ArShi TS: It Was You All Along (Last Part - Pg 54) *COMPLETED* - Page 34

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...now this is what I call a happy ending
thank you so much for extending your story...
it was pleasure to read your story
thank you for the pm
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Loved the way their relationship progressed...taking care of each other comfort and their confession is adorable...It was you all along...always...how sweet. I notice now Arooma that in your both stories Arnav is a second husband of Khushi. Is it a coincidence or you plan it that way.

I loved the way you have portrait his insecurities about Khushi getting pregnant...very well written. Loved the way Muskaan took care of her little brother.
Brilliant last chapter...beautiful story with an extremely beautiful ending. Thanks for extending this story...love you Arooma.


hahahahaaa 😆... well i haven't notice it until you said it ... another reader also mention the same about Arnav being married first. 😛
i haven't planned it dear ... its just came out that way ... now to think of it ... the next TS is also like this so after reading urs and other comment i decided to drop the idea ... so i wont be writing another TS ...
will think of something else ... 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Bubbles76


hahahahaaa 😆... well i haven't notice it until you said it ... another reader also mention the same about Arnav being married first. 😛
i haven't planned it dear ... its just came out that way ... now to think of it ... the next TS is also like this so after reading urs and other comment i decided to drop the idea ... so i wont be writing another TS ...
will think of something else ..


No no no please Arooma, I really want you to write another story...I don't mind reading where Arnav is married before...as long it is about our ARSHI. I don't know who is your other reader give the same comment as me. But really dear don't just disappoint your reader with not writting another TS. Just a request😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor


No no no please Arooma, I really want you to write another story...I don't mind reading where Arnav is married before...as long it is about our ARSHI. I don't know who is your other reader give the same comment as me. But really dear don't just disappoint your reader with not writting another TS. Just a request😛



i will write that TS but not now ... i will write another one ... you dont know how many ideas i have written down for the stories ... u will be shocked to know the count of it ... so i will write on another idea ... but after some weeks ... first i have to update YRMND ... for which i am not getting time :( and yesterday while working i got pain in my right hand ... :(

but trying my best to take time out between office work :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Bubbles76



i will write that TS but not now ... i will write another one ... you dont know how many ideas i have written down for the stories ... u will be shocked to know the count of it ... so i will write on another idea ... but after some weeks ... first i have to update YRMND ... for which i am not getting time :( and yesterday while working i got pain in my right hand ... :(

but trying my best to take time out between office work :)


I want to read all your ideas dear😉...just bring it on😆...but you are right and take your time...I can wait.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor


I want to read all your ideas dear😉...just bring it on😆...but you are right and take your time...I can wait.


soch lo ... 3, 4 of them ... Arnav is married before and in other 3 khushi is married before ... sorry but i cant help it ... that thing is needed for the story that i have thought of ...but of course they will be together after the hardships ... many readers here will not be ok with it ... 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Bubbles76


soch lo ... 3, 4 of them ... Arnav is married before and in other 3 khushi is married before ... sorry but i cant help it ... that thing is needed for the story that i have thought of ...but of course they will be together after the hardships ... many readers here will not be ok with it ... 😛


Soch liya madam...I will still read them all...as long as our ARSHI are together in the end...I am fine with it. I don't think anybody else will have any problem with it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor


Soch liya madam...I will still read them all...as long as our ARSHI are together in the end...I am fine with it. I don't think anybody else will have any problem with it.


OK great then ,,,, will surely write ... 😊 but after few weeks ok ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh wow, this is an incredibly beautiful o/s
thanks so much for the dm x
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Posted: 10 years ago
really liked it... amazing ts.
there progression in relation..
her pregnancy, his inner turmoil...
finally happy ending...
keep it up

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