Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #4 OS 7 (32~60) Link to #5:Pg 1

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

What wouldn't I give to hear your barin and get the whole story already..

Feeling to decipher your thoughts..

Such an unique piece you are.

Brilliant update smitty. I feel its little unfair for kushi but I love this arnav.

All is fair in love and war..

Awesome gal.

Special thanks to rashmi di.. for updating smitty's work.

Will be waiting for the next update already.

So continue soon

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
I was on page 17 for a long time looking over and over for the updTe
Thx for changing number in the title dearest rashmi

Smita that was a great treAt for me _ thoroughly loved it

Rashmi 🤗

Thanks for letting me know...

Was in a hurry!

😔

Edited by rulama - 10 years ago

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Woahh that was fun!!

I am loving Arnav's determination to woo her with love!

The most heartwarming part was when he broke her fast and kissed her...Beautiful picturisation through words dear:)

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

i really love the different names khushi calls arnav singh raizada with.. oh god they are best.. so arnav gave her his mother's necklace.. wait arnav bitwa she will sending this necklace also back through courier.. arnav broke her fast and khushi couldn't even make it out.. oh god khushi is so lost in her raizada.. loved the update.. nobody in their life can suspect with the kind of title of story The Other Woman.. story can be so hilarious.. simply love it a lot.. awesome 😃

thanks for mail 😊