Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #4 OS 7 (32~60) Link to #5:Pg 1 - Page 73

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Posted: 10 years ago
That was hilarious especially Mamiji's idea of a poem! I can't wait to read Buaji's reaction in the next update. I loved this and I can't wait for the next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pixiegirl


Kavi, perfect song to go with this update... 👏


Thanks Geeta, I am just trying to help out this Deewana Singh Raizada get his girl. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh.. such a hilarious update. loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem


Thanks Geeta, I am just trying to help out this Deewana Singh Raizada get his girl. 😳


Kavi, let's hope his shaatir dimaag can come up with some decent lines & he doesn't get beaten up by the belan or chappals... 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pixiegirl


Kavi, let's hope his shaatir dimaag can come up with some decent lines & he doesn't get beaten up by the belan or chappals... 🤣


Imagining that situation I cannot stop laughing. How would it be if buaji ran behind him with a belan in her hand. 😆🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem


Imagining that situation I cannot stop laughing. How would it be if buaji ran behind him with a belan in her hand. 😆🤣


IK, hilarious right?? 😆 Didn't he say he was ready to face buaji's belan?? 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its a lovely story. Very different. Reading it brings a smile. Do keep writing such wonderful stuff. Have loved all your stories till date.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Happy Diwali Rashmi & Smita super update waiting for next update how will be arnav prem patra ?
Arnav prem patra don't make khushi mad.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Looks like this Diwali would be celebrated by us in Laxmi Nagar!!

Happy Diwali to all of you!!!

Great update!!
Shayar Singh Raizada!!!
This was a great role of ASR, never imagined him as this!!
Super!!!

Take Care!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
poor arnav is struggling to write prem patra 😆
waiting to see how it tuned out to be
loved it

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