshi here :(

Who can help me explains what happen here?

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#197

woah... what a story... loved the way you portrayed it all... nd your writing style is real unique... beautifully put... this explaining, understanding, acceptance and balance... all that a happy marriage needs... and they have it all... so from now on things will be better for sure... loved the story...

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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

Voyager

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Spoonai
Read this story and I can't figure what was really going now :(
Never a poetic person and never understand the underline meaning and so I really dnT understand the problem between arshi here :(

Who can help me explains what happen here?

They don't have a problem. Arnav has a preference which Khushi discovers by accident. She questions moral implications of such act.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#199

This shows up on my "My Posts" and I sneak a moment to rekindly my memory and this is what I discover

He arranges himself around her like a human blanket and tells her a story of a heart broken star in an old universe.

Your ability to turn a phrase is something else. Above the novelty of your concepts and the beauty of the language you use, it is this that makes for that extra punch!

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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

Voyager

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: meera30
This shows up on my "My Posts" and I sneak a moment to rekindly my memory and this is what I discover
He arranges himself around her like a human blanket and tells her a story of a heart broken star in an old universe.

Your ability to turn a phrase is something else. Above the novelty of your concepts and the beauty of the language you use, it is this that makes for that extra punch!

I am trying to write something like this - like the sentence above for a FF I am working on but I am not able to. I am counting words, keeping sentences short and poignant - as much as possible. 100 words a day exercise by Greenteaholic has bummed out Rockbarbie 😆