Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #4 OS 7 (32~60) Link to #5:Pg 1 - Page 72

Four lines by himself is a feat itself. Hum hote to kisi gaane ya poem ki parody kar dete..
Khuahi tumne apne bayyfriend ko kis duvidha mein dal diya. Bechara tumhare peeche rowdy, aashiq, majnu singh raizada to ban hi chuka bas shayar banne k kami thi woh tum ab poori karwa rhi ho...
Buaji ke belan ka screen time aagya h...
Waitn...

Oh I loved it - kavi Singh raizada I love u man- do not copy others work - the poetry has to come out of your dil
Lovely update smita
Rashmi, 🤗

😆 am laughing out loud here...

Brilliant update, prem patra really
I can't wait to read it 🤣

:0 how could you leave it like that. I want to read more...!
Loved the updates interested to know what he wrote.

thanks for the early diwali present Smitaji. Happy Deepavali!!!

Awesome...poor Arnav struggling to write his first prem patra...thanks for the PM

Absolutely hilarious update... Arnav writing poetry has to be the day!!! 🤣

Seriously Maami and her poetry. If Khushi hears this she wont fall for Arnav but suicide instead.

Shyam must be having the time of his life laughing at his Saale saab's condition.

This Paagal Singh Raizada should write a prem patra like the song from film "Sangam"

ye mera prempatra padh kar ke tum naraz na hona

ki tum meri zindagi ho, ki tum meri bandagi ho

Originally posted by: canapoem

Seriously Maami and her poetry. If Khushi hears this she wont fall for Arnav but suicide instead.

Shyam must be having the time of his life laughing at his Saale saab's condition.

This Paagal Singh Raizada should write a prem patra like the song from film "Sangam"

meharbaan likhu, hasina likhu ya dilruba likhu

hairan hu ki aapko is khat me kya likhu

ye mera prempatra padh kar ke tum naraz na hona

ki tum meri zindagi ho, ki tum meri bandagi ho