a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahah! It was a funny update!!!

Thank god that this one wasn't emotional otherwise I would have killed you!!

And I love the full on shy and blushy blushy sharon!! 😳 😳

finally swayam confessed!! Aww!! The way he confessed was so cute and the concern of losing sharon is very well written from the beginning!

Super enjoyable update it was!!

and write long updates please! This one was very small!
update soon!!
Edited by Preetirox - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awhhh!!!
Finally FInally!!!
Atlast Swayu says it!!!
Diduuu!!!
Amazingaaa!!!

I loved this update sooo much!!
Awhh sooo sooo cuteee!!!
EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT!!
heheeh!!!
Now what do i say!
Ur just tooo goood!!
That proposal, godz!!
I fell in love with that scne!
Oye wait!!
Diyu what the hell!!
Whats wrong with u!!
Inhaler ka time hai! Oops mai toh bhul gai! U have one didu??
Hahaaha!!
Yeshhh itni sweetness hai ki mujhe diabetes hogai!
Plus ab asthama attack aane wala he!!!

heehss!!
Ab jaldi update karo ms amazing writer!!
Aur mai abhi bhi ziddi huu!!
U are, u weree and u always are a better writer than me!!
Samjhe??!

Chalo Good!!
Finally u agreed!!!
Yayyy!! Hip Hip Huraah!!!

Madame! mai abhi tak apne update ke baare mai nahi bhuli!
U still have to update jaldi!!
I know I know
iss baar comments bahot late mile!!
Sooo sowwie for that!!
Next time se pakka time pe aayenge!!
heeh!!

Love u soo sooo much!
Hey, wait! I loved the update mroe!!
Huh?! Yeh kya?? Mujhe toh apni di hi sabse pyaari hai!!
heehszz!!
Hasso mat!!! *pouts*

Love u soo much mroe!!

AUR UPDATE!!!
Yesh yesh, I know am restless!!
Haye, ab yeh kaise pata chala?
Chalo zyada socho mat aur UPDATE KARO!!

Ur restless is waiting...

Love,
Waiting like an idiot,
Your biggest fan!!

P.S. I WANT A BIG REPLY TOOO!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
res di..
a big sorry for late..
am crazy with work.. 3 projects along with one unit test coming up.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great great going
I am loving this
Swayams confession,his insecurities and his love
Sharon's way of tadpaing him too cute
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update yaar...šŸ‘
Swayam kitta cute h...Bechara darr gya ki Sharon usko chor k chali jaegi...
Sharon thora tadpao Swayam ko...Budhhu ko ab samjh aaya h...šŸ˜†
Update asap..
Thanx fr pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
finally the cupid struck swayam
is trying to get answer from sharon
and she's playing her part too..
loved it
sorry for the late comment
thnx for the pm
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: keechu91

heyyyšŸ˜‰


myyy sissiiišŸ˜†

annniiišŸ˜†

i love u dear for this updatešŸ˜†

it is wonderfulšŸ‘

so sweet one😳

i loved it to the core😃

swayam's fear and sharon's concern was nicely writtenšŸ‘

the confession scene was superšŸ‘

it was more than awesomešŸ‘

i loved it yaaršŸ‘

!!!!!!!!!!!!

im soo happy for one more reasonšŸ˜†
you know i become first againšŸ˜†

it is my placešŸ˜†

eheheheehhšŸ˜†

i loved swayam confession with so much fearšŸ˜†

sharon's concern was treat to read..😳

swayam was so much happy,so that šŸ˜†

he even forgot that she didnt repliedšŸ˜†

poor swayam

he has to wait for sharon's replyšŸ˜†šŸ˜†

anniii dont make swayam and me wait too much😔

i will kill u otherwisešŸ˜†

ehhehehehehhšŸ˜†

so the morning was so sweet😳

swayam finally remembered that he didn't get an answer from sharonšŸ˜†

he tried his level best ,but sharon tho sharon hešŸ˜†

the end was nice

sharon is smiling and blushing😳😳

im deadšŸ˜†šŸ˜†


soo anniii

continue sooon dear

im waiting to read

soo it was a awesome part

sooo

dont forgot update soon

love u

keechu














hey keechu di..thanks for being such a wonderful critic!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abcdghi

Awesome update ani šŸ‘
Again brilliant peace of writing :)
Update soon


thank u!!!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Nice update...

Thnx for PM n update next chp soon
😊 now waiting for sharon's confession...


thank u!!!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi98

wowšŸ‘


wat a updatešŸ‘

nthin can be better then this 1😃

it was d best chapter😃

finally he confessed😃

n it was in real😃

i tot it was a dreamšŸ˜†

bt it was nt😃

i jst loved itā¤ļø

n sharon my god she is playingšŸ˜†

hehehešŸ˜†

poor swayam pata nai kb tak he has to waitšŸ˜†

hope she confess soon😃

update d next part supersoon😊

n thanx fr d PM😊

Love

Mansi😊


awwe mansi..meri didi!!!!!šŸ˜†šŸ˜†...

thank u!!

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