Part 4-13/1/15 KRIYAMSHAREY SS:'Kuch bhi hojaye, Am always there

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

wow Diya...n ShaRey n KriYam story...wow...

I really adore both their bonds...

KriYam n ShaRey are bros n sis...wow...

Reys dad was killed due to Swayam...SHIT...

N he is killing Kriya...ohhhnooo...

Now hows dis gonna take a turn...

M late I know Diya...cant help it...

Write soon...

Love Aditi...n Love U tooo...

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

this story is wonderful...
kriyam bond is too adorable nd beautiful...
so as sharey...she loves rey a lot...
dnt know wat will be the revenge !! m excited...
update soon

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Anupriya

@anuaskif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Hey kid... Am so sorry am so late in posting this comment...

But you nailed it with this chapter dear... I mean Kriyam chemistry was so cute and your description about the distressed Sharey made my heart go out for them

Beautifully penned and yes a very promising plot... Loved it

Update soon

Luv ya

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

A SHAREY + KRIYAM SHORT STORY

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Hey guys!!So am back with the update!Beware Its Sharey first then Kriyam so dont throw stones at me.But hope both are enjoyable
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My eyes burst open by the sudden sharp rays of the scortching sun, its brightness refusing every human a good times sleep, the chirping of the morning birds ringing in my ears, its sound beating even the alarm clock in its daily jobs. A boy's head rested lovingly on my lap, his eyes strongly shut, his straight, jet black hair shining due to bright sunshine. The talks of yesterday flashed in my mind, a feeling of similarity took place, a reflection looked straight at me, a reflection related to me, the way how I was but that image, that reflection belonged to my little brother. The previous Sharon Singhania, the old, the girl who breathed day and night just for the seven letter word which potrayed only hatred,sorrow,pain, every deep negative emotion, the word was known as REVENGE. Yesterday, for the first time ever, Rey, my baccha had opened up to me, after dad's accident he had burried himself deep into the burning fire, whose flames showed everyone how strong, how joyful, how cheerful he was but from inside, the colours lightened, the real feelings of yours showing themselves off. Rey needed to forget dad's death, he needed to learn how to forgive. I promised I would erase every haunting memory of his, filling the life of Reyaansh Singhania with only joys, glee, happiness, laughter, fun forgetting those cold, dark words.
"Di, I want coffee pleash!!" asked Rey, his light brown orbs covered with drowsiness, his target for today: PAMPERING.
"Nopes! Go get it yourself. You have over hundreds of servants hired to work, you know. Just call and order for a coffee, you will definitely recieve one in seconds." I teased him, knowing how much he loved my coffees.
"Awhh didu, you know that no one makes the same amazing coffee like you do. Pretty Pleash!" pleaded Rey
I rolled my sweet hazel orbs, pushing him off my lap. "Okay, okay! But first, you're going and freshening up. There's no way I'm wasting the taste of my handmade coffee only because of your unbrushed mouth." I agreed
"Aye, Aye Captain!" answered Rey, his voice barely hearable, his legs running as fast as they could, as if being late for a date with his so-called-girlfriend- a coffee!
I rushed to our modern red and white kitchen, calling servants to get every single thing ready. Like I said, my brothers the-so-interviewed-and- punctual-servants had got every single thing I wanted, a few sheets of recipes lay on the platform, the saucepan stood on the stove, the coffee jar and sugar pot left outside, the creamy milk heated.
A diva would never cook but me, I always had this thing for making numerous delicacies and experimenting with various ingredients. I filled a mug of steaming, hot coffee for my little brother, the fresh milk poured lovingly, tiny white blocks of sugar dissolving, the foam designed in a heart topped with chocolate sauce.
"Di!!" shouted Rey, coming down the stairs, his tie unmade, his hair messily arranged, his formal black coat relaxing on his shoulder.
"This guy is in a mood for lots of pampering but if he wants some, he definitely needs to keep on dreaming." I thought, chuckles escaping my mouth.
"Didu, my coffee!" shouted Rey, throwing himself on a bright blue beanbag.
"Correction Baccha, you mean coffee plus tying your tie, buttoning your formal white shirt, styling your jet black hair and helping you put on your coat?" I asked, my voice dripping with sarcasm.
"Yesh!" agreed Rey, nodding his head like a 5 year old kid. The reason I call him my baccha, only mine!
"But no way, am I doing that!" I shouted, my hazel orbs hungry to see him pleading atleast.
Nopes, he did the exact opposite of that. His Charming face putting on a teasing smirk, his light brown orbs knowing it all.
"You mean, you're doing to do it huh!? " asked Rey, his voice daring for a no.
"God's this little idiot! " I thought, leaving a long sigh as I walked up to him and got him ready.
"Mission completed! Pampering from di : Check from the list!" I murmured
"Thanks didu! " said Rey, grabbing me into a big, tight hug.
Just then, our special moment was stopped , enveloping my baccha with love got paused, a freaking phone call interrupted it.
"Good Morning Sir! Today's the 18th October and your meeting schedule is pretty much full. A meeting with the..." Started Rey's manager, his morning job coming into play.
"Woah wait! Its 18th today? I dont want any meetings scheduled today, cancel them at once please. I have a few important chores to finish. " I heard Rey say,cutting his general manager in between. My brain doing wonders in thinking of questions but so not dreaming of even searching for their answers. My brother and cancel meetings? This was just so unusual of him. Every single meeting worth was about the cost of a 100 inch gold statue! Today's was the most important meeting for him, but he had left, cancelling the meeting due to some chores he had left unfinished. Which were those chores? What was I missing out? Why! Why! Why! Just a few words of his, erupted questions from my curiosity corner.
"Di, tomorrow is 19th october, the day u were born, born for me, for being my support, my angel. I promise I will never ever make you forget this day. Tomorrow would be the day u would always cherish." thought Rey, his heart thumping with the love for his di, his mind heartily thanking her for every support, every kind words, all the love she spent, his imagining light brown orbs visualizing how she had never let him ever feel the emptiness of a mother. She was my sister, my mother, my father, my support, the reason I lived.
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The rise of the glowing, bright sun, the temperature running high, deep slumbers left incomplete. From the ever started dawn sharing away its time with the morning sunshine, curses were known to one and all, every minute I cursed, banging my head on the wall, my memory had suffered a big loss, every important aspect of my life launching its new forgetting date. The other important stuff who would care BUT not the most important one, the one that topped in importance. How could I forget that tomorrow was the 19th october! Forget? What the hell! How could I even think of forgetting tomorrow's date?
19th October, that day, that date, that time, living those memories again had always excelled my other wishes, bagging the first position every single year. Echos screamed the impotance of the day, Swayam's birthday, the day he had befriended me, being the exact day when I was crowned the sister of Swayam Shekhawat during the coronation ceremony, his hand blessing me with love and joy. Bhai had taken only one promise from me, never ever think he did all this as a rent, soon I would have to pay the rent. No, he hated that one thing the most, he did everything for me, like he always says, "I am in such a high position because of you, Kiru, only u!" He would never guess but 19 October was my most treasured day, a day even more safeguarded than my own birthday, another name took place of just 19 October, it was named dues day. The day I would ever repay him back.
"Stop whining, you fool! You still have time till tomorrow, get to work this instant!" I mentally scolded myself.I ran to the study, barging into a vacant, deserted room, the air conditioner working it's way through, providing us cool air on this hot, summer day. My luck was in, God was on my side today, bhai wasn't home. A series of important meetings filling His schedule. I hated it when bhai would go out for a meeting but today, only for today it was God's blessing for me. I walked up to Bhai's black oak desk with it's comfortable black wheel chair. I searched and searched, finding my way through various files stacked in a neat order on the desk to find the thing I needed the most, A NOTEPAD! I quickly made a list of everything I would need, thanking my stupid brain for not helping me recollect any thing, any idea which would make Bhais birthday special.
I went through the list again, dressed in an untidy scrawl, normal things required filling the white space.
"Cake= cool! Gifts=Done! Food, Drinks, Games, Dance!= Yesss! Balloons= Umm.. Wait, what! Balloons? Bhais old enough right?" I asked myself, passing a minute or two before realising the reality.
"Hey universe Ji, balloons! Kriya Shekhawat are you by any chance planning a party for a 5 year old. What's wrong with you idiot?" I scolded myself, holding the pen tight, giving myself two-three mental slaps.
I strolled around the whole mansion, reminding myself to ask bhai about renovating it into a garden once I died, just as a memorial of me! I kept on walking, thinking of just one good idea to make Bhais birthday special but my brain would never ever even think of working whenever it was told to, would it. I kicked my leg on a nearby wall in frustration, staring at the glass of water with such a dark glare that it was on an urge to break apart.
"Ergh! I give !" I shouted, my head spinning, the entrance to my factory of idea blocked, my hands trembling with restlessness. I crashed on the sofa, snatching my laptop from the bedside table. Internet became my guide as I flipped through the sites, trying to find the best idea ever. Trust me, internet is useless, every ideas poster was A BIG TIME FLOP, what's the use of seeing the movie then...
"Universe Ji, why can't google use some professional help got creativity. Sorry, I forgot it only displays what the other people portray!" I muttered, rolling my eyes.Bang! An idea popped into my crazy head, after reading the ideas on google or even thinking! This was the best idea, I had thought of in the past 5 Hours! Like bhai always quotes,'Perfection cannot be rushed!" Yeah, yeah.. It's so not helping.
I ran to my large, blue wallpapered bedroom with each corner screaming out the 'DaNcE', climbing two steps of the spiral stairway each time instead of one. "
Phew, my morning work out was already done!" I thought, panting
I called Jacob, my favourite servant and explained him every detail of my idea, knowing that he would understand and set everything ready for the birthday.
"Urgh, where in the world did I leave my key?" I muttered, trying to hold my voice in for as long as I could.
I really needed to find that small, silver key, it was the only one who had the access to my darkest secrets. Bhai always had a grudge against it, after all it was the only thing which bhai didn't know about me. How much he longed to know about it but like a polite gentleman, he didnt interfere into my personal matters. The diary was going to be the ever first thing I was going to gift bhai, leaving no more secrets between us.
In no time my clean, sparkly white room had time wrapped into a dumpyard or as I prefer, an extra large junkyard. A few people had a problem against messy rooms but come on, it was just 'Moi'. My ironed clothes left crumpled on the ground, my soft toys literally tripping from the topmost shelf, my gleaming wooden flooring wearing earrings, necklaces and other accessories. My hands kept on excavating, my memory loaded with pressure to recall the last place I kept it, my ears becoming so deaf to not even realize somebody was entering..
"What the hell! Kriya Shekhawat, you're so asking for it young lady! What in the would are you looking for so intensely huh?" Shouted someone, his voice completed with rage and irritation.
"Oh nothing bhai. By the way, here's Universe jis prasad. U are forced to take it!" I answered, throwing a long, large pillow at him. Gods of Olympus, his reaction was too precious to let go. His mouth curved into a big 'O', his face looking as though someone slapped him, his big black orbs widening.
"Just perfect! After the perfect greeting from your room , I swear I am going to need 1000 cleaners to clean it every minute. A sock lay waiting outside your room warning me not to slip on him in an unheard voice AND now this freaking pillow. Choti, am going to kill u!" Shouted Swayam, grabbing a pillow from the ground.
"Oh, nooo bhai, Nooo!" I shouted, running to the nearest exit, beating even Usian Bolt.
"Hahahaha, wait and watch choti!" He shouted, running twice the speed faster than me.
Pillows, clothes, paper, whatever my hand felt was thrown to bhai. Feel, Pick and throw was my only slogan. Damn I really needed to clean my room. My body was resting freely on the cold wooden floor, my running going down the drain.
NOTE TO SELF:- ALWAYS KEEP AN EYE ON WHAT IS ON THE FLOOR!
Before I could stand on my feet and start running again, I was engulfed into a big, bone crushing hug by my bhai. It felt too good being in his arms, they were the most secure place in the world.
Wait! What! I HAVE TO GET THE PREPARATIONS DONE! Universe Ji!
" Aphrodite (Goddess of Love), if this is your so-renowned-help, I preferred having none. Thank you sooo soo very much!!"
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PROMO: THE MEET
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So that's a wrap,I hope I guys liked this part.I know it was tooo boring for words but soo sorry, that's how the story had to proceed.Please comment and like!Jhootas and chappals welcome!
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Edited by diyaswaronholic - 10 years ago

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alisha

@alisha_arsha

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

i just started reading this story

each update is just awesome

loved kriyam bond

awesome story

loved it

plz pm me when u update next part

update soon

Edited by alisha_arsha - 10 years ago

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Res for replies of the second chap

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Awesome update
Sweetipie
Loved it so much
Dairy and her dairy is invisible
Kaun le gaya
I loved the kriyam masti and fighting
Hahaha
Loved it
Hole update awesome

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

u know what I just loved kriyam's bond update was awesome diary??? interesting gosh litrely I was imaging my self when kriya made that room a junkyard BT still kisne liya woh diary rey ne churaya??? now update soon

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

amazingg part👏

hayeee my kriyam

their bond s soo cutee😳

continue soon😊

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

heyyy😉!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

my dear cuteyyy😉///

me here your vampss with a long and crazzzy cmt😆//

im sorry im reading it for the first time😆😆😆

so i will give you a very long cmt😆//

i am going to read all the 3 parts together😆

then you will get a long cmt for all the 3 parts😆😆😆

the title was too touchy😆😆///

i loved it😊😊😊//

this is exactly what i want to say to u😃😃//

i will always there for u😃😃

like an elder sister😃😃

im always ready to hear you😃😃😃

me getting personal na so leave it😆😆😆//

hmm i always loved kriyam😊😊😊

they share a beautiful relationship😆😆

and i always wanted to read something about kriyam😉

and you fulfilled my wish😉😉

i know you always full fill my all wishes😉😉

i will give you cmts for all three parts separately😆😆😆//

ohh i forgot to mention one thing😆😆😆

it just that i loved the kriyam and sharey banner, we usually gets

swaron and kriyaansh banner😆😆😆that too love banner!!😉😉/

here we got friendship banner😆😆😆

hmm i loved kriyam banner more than sharey😆😆😆

so part 1!!!!!!!!!!!!

the start was nice😊

i loved the name choti😆😆

hmm the story is not like the as i thought😉

i thought it may be a smooth story😆

but it is a emotional one😭😭😭//

u know how much emotional im😭😭

so i didn't liked the way kriya talked to swayam😉😉😉//

she brock swayam's heart😭😭

which i cant handle😭😭😭

what the hell !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!u separated them this soon😭//

me hell angry with u😆//

she left him😭first

and

he left her😭second

😆!!!!!!!!!

me getting crazzy😆

u know na my crazziness😆😆😆//

the pain both swayam and kriya felt after the fight😭/

you penned it amazingly👏/

hmm i loved the "WORD & SWORD " thing😆/

and you are right that words can kill a person😭!

without loosing a bit of blood😭😭😭!

every person in this world faced it, im damm sure abt it////

me is also one of them😭!!!!

wow the next part, swayam dancing,😉/

i couldn't able to take my eyes away from him😆/

his dance was splendid 👏/

he emoted his pain, hatred, feelings so nicely 👏/

and i know, u! my cutey is behind that so you done a splendid job👏👏/

hmm the kriyam talks after dance was touching😃😃

the guilty that kriya felt after shouting at swayam without

understanding him, and she asked for forgiveness !!!!

that was a nice scene and i indeed loved it👏/

my cutey you made their reunion memorable👏/

and im so happy that you reunite them😆/

at last that was a blow😆/

me literately shocked 😲😲😲/

someone wants to kill swayam?😲

who is that ?😲

im getting two person's name here😆😆😆/

hmm cutey, i loved the mystery again😆/

keep mystery in all your stories 😆😆😆/

i love mystery😆/

even i love mysterious stories😆

i didn't bore u na!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so next part 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

shekhawat mansion is beautiful😊😊

kriya's introduction was nice😃😃

it didn't only showed her introduction😉 it shown how much

importance kriya had in swayam's life😃😃😃/

i loved the whole study room scene😆😆😆/

she came for ice cream!!!!that was tooo funny😆/

loved how swayam tease her😆😆😆

nil and kriyam share a good bond that was so nice to see😆😆😆/

i liked the nil here😆😆😆 he have to face death now😉😉/

he made his own grave😆//

i loved a line too much which is😉

"THE CLASSY SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT TRANSFORMED INTO A CIRCUS CLOWN"

yesss👏/

the time came😆

the person comes out😆

its rey, reyaansh singhania😉😉

as always my guesses become correct but only 50% 😆😆😆/

i thought it may be rey or swayam's dad😉

👏!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

these claps are not for u cutey, it is for me for guessing rightly😆/

hmm rey hated swayam😡😡

u wrote rey's hatred toward swayam in a great way!!that was amazing

rey's introduction was cool😆😆😆

ohh my god rey's revenge is in its heights.

heheheheh me again become right😆/

i guessed that "di" will be sharon😆😆😆/

mystery revealed about sharon😆

you always keep mystery😆

and i love it😆😆

the entire sharey talk was so much beautiful,,and touching😭😭

rey as broken person and sharon as his "di", his support😆😆

loved the bond of sharey👏👏/

so the next part 3!!!!!!!!!!!!

start was as always superbly awesome 😉

sharon's thoughts full of pain😭😭

"his target for today:pampering" 😆

aww so cute line,i loved this one cutey😊/

"didu" its ur word only😆//

the rey's talk with sharon,reminds me of u😆😆😆

u make him like u 🤣

girlfriend:a coffee🤣

cutey u made coffee ,,,that was nice😆😆

a very tasty one //i loved it😆😆

thanku for the lovely coffee😆😆

"god's this little idiot" the exact words both suits u and rey😆😆

wow u take ur birthday as sharon's and swayam's 😆/

u made me to miss an important person in my life😃😃 by sharey's scene

kriya's thoughts about swayam's birthday was u penned nicely...👏

it was nicely written 👏

i loved the way kriya scolded her when she was trying to make

swayam's birthday special😆/

it was damm funny😆/

then again came one more thing that i loved it is😉

"perfection cannot be rushed"👏👏

i loved that pharse😆/

morning work out was funny 🤣

kriya's temper was good, it remind me of u///😆😆😆/

aww her room is so messy,,,i so hate messy room😆😆😆/

awww they both made it more messy😆/

awww my god,,,,😲😲😲!!!!!!!!!!

finally mission completed👏👏👏!!!!

me dancing!!!!!!!

it was freaking big cmt 😲!!!!!!!!!

cutey i gave u this much long cmt, u have to reply me in lots of words😆

if you didn't then forget about big cmts😆😆😆!

so im stopping here😉

do try to update soon😉

but not making ur health worst😡😡

if you do that then im not gonna read your updates😡😡

me waiting😆

so cutey you happy😆/

once again the whole 3 parts was awesome, wonderful👏!!!!!

you improved alot👏👏👏!!!!!

and you are more improving my dear cutey👏!!!!

and im sooo muchhh happpyyy for uuu👏!!!

so me ur vampss love you freaking much😃!!!

with lots of love

🤗🤗🤗

kisses

ur vampss😆😆😆!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by --Keechu-- - 10 years ago

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