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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

lol I don know dear maybe today or tomorrow , cause not me but another one is updating so if again she gives me dhoka 🤢then I will update .😉 I have already written the next part dear but don know when will I update ! 😳

Oh ho itna confusion! Koi baat nahi, update whenever you want to! Don't wait for the dhoka na khud hee update karle!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Oh ho itna confusion! Koi baat nahi, update whenever you want to! Don't wait for the dhoka na khud hee update karle!😉

i know right total siyapaa 😕 yeah maybe I should do that lol 🤣 par uske baad meh dokha baz banjaungi na 😉 but I don know maybe I will update lol 😳 and finally I have made my one reader restless 😆 woah an achievement 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

i know right total siyapaa 😕 yeah maybe I should do that lol 🤣 par uske baad meh dokha baz banjaungi na 😉 but I don know maybe I will update lol 😳 and finally I have made my one reader restless 😆 woah an achievement 😊

Absolutely! An acheivment! Anyhow update fast now. I'll wait!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Absolutely! An acheivment! Anyhow update fast now. I'll wait!😉

lol I m happy as anything 🤪 🤣 Lol . Don worry about the update it will come soon and will come today only just wait for half hour plz within it new update will come dear 😳 hope u will wait for sometime 😉
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Chapter 12: Two voices Meant to be one


Draupadi was all set to start the next practice session with Arjun. Today was supposed to be a special one in which they worked on their chemistry as well as their knowledge of the rhythm and tunes of music. She looked through the print out that Arjun had e-mailed her last night. She smiled to herself she could not believe khadoos sahib could choose such a heart- warming song. She loved its flow and lost in humming its tune she was shocked to find herself in the dining with Dhris listening to her tunes with an amused but at the same time appreciative look. Seeing her blush and stop he wolf-whistled and said sarcastically, "Seem like the love is in the air for someone, right D!"

"Love who me? Sorry bro, but no one has been able to charm this fiery heart. Talking about love life. Who's the lucky girl these days? I guess she is the 15th lucky girl right bro."

"Don't talk about love with me. I seriously believe that nothing like love exists in this cold hearted harsh world. The girl you are talking about left me for a nerd. Left the soft- hearted prince charming Dhris Khurana for a nerd!! That's why people say never to trust a girl."

Draupadi sighed this sort of problem seemed to happen with herb brother every day. But leaving him for a nerd he laughed inwardly. Trying her best not to let her brother see her amusement in his "dukhi" situation. "Oh that's bad Dhris. Don't let this keep you down. I am sure their will be someone somewhere who will open up the gates of your heart and remain there as your queen. And you will recover from this too just like you recovered from the previous 14 breakups. And bro I think that the saying is the other way around, never trust a boy."

"D this one is different all the girls were dumped by me but this one dumped and broke my heart into fragments."

"So it's all right when you break their hearts but now when one stand up and leaves you it's not fair!"

"Come on D even you are on her side are you her sister or my? What happened to ek hazooro mein mera bhai'."

"Its ek hazooro mein meri behena hai' and being a girl I will obviously support a girl, bro. Don't worry your perfect better half is waiting for you around the corner." She said thinking about her best friend Chitra. "Anyway gtg Khudoos hates lateness and I will have to bear with his tanoos if I get even a minute late."

"Best of luck D. If that khudoos the great Arjun bothers you too much tell me I will settle scores with him."

Draupadi smiled at that comment thinking that they were really siblings as her brother hated that over smart as much or even more than she did and hurried off to the practice venue.

When she reached there she was shocked to find that for the first time khadoos was late. Now it was her turn to make him listen some tanoos.

After almost an half an hour. She hears quick steps and saw an out of breath Arjun arrive looking completely flustered.

"Sorry for being late. I had some quick errands to run."

"You were the one that told me that never to rely on excuse right? So you had to keep this meeting above your errands' right, arya."

"I apologized right Panchali. Now quit smarting over me and get what we have come here for right. What don't you just let out all your emotions out in the song?"

"If he comes late makes excuses and has to be forgiven. But when I come late I have to hear his tanoos for an hour. This called justice."

Picking up the lyric and handing Draupadi one. Arjun replied calmly "Did you just say something Panchali."

Thinking of not getting on his nerves. She too letting the topic end said, "What did you hear? I said let's get on the practice just like you said." She picked the paper he was handing her.

Both of them glared at each other. And resumed their practice.

Their emotions changed as their voices found perfect match with each other."

Both: Nahi jeena tere baaju

Nahi jeena, nahi jeena

Nahi jeena tere baaju

Nahi jeena, nahi jeena (x2)

(tere baaju: without you)

As they never could live without each other. They were really two bodies with one soul.

Arjun: Main tenu samjhawan ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

Main tenu samjhawan ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera

Main karoon intezar tera

Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

No matter what they said what they felt they never could live without each other. The only comfort they felt was with each other. This hunger for each other was about a millennium about. Even now this hunger was not satisfied and Arjun was living solely only to make his own his own only his own..

Arjun:

Main tenu samjhava ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera

Main karoon intezar tera

Tu dil tui yon jaan meri

Main tenu samjhawa ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

Panchali has never actually understood the his hunger and love for her. How the great archer Arjun was died everyday to see her living her life with so much pain and misery. And thing he could do was wait and wait

Arjun:

Mere dil ne chun laiyaa ne

Tere dil diyaan raahan

Tu jo mere naal tu rehta

Turpe meriyaan saaha

Jeena mera.. hoye

Hun hai tera, ki main karaan

Tu kar aitbaar mera

Main karoon intezar tera

Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

Main tenu samjhawan kee

Na tere bina lagda jee

His heart was never his but that of Panchali ever since he had set his eyes on her. His life and his soul lived and loved her and only her. The aim of his life was her happiness and most I importantly her forgiveness..

Panchali:

Ve changa nahion keeta beeba

Ve changa nahion keeta beeba

Dil mera tod ke

Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan

Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan

Naal tere jod ke

Tenu chadd ke kitthe jawan

Tu mera parchhanvaa

Tere mukhde vich hi main taan

Rab nu apne pawaan

Meri duaa.. haaye

Sajda tera kardi sadaa

Tu sun iqraar mera

Main karoon intezar tera

Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

Even if she was divided among five. Her heart belong to her one. Her Arjun. In every prayer, in her every word was his shadow and his love.

Main tainu samjhawan ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

Their this wait was to be fulfilled this time as this yug was for them and their love...

TBC

Sneak a peek: Amit was outside with his mouth hanging open at such amazing performance hearing to the voices which was meant to be each other. But there was a significant problem or a significant problem creator.

Hope u like it plz bear with the mistakes and do leave your thoughts. Thank you for giving your time..

Edited by areshauchiha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
God aresha first of all u finally updated thank god and it is so good 👏 badiyaa tha yaar . Bahut chaangi thi aresha 😃 loved Dhris and drau convo and your explanation was really good on the song . lol loved it 😆
Edited by Texie-Shady - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was too good 😳
I loved the song choice your explanation too much dearie🤗
Edited by .Sanskruti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow nice update dear!!!😃
Soothing song mixed with emotions of the eternal couple!!!😛
Loved it continue soon!!!😳
Edited by Sanjana_JA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
aawwhh this is such a great chappie...
now a dys almost all ardi FF s are running painful stories.. good to see some happiness..
n the song... awwwhh wwwooowww... one of my favs!!

ha ha!!! i loved Draupadi n Dhris convo.. "D".. ummm... loved tht too... n 15 girls.. omg!!! dhris toh rambo nikla!! 😆

Edited by Krishnaa_Nair - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

God aresha first of all u finally updated thank god and it is so good 👏 badiyaa tha yaar . Bahut chaangi thi aresha 😃 loved Dhris and drau convo and your explanation was really good on the song . lol loved it 😆

Jo sikha he aap se ho to sikha hai, sam. 😳
Aap ke hi achievements ko aghe badyaya hai. Thanks will do more better next tym.. 😊

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