SANDHIR FF- DISGUISED LOVE (ON HOLD TILL MARCH) - Page 3

Originally posted by: prushasil

R u mad!!?? how can u call that boring!!??

i guess u r not well! LOL! just kidding don't mind!

coming to the story - OMG! the concept and the cs is just...umm...i don't know!

awesome is such a small word to describe the story! can't wait to read further! please dear update soon!
aur title - sorry dear abhi kuchh samajh nahi aa raha hai! main in sab chizo mein bohot bohot bohot hi zyada bekar hoon!😭

Originally posted by: SWA1992

awesome yar. cs padne ke bad, i become restless. plz update soon...

Originally posted by: andy1245

nice 😊

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

Title - Disguised love
Coming to the update, I really loved the concept! Yes, it is unique and no where to be found concept! Loved the whole storyline as well as character sketch! Can't wait to see how sanyukta is successful staying disguised as altogether a different human being!
Can't wait! I am damn excited! Continue asap!
Thanks for pm'ing!
Lots of love,
Karishma. :* <3

Originally posted by: himaniagrawal12

nice cs

continue soon

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal

Lovely cs👍🏼

Originally posted by: coolishparul

awesome

CHAPTER-1

It was a new day in FITE... Most of the candidates of 1st year had already arrived... The collage was all bright with the chirp of students.. back after vecations... Seniors ragging the freshers... a long queue at the admin office with student submitting their forms... while new beds being arranged in hostels to be occupied by freshers...
And amidst to all a girl entered the corridors of FITE... wearing a navy blue kutra, maroon patiyala & duppata... With silver aluminum bangles in both hands... & a side division of hair and tied into simple plates... A trolley suitecase being pulled by her...
standing in the corridor... she breathed a sigh of relief "Finally!! India" "FITE" she smiled lightly "Im here!!" her smile grew wider...
And with that she started walking in search of admin office...
"My new home for next 4years... But gonna miss u mumma papa & bhai" she said to herself with a sad smile
"abh yeh admin office kaha hai?? Uff..."
she saw 2 guys... chitting-chatting... And walking...
"excuse me... kya aap mujhe bataa sakte hai ki admin office kaha hai??" she asked the 2
in return... those 2 gave her a wicked smile...
Guy1-"kaho toh hum hi lift dede..." He said eying her
She was going to fire back but controlled herself
*in mind- shit! Yeh lafange... huh! Idiots... inka toh mai muh tod du... per Sanyu abhi control ker... Tu Sanyukta Agrawal wala attitude nahi dikha sakti... tujhe Riya Sharma banke rehena hai... so control*
S-"last time... im asking... can u plz tell me where the admin office is??" he tried to be calm & polite
G2-"aur nahi bataya toh??" and there came his reply
S-"then get lost" with that she hurriedly left the place with her suitcase...
later she somehow reached the admin office... submitted her form... and left for girl hostel..
She saw the warden of Girls hostel... And went to her
S-"excuse me! Im San...*bitting her toung* im mean... im Riya Sharma... new ward 1st year... can u tell me the room allotted to me...
Warden-" Riya Sharma?? Ruko! Dekti hu abhi... Ha! Yeh room no. 205... chalo mai tumhe le chalti hu"
S-"ji!"
she left to go to her room with the warden..
on reaching the door of her room 205 she witness a sense... three girls in room... one of them was unpacking her stuff... the other one was reading something sitting on bed... and the third one seems like was searchin something... an irritated look on that girl's face
W-"ahem! Ahem!" warden made a voice to get the attention of 3
all three stood up at their places... and warden entered the room... With Sanyu behind her..
W-"ha toh ladkiyon... yeh hai tumhari chauthi room mate... Riya Sharma... *to Sanyu* in teen ke saath rehena hai tujhe.. hostel ke rules inhi se puch lena... Mai chalti hau... " and she left the place...
Sanyu gave them a small smile... while the 2 of them keep standing there... while one of them resume her searching..."1 of the 2 came forward... literally jumping... and forward her hand for a hand shake
"HEY!!!Riya... Im Arpita!! Ist year ME... u r from which stream?" she introduced herself with a bright smile
S-"hey! Im also from ME ist year"
second girl-"cool!! Well im Kaustuki... me too ME 1st year" she too said with a cute smile
in reply... Sanyu also passed her a smile...
then her gaze shifted to the third one... who was still busy in throwing her stuff here & there...
S-*in mind- God knows what she is searching for??* she thought confused
S-"hi!! Im Riya... u??" she said looking at the 3rd girl's direction
3rd girl-"just shut up!! Will u??" she said rudely
Sanyu was shocked by her reply... Arpita sensed it...
A-"well she is Vidhushi! Im sorry from her side... actually thori irritated hai.. isliye aise bola.." she said trying to clarify
S-"no.. it ok" she said with a smile... but was still upset with her rudeness...
And as soon as Sanyu completed her sentence, Vids Shouted
V-"eekkksss!!! Mill gaya... finally!!!" she said finding her phone frm behind her pillow.. she kissed her phone "thank god" then she looked at Sanyu's direction "Hi! Im Vidhushi... ME 1st year... sorry for my rudeness... voh actually mera phone nahi mill raha ta... aur mom was gonna call me... aur ager mai unka phone pick nahi ker pati... toh voh tensed ho jati... n I don't want that" and she keep on blabbering being genuinely sorry...
S-"yeah-yeah! Its ok" she said with a smile
S-"vaise do u both know eachother from before??" she asked about Vids and Arpita
A-"actually... its now we 2.. its we three... we 3 are school days besties"
S-"wow! Nice"
V-"and now u r joining our group" she said smiling
S-"thx"
K-"tum yahi khadi rehene wali hai? Take ur bed... here this one beside mine"
S-"ha"
she kept her bag beside her bed... (Sanyu's and Kastu's were placed vertically... while Vids bed was kept horizontally at Sanyu's side... while Arpita's bed was kept horizontally by Kaustu's bed)
V-"vaise Riya tum suites hi pehenti ho kya?? No jeans?" she asked
S-*in mind- Jeans? Ha kabhi-kabhi but most of the time I wear SHOTS... Aur yaha yh salwar-suite pehena pad raha hai...argghh..."
S-"Na! kabhi nahi! Mai suites hi pehenti hu... im from a traditional family"
K-"vaise where r u from??"
S-" Du *bittin her toung* *in mind- pagal hai Sanyu?? Dubai bolne ja rahi thi??* mmm durr nahi hai zyada... Noida ke pass ek chotti si place hai.. vaha se..."
A-"hmm... vaise we all r from delhi"
S-"ok! Vaise tumhare group mai bass yum hi teeno ho??"
V-"nahi re! 5 ladke bhi hai... humara group humare school se famous hai" she smiled
A-"aisa karo... go get freshen up.. tabh hum tumhe baki sabse milla dege..."
S-"ok!" she stood up from bed
Arpita noticed Kastu looking at Sanyu very keenly
A-"kaustu? Tu kya usse ghoor rahi hai??
Sanyu's gaze shifted towards Kastu who was looking at her
K-"Guys!Dont u think iski shakal Kisi se millti hai?" she said confused
A&V-"kisse?"
K-"voh Sanyukta Agrawal se" she said still confused
A&V also got confused and stared at Sanyu's face
S-*in mind*-Shit!! Issne pehechan liya mujhe?? Mai India mai famous ho gayi kya?? Yeh kaise janti hai mujhe... Sanyu kuch ker!!!"
S-"yeh kaun hai? Tum sabhki koi dost hai kya?? She acted
V-"u don't know her??" she asked slightly shocked
A-"itni shock kyu ho rahi hai?? She is not too famous...hum toh usse Randhir ki vajhase thora jaante hai..."
And this made Sanyu more confused... "Randhir??"she thought
V-"hmm... sahi hai!"
A-"Aur Kaustu... tujhe aise hi laga hoga..."
K-"hmm..maybe... mai bhi uss Rd ki sangat mai pagal ho gayi hu"
Vidhushi giggled at her response...
V-"Riya... now go n freshen up... then we will go out"
S-"ok!!" and with that Sanyu went to the washroom...
& the 3 sat together... chitting-chatting some more...
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so how was it??