RaBir FF -A Cast of Characters chapter 97/98 & Epilogue pg121/2 (4

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Nurit

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Great Update dear
That evil sonal I was know she plan same thing I hope noting bad will happens.
I wish Kabir will back home but then maybe it will not be good idea to leave Naomi alone because Sonal want to get Naomi too. Hate you sonal 😡

thanks for pm sorry for late comment

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RaBir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#572

Put new part soon Kelly ji. We all wait too long 😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: RaBir
Put new part soon Kelly ji. We all wait too long 😊

Have been ill but hoping to post this weekend.

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RaBir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: crtkelly
Have been ill but hoping to post this weekend.

Oh sorry I no know. Take time feel better first. 😊 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: crtkelly
I'm backtracking in my responses, but had to. @bold, I love that show, although I haven't seen it in some time. The guy Randy is great, he knows his stuff😆 Hmm maybe the show must have imparted some subliminal info, that made me write that scene as I did, because I hadn't even made the connection until you mentioned it ! Glad you enjoyed it though Nivi!

I love Randy! He is always spot on with his suggestions and picks 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: crtkelly
Aww I was waiting for your added comments, but I expect you've been super busy Nivi. That's ok, I still get that you liked it 😆

Well our couples are about to be separated geographically now, so I'm sure anything can and will happen now . I hope you have the time to read and enjoy the next update.

I finally updated my comment on page 71 Kelly. Have a look when you get a chance. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chapter 45:

I think Vihaan and Naomi's bonding is absolutely precious. It resembles in many ways the lines I have tried to build between Rachna and Karan in my own story. From what I have seen with my cousins who are married, they all share a very friendly bond with their respective devars; it's like having a friend, brother, and helping hand all rolled into one. I have even seen one of my cousins share a closer bond with her devar than with her own brother; that's how endearing this relationship can be. 😊

Sonal's plan is set into action it seems. I'm a bit confused with whether this accident is just a ploy or if she is actually injured though. 😕

Poor Sanjay, I really feel for him. I hope his custody is transferred to Rachna and Kabir, and that he gets his happy ending soon. Sonal really doesn't deserve him. 😒

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chapter 46:

Okay so the accident really happened and Sonal just took full advantage of the situation. 😡

I am intrigued by mystery person A and B; the cast of characters is becoming larger. 😆

I have a feeling that things are going to get way out of hand before someone realizes Sonal's truth. But seeing Kabir's overprotective brotherly nature, I don't think that he will let Abhi come within 100 feet of Naomi if he gets even a small whiff that Sonal and Abhi are together. Thankfully Rachna also has Rajeev with her.

The nightmares of US immigration; I can totally relate. 😭

**All caught up 😃

Now I am waiting to see what you have in store for us next. Update whenever you can. Hope you feel better soon. 😊

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Nurit

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: crtkelly
Have been ill but hoping to post this weekend.

Kelly you not reply to my comment 😭

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: RaBir
Oh wow what twist!! Kelly ji you become twist cliff hanger queen after Nivi now. 😆

I like Rajeev care Rachna. Look like all okay in Kabir Naomi friend but now what Sonal doing? Who man woman at hotel? Update soon!

There is a definite storyline I'm following, and I am glad you are enjoying it. Scheming Sonal you know she is up to no good, she's just enlisted some help now😉

I hope you enjoy the next update.

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