Gustakh dil (DARK) sandhir ff link for thread#2 added - Page 11

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

hey Parul di! i read all parts once ago

its dam interesting fab superb awesome

lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely

everything was very very interesting.

5 years leap... sandhir got married..

sanyu had a son...

rd torture her... o sanyu ko uski family sa bhi milna nahi data.. really bad.

poor sanyu... akhir flashback ma kya huya tha...

very very nice and amazing parts.

love it. update asap.😃

please pm me. when you update next part.😳

will surely pm u anu
& thanks dear

CHAPTER 4

s: chalo go & sit there(dinning table) muma will take 2 minutes more

v: OK my super mum a

(to which sanyu gave a giggle )

R: what's up champ?(hugs him )

V: nothing dad
just waiting for muma to bring breakfast

S: aare ay rhe hu virat , I asked for 2 minutes & usme bi yeh sab(serves food for both of them. Firstly she served RD , while serving she didn't dare to look into his eyes but He was looking at her wanted her to look at him but all in vain as after serving to him she took her seat in front to RD and started feeding virat from her hands as he has a habit of eating from her hands)

S: (faking anger) virat !!!!!
is this a right way to eat? eat properly


(virat runs from her laps to RD 's lap and settled there to avoid her deadly glares)
S: I had told you to eat properly & u are moving from one end to another

v: mom if u want me to eat then come here and help me in eating

sanyu eyes gave a blank expression which was not liked by RD

S:(settled herself near RD's chair) Jo ab toh breakfast kar lo

v: dad
R: hmm
v:dad!! R: what champ I'm listening

v: dad today is raksha bandhan and look my wrist is empty till now
riya didi(ankit daughter) and mom hum vha kab jaege?

( now it was a limit for her she shouted and puts her frustration of RD on virat which was noticed by RD)

s: yeh sab kya lagaya hua ha
we are not going anywhere. agar bhuk lage toh tumhre dad tumko khila denga
(moves towards room)

v:(crying) no one loves me dad you are always busy in your work & now mom is also

R: champ itz OK I have a plan jisae tum riya se rakhi bandhwa dena

v: but mom
r: usko toh tumko manana padaga

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V: may I come in mom..(no response while RD was looking from some other view) are ma bi na buddhu hu who on this earth would take permission to come in my room(goes on the bed while she was hidding herself because she was continuously crying

V: sorry mom (hugs her) you know the ILU so much more then dad & everything

S: (takes him in her arms) beta so jao
muma is tired

R:(jaw dropping. because he saw sanyu backless blouse & what shocked him more was virat's arm on her..he is jealous but wait. from his own son)
virat ho gya kya?

V: yup DAD

she is sleeping so we can Go out as riya would be waiting for her gift.
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evening
both reached home

v: muma muma (hugs her) how you feeling now I hope you are OK (touching her forehead)
s:I'm f9 son but wait yeh rakhi?

v: riya Di Ne bhandi thi wo sunshine resort ma..papa left gye the mujhe
and mom here your gift ankit uncle has send for you

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sandhir room
s:how dare you
tum mera beta ko bi mera against karna chate ho?
.R: shut up
wo mera beta bi ha.
ma bacho ka rakhi kharab ni karna chata tha that q I did that

s: badi jaldi yad aye tumhe uski
tab toh ni aye when suggested abotation

R: he sealed her mouth WD her to stop her talks
& slides his hands to her bare back
(suddenly she pushes him hard)

S: ma tumhare unn s**ts ki tarha ni hu jinke pass usually tum night spend krte ho
& aj achanak bade family man ban rhe o.


precap virat cuteness can it bring sandhir close.
NO PROOF READING

The update was amzng yr
Moi luved it to the core

Virat he's so cute
Sanyu ne rd k saara gussa virat pr nikal di

Rd virat ko le gya rakhi k lia bina btae
She was so angry on him


Precap intrstng
Wtng

Update soon
Keep smiling

Honestly telling, the update was quiet nice..
But you can do it much better..
Just keep on going with the different ideas..
Whatever it is, it was really nice!
#zumi ^_^
P.S dont get offended by my comment.
Its a friendly advice.!

Originally posted by: parsh_addict

nice😊

updt soonish plz

thanks

Originally posted by: newmoon18

The update was amzng yr
Moi luved it to the core

Virat he's so cute
Sanyu ne rd k saara gussa virat pr nikal di

Rd virat ko le gya rakhi k lia bina btae
She was so angry on him


Precap intrstng
Wtng

Update soon
Keep smiling

thanks rashu dear

Originally posted by: Paramharshita

Honestly telling, the update was quiet nice..
But you can do it much better..
Just keep on going with the different ideas..
Whatever it is, it was really nice!
#zumi ^_^
P.S dont get offended by my comment.
Its a friendly advice.!

hahahaha
I didn't get offended darlo
& thnkZ

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Chapter 5

soon she got a slap on her face

R: how dare you? tum hare himmat kse hue RSS ko cheap bolne ki.
jab se tumse marriage hue ha meri toh life hi kharab o Gye.
tum kya unko s**ts bolti o look at yourself tum kya ho
...mujhse nafrat karti thi then also you marry me?
Aur Aur yeh apne dress dkho(blouse) backless dress tum phn ti o
AB BOLO?

S:(stunned) shut up Mr rss
tum kya mujhe s**ts bolte o let me refresh your memory ma nhi tum mera pheche the college ma.
TUM NE MERA RAPE KIYA THA(CRYING) MAINE TUMHE NHI BULYA THA. TUMHARI VAJHHE SE MERI INSULT HUE ... YOU GOT ME PREGNANT DAMMIT... PHIR JAB MA PREGNANT HUE TOH YOU ASKED ME FOR ABORTION ... NOW YOU ARE SAYING THAT IT WAS I TO BLAME.
WO THO BECAUSE OF YOUR DAD YOU MARRY ME ...
TUM TOH ITNE GIRA HUE INSAN HO TUM TOH APNE HI BACHE KO ABORT KARNE KO BOL RHE THE & KNOW YOU ARE SAYING THAT HE IS TOO YOUR SON
SHAME ON YOU
5 YEARS SE TUM NHI MA TUMHE JHAL RHE HO
GHUT GHUT K JEE RHI HU MA TUMHRE SATH(Fells on the floor crying & he was quite of shocked that in their 5 years marriage she never took this topic and now she is literally bursting over him)

RD: ACHA AGAR ASE THA THO AB JAO NA ABI BHI YOU ARE FREE TO LEAVE ME

s: I wish I could do that ... but because of my son I can't just do that... my virat don't no why loves you so much ... in return you dont even loves him half .
And coming to my clothes what I wear & what not that is NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS... abi tak toh ghar ma phna tha na that back less blouse ab toh gher k bhar bi phanuji

R:sanyu ( clutches her elbow) you are not a s**t you are my wife & a mother of my son so better behave like one(did he really regards her as his wife? his heart asked question from his brain but he empowered his hatred & washed his thoughts by saying to himself that she is only the mother of his kid nothing more) and...
(heard some voice)


v:muma muma
where are you

s:(settled herself & wiped her face) I'm in my room beta.
and you don't ever in your dreams think that I'm doing anything for u coz u are not worth it

V: muma mujhe sona ha chalo
are papa aj apki koe meeting nhi ha kya ?

R: no son but why?

v: coz dad we are not used to see you around this time ...bye dad

s: ajao beta let's sleep

v: muma but what abt the story

s: I'm little tired today. plz sleep
v: OK muma(both covers themselves with quilt)

R: champ

v: yes dad
R: actual I have changed my decision
my meeting is not much important so I'm also joining you

Sanyu was shocked

s: beta chalo let's go to your room to sleep

R:(holds her wrist lovingly in front of kid) Darling khi Aur kyu why not here only in same bed in a single quilt what says champ?

v: absolutely dad

Originally posted by: coolishparul

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Well, most of the people do.
Actually I think you are not one of them.
Anyways, my pleasure