a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 48

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ujwalv

Finally u updated..😃

it was nice..loved it..😊

still nt talking with each other..hopefully honeymoon pe sab solve ho jaye 😛

and end was cute..😳


thanks yaaa
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

Omg diduu
Such Amazing parts
loved it sooo much
damn ur just tooo gud
Okayyy I know its a small comment
Cant help it didu!! I have loads of pms
next time pakka big comments
love u


thanks a lot diyu!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Aniii...

Missed ur updates...

Hmmm about this one
Hayeee...
Loved it to the core...
Loved their nok jok...
The starting was nice...
Hmm so honeymoon is coming...
Im so excited..
To know what u store for my swaron...
I hope in this honeymoon everything will get sort out...

do continue soon...
love to read more...

with lots of love
keechu




thanks keechu di!!! :))
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

so sweet & cute update... loved it... der innocent fights r so awsm... loving it...

plz update soon... 😃


thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: main_tu_hamesha

Wohohoho...finally...wow yaar...kamal kar dia...again something awsome a breathtaking...its unique,sweeet,cute and emotional... loved it... muah bondhu😛


drama queen...idea to tui e dish...
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 15


Sharon was sitting on the bed arranging her clothes into her bag while swayam came inside the room...they had to leave the next day for the airport early morning and he also had to pack...

He brought out his clothes from the cupboard and his back down from the top of the cupboard...he bundled up his clothes without folding them and started putting them in the bag...

Sharon bit her cheeks to stop laughing out...swayam , right from the childhood didn't know how to pack...all his packing were either done by his sister or by his mom or aunt and since he was married now everyone expected that Sharon would do that for him... But well the story was a bit different...these two are not talking to each other...

Swayam went to the washroom to bring his trimmer and shampoo-soap and kept them in the bag...

Sharon stood up and shoved him away from his bag...he frowned and looked at her but then Sharon didn't even spare him a glance and emptied his bag...

"array yeh kya kar rahi hai???" swayam opened his mouth but then again closed it seeing her fold his clothes and putting them in the bag... swayam smiled sheepishly ...

As she was done she went towards her bag before swayam could say a sorry...

"iski problem kya hai yaar?????? Itni kya akar hai?????" a doppelganger popped on swayam's right shoulder...

"problem iski nahi swayam ka hai... isine chillaya na without any reasons..." A second swayam popped out on his right shoulder...

"par sharon ki galati thi na???? usne itni bari baat chupayi swayam se...apni best friend se..." the first swayam argued...

"par swayam bhi to uska best friend hai..use to pata hona chahiye tha... Par lena chahiye tha Sharon ke dil mein kya hai..." The second swayam fought back...

As the two doppelgangers sat on hios shoulder and fought swayam was averting his gaze from each one to the other as they shouted...

"SHUT UP BOTH OF YOU...ab main bolunga aur tum log sunoge..." swayam shouted at the top of his voice and and the two doppelgangers immediately vanished...

"pagal ho kya???? Apne aap mein kiske saath bak rahe ho????" Sharon too shouted...

Swayam was taken aback realizing sharon was there in the room too...

"nahi...wo...nahi...kuch bhi nahi..." Swayam stammered and went inside the washroom as he was highly embarrassed...

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The two of them were sitting in their seats in the flight as it was about to take off...

The air hostess came and offered Sharon some chocolates and she politely refused...the she offered it to swayam who gladly took it and smiled cutely at her...

"thank u" he winked at her... the air hostess smiled back... Sharon knew what swayam was trying to do... she looked out of the window and smiled at herself...

Swayam opened the chocolate and gulped half of it in one go... he then kept the other half on the handle of the seat and went towards the washroom...he knew Sharon won't eat it in front of him...

As soon as swayam moved away Sharon gobbled up the chocolate... Then she looked back to see swayam standing near the washroom door and smiling and talking to that air hostess... The girl was smiling back at him...

Sharon looked away... " thik se flirt karna bhi nahi ata..." she muttered...

Swayam came and sat beside her... and muttered under his breath as if talking to himself but making sure Sharon listens to him... " hot hai yaar..."

Then he looked at Sharon to see her reaction but was shocked to see her sleeping... He made a disgusted face... Sharon smiled pretending to sleep as she could clearly imagine what his reaction would be...

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Swayam and Sharon had checked in the hotel and went to their room...

As they entered the room a beautiful smile broke into sharon's face... it was a sweet cozy room with a huge glass window from where the snow clad mountains of shimla could be seen...sharon cuddled into her cardigan and went near the window and started at the clear blue sky with a huge innocent grin on her face...

Swayam went and stood beside her following her gaze in front... involuntarily Sharon held his hands in her little palm for some warmth in the cold weather of shimla... swayam in return pulled her closer to him as she kept her head on his shoulder feeling each others warmth but yeah , still not talking to each other...


THIS WAS HORRIBLE I FEEL...STILL YAAR...CMNT AUR LIKE KAR DENA..


LOVE ANI

Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohhh finally ^_^
And I'm on time
Not talking but emoting their love in every possible way
be it Sharon packing his bag and Swayam leaving chocolate for Sharon ^_^ how sweet of them
The extra samajhdar wife won't get jealous :v he should understand that she understand him very well and know his ways to grab Sharon's attention :p
I love how you are giving end to the chaps
Not talking but still in each others arms 🤗

Thanks for updating
Make them talk in next please
Now I'm requesting what u asked for would love to get emotional converstation between them Sharon letting all that she went through those years craving for his love as she mentioned in her diary


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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update anni
They are fighting yet comfortable with each other :)
Update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
hayee they r so stubborn
yet not talking BT doing everything for each other
swayam u forgot she is u r best friend she knows u very well so stop pretending u r flirting with someone
poor he trying to monofy
baby ab to inko baat krva de
honeymoon PR aye haina baat nhi kregain to kaise chalega?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Swaron concern n caring nature for each other is soo cute!!!
Sharon packing bag for swayam n swayam leaving chocolate for sharon:-) sweet
Very well written di
Lovely update
Thankz for PMs
Update soon
Eagerly waiting to read more:-):-)

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