Series of os - The perfect spouse...!!!updated 15/10/14 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: heyogirlie

OML !

THIS IS TOOO GOOD !!
I LOVE SUCH SERIES OF SHORT OS !
THEY R SSLY STRESS BUSTERS FOR ME...
FEELING TOO WOW AFTER READING THEM !!
V COOLISH UPDATE...
NEXT ONE SHOT ASAP
THANK U SO MUCH FOR THE PM
LORD BLESS ALL
LOVE
MANSI




Thanks a lot mansi..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi2012

Hey jan m sooo sry...
I knw m hell late.
So so sooo lovely update yaar. 😊😊😊
It ws really awesm...
I jst loved dis update frm d core of my heart. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
4 dis part hats off grl. 👏 👏 👏
D way u hv described their love bonding...
I dnt hv wrdzzz.
Really. 👏👏👏
Omg!!! rd loves her so much. 😳 😊
He tuk cr of each n evry small small thngs.
So, dat she dnt feel alone.

Jan seriously last 2 updates to yaar wht should I say!!!!!!
N specially dis1. 😊😊😊
1ce again hats off... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Waiting 4 d nxt part...
Continue soon,

Love,
Mahi ❤️







Awww..!!! Thanks a lot mahi..!!
Love youuu
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

OMG! IT WAS SHORT AND SWEET! LOVED IT!
The way Randhir left the signs and his feelings there, was so adorable! I loved the tenderness and love they posses for each other!
Loved it!
And finally when you portrayed sanyukta's happiness over seeing him on the doorstep, was lovely!continue soon!
Thanks for pm'ing!
In a hurry, isiliye short comments!

Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3




It's okay karishma...!!
Thanks a lot..!!
Glad you liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Wow awesome and cute as well loved reading it continue soon😊



Thanks manal..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww it was so cute
loved it
rd is such a sweetheart
update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: himaniagrawal12

amazing update

adorable sandhir
loved this chapter😊



Thanks..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesomeee loved it...its beautiful...
vese m not interested in dis marriage n all bt if i get some1 like him m always ready...i mean he knows every damn thing sooo sweet mujhe bhi koi aisa chahiye❤️...
beautifully written...
👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MeherS

Awesomeee loved it...its beautiful...
vese m not interested in dis marriage n all bt if i get some1 like him m always ready...i mean he knows every damn thing sooo sweet mujhe bhi koi aisa chahiye❤️...
beautifully written...
👍🏼




Haha...! Thanks dear
Same case here
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh god really happy to see the response...!!! And eagerness for the update after the poll...! Thank you all for so much love...!!! So an ahem ahem update is here...!!





COOKING WITH LOVE...!!



R- yaar kuch music lagana huin...!!!



Ishq bulava jaane kab aave
Ishq bulava aave jab aave..
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta baitha kol tere...


And he went back to the love of his life...!! And hugged her from behind...


R- I love you...

S- I love you too...


And she continued cooking food...!!
Randhir left her and started chopping veggies...!!! Yes they both were making food together...!! How romantic...


R- yeh daal do isme...!!


S- no yeh dhaniya hai...!!! Hume iski zaroorat nahi...!!


R- let's try na...!!


S- Arre Ganda ho jayega taste...!!
( a little frustrated..


R- okay..!! And he kept it away making a sad a face...



Sanyu saw this and hugged him from side and turned him and stood on his foot...!!!



S- yaar itne mehnat Kyu kar rahe hai hum..??? Waise bhi mujhe kuch hot khana hai...!!!


R- bann toh raha hai...!


S- nahi Jo mujhe khana hai woh toh already ready hai...!!!!


She inserted her hands inside his t shirt and made designs on his abs...!! Randhir raised his one eye and sanyu smirked seeing his expression..


R- just leave me..!!!!!



And he mimicked her...!! When she says to leave her...!! Sanyu flared her nostrils and randhir chuckled...!!!!



Sanyu left him and started mixing the ingredients ...!! Now it's randhir turn to make her smile...!!!



He went and hugged her from behind and planted kisses pulling down her tank top...!!! He inserted his finger between her bra strap and pulled it...!!


S- ouch...!


He continues plantings kisses but sanyu was least reacting..!!!



R- pata hai mujhe bhi kuch hot and spicy khane ka Mann hai...!!!!


S- Acha ...!! And she turned around ...!!!


S- close your eyes...! Hot and spicy cheez Milne waali hai tumhe...!!


He smiled and closed his eyes...just then he felt something on his lips..!!!


R- Aah mummy ..!! Sanyu are u mad..??? Aaahh pani...


S- haha... Randhir look at yourself...!!! Haha..!!!


R- sanyu kuch do mujhe...!!


He was about to take bottle when sanyu snatched it and ran inside the drawing room...!!


S- yeh loo...paani...!!


R- Chodo and he rushed to take chocolate when he found sanyu eating it ...!.!!


R- sanyu yaar give...!!!


And he ran behind her...!! After running for a while randhir lay on the sofa and started coughing badly...!!!



Sanyu went near him and gave him water...!!! And brought sugar from kitchen and gave it to him..!!! He felt a little better but guilt was clear on sanyu's face...!!!



Randhir saw her and smiled and pulled her on his lap...!!



R- it's okay...!! But now jab tumne mere saare kapde bhi kharab kar diye hai toh I have to take bath...!!!



S- sorry...tum bath lekar aao main Baaki ka finish karti huin...!!



R- Ek second mujhe ab kuch nahi khana...!! Bas tumhe khana hai..!!!


Sanyu blushed and randhir picked her up..!!!


S- aao..!!! Chodo...!! Mujhe bachao koi...


R- ab tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta ...!!!



He took her inside the bathroom and made her stand under shower..!! He turned on the knob and water came down...!!!!



Disclaimer- mature content ahead..!! Hehe I feel funny giving this warning ...



He cupped her face with one hand and pulled her by her waist...!! She banged on his chest and their lips met...!!! They both were totally drenched ...



Sanyu's top got visible and was driving randhir crazy...!!! Randhir broke the kiss and turned her around ...!



He opened the zip of her tank top and slid through her shoulder...!! He kissed her on her nape making her moan...!!



He removed her tank top and shorts...!!! Sanyu turned around and removed his shirt at one go...!!! Randhir smiled seeing her wildness...!!!



Sanyu slid her hands to his jeans buttons...!!!! She opened the buttons and slid his pants down...!!! Randhir took shampoo and put it in his hands and massaged her head...!!!



Sanyu also took shampoo and massaged his head...!!!! After the massaging session...both kissed each other...the kiss was smooth not hungry...!!!



RAndhir turned off the tap took a bath rob and made sanyu wore that...!! He picked her up and sanyu covered him with the same bath rob...



He went near the bed and kept her softly...!!! He bent down and removed the bath robe and came on top of her...!!!



He attacked her neck and gave love bites...!!! She moaned and made him more turn on...!!


Sanyu turned him and came on top..!!! And planted kisses on his chest ... She came near his ear and spoke huskily



" I love you...!!!!


" I love you too...!!!!



Sanyu bit his ear and rAndhir caged her and pulled in for a kiss..!! He unhooked her bra and pulled her under him...!!!!



He bent down and planted kisses on her breast...! He sucked and nibbled her breasts...!! Sanyu was moaning his name...!! Soon they removed all their clothes...




He kissed her and entered her...!!! She was now used to it...!! She was moaning his name only in pleasure...!!!! They were sweating ...!!!




After a while randhir came and layed beside her...!!! He switched on the ac and took the blanket...!!!



He hugged her and sanyu also snuggled closer and held his hands...!! He kissed on her hair...



S- randhirrr...!!!


R- hmmm...!!


S- yeh sab ke Baad mujhe aur Bhook lag Rahi hai...!! Ab kya khaye??



R- bhukad kitna khaati ho...!!!! Mujhe bhi kitna kha liya...!!!



And he showed his marks and sanyu hit him on his chest...!!!




Here I end...Do comment...thanks for giving so Much love...!!

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