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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update... the story is getting very interesting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 3: Omg,i loved khushi's spirit, she took positivity in what arnav said in previous day, and went to meet him... Loved this update alot... Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 3
awesome dear...
interesting...
hahaha the breakfast scene was so funny...
the guys are too much...
poor Anjali...
Khushi is here?
my God she has the guts...
hahaha Arnav was shocked to see her here at his home...
seriously she came here so that Arnav can train her...
waah...
bechara Arnav ...
how could she think that he will train her?
well u will make the story like that but still Khushi was too much...
the taunts and her antics were funny...
and Aakash challenged Arnav...
very good...
Khushi has made an entry in their lives...
and Arnav babu aap tho iske pyaar mein paagal hona hi hai...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
pagal to already ho gai hai khushi... normal hoti to ye offer le k arnav k pas thodi jati... lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantabulous update . Loved it. The story is getting very very interesting. One question are we going to see Payash love story along with ARHI love story?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

finally man i refreshed it way too many times


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hmmm so it starts
this is it right
if i were them i wouldnt do this
oh well it has to be done
after all he said he could do it


Only you Kittu, can talk so vaguely and yet make sense!😉

really at BF table they are discussing it all
wont they do that at office too man
no wonder anj went mad


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she is right you know
come on dudes give others a break from your office and business talks please
and instead of listening to her he is giving her attitude
this is what you get for wanting to stay with your brother and take care of them


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no i think am with anj on this one
nani left cause well there is only so much she can talk of this in her age
though nothing wrong in her age but must be a headache naa


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patni toh aayegi hi sahi dudes so dont think that wont happen
wow anj that was going bit over board arent you
she is funny for sure and that helps


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khushi will need her too not now but maybe later
she is here peeps
arnav get ready to well meet your match


Exactly!

okay i exaggerate but its true to some extent
time for some grooming of khushi yipeee
khushi hai hi aisi ki har koi muskura utthe minus a certain someone or two maybe


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lets see shall we
oh anj not the kind of work he usually does
how will anj react to that i wonder


Anjali's reaction was nothing but shock.

ahhh if only she came here for that aru babu
nope this girl is here for something else
wow did aki ears stand up when he heard his bhai was getting a PA
waise why female PA only dudes
yeh discrimination naa hua ladke log ke liye


Arre yaar! Girls are soft spoken than men you see!😉

awww poor thing has to go through so much not serves him right for being such LG i tell ya
aa gayi humari khushi
wow thats a way to behave with girls
yeh inhe kya sikhayenge agar khud ke manner aise ho bhai


🤣 Funny! Very funny!😆

so they are all gonna hear why she is here
this should be fun
khushi spit it out dear
and you can fight with him again later like aki suggested which they will for sure
can i just say she made me so happy there the way she asked him to teach her
she is feisty yipeee go khushi


I am glad you liked the girls here! I wanted you to be happy with them! Because the characters of the female lead in the story is at disadvantage due to her lack of skills so I had to show that too and yet their fiery nature should shine too! So it was delicate balance and i was not sure whether you would like my leading lady. Glad you liked them!

ek taraf aru hai jo gussa karte hain aur doosri anj aur aki
kitna difference hai inmein


I know! I deliberately wrote this chapter in such a manner! I wanted their difference highlighted!

excuse me this is his behaviour lord he needs taming down for sure


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dude so much anger aint good for you
oyye hoga tu ASR parr itni dikken kyun haanki thi party mein
ab karr ke dikhayi toh maanege bhai ki aap khushi ko ek diva bana sakte hain
go on aki help her out
and well if you hit his ego and pride well he will do it
he fell for it thank god he has huge ego
thanx aki dude you helped her out
and aru will also learn something in this process too
anj aint happy though i can understand where she is coming from
bechare you say huh aru well its you who will marry her


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so dont bother feeling sorry for yourself
waise anj is right naa her parents might not like it wait does she have family or not
excuse me again he aint a human being
but a rakshas LG get that in your head khushi dear
she is right he is rude way too rude
he needs some lessons too
can you help him out please sweetie
mera bada mann kare hai isse gaali doon


Toh do na! Roka kisne hain! I was so eagerly waiting for your gaalis! MIssed it so much in this review!😭😉

but am refraining from doing so with difficulty
this is very risky for khushi
inn bhaiyyon ka kya jaata hai right hope she is ready for this
you are saying it wrong anj
may DM save aru khushi wont be easy for him


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aap ko bilkul bhi pagal naa hona hai khushi
you have to drive him mad though
and give him few lessons as to how to behave properly with girls
he needs it dont he


Of course he does!😆

hope he knows what he has gotten himself into
i dont think he realises it yet


Nope! He does not!😆

hope he does do what he says he will do
khushi time for you to change and shake him with your change too
on second thoughts i will give a few gaalis
teri toh khotte


Waah waah! Kya gaali diya! Mazaa aagaya! Dil khush hogaya!😃

hoga tu ASR parr zyada mat kariyo warna kappa ko keh ke teri life mein watt lagwa doongi


🤣 Exactly!

kameeney mein ratti bhar dhang naa hai ladkiyon se baat karne ki aur chale hain inhe change karne
ab toh kappa he gotta pay for insulting khushi so much please dear

Of course he will pay! Hum chodenge thodi na!😉
Thanks for commenting dear!
Love you bestie!
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I really like this concept
but could we please get english translations of the dialogues?

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: barunaya

great story and good update...but a small request, can you keep the dialogues in English with little Hindi? Its difficult for a lot of us from out of India to properly read hindi...so would appreciate if you could keep it in english 😳 but only if u can!

Thanks😊

I cannot write in English dear! May be for Arnav but not for Khushi as she does not know how to speak english! So her speaking english will destroy the whole plot of the story as she is supposed to learn English from Arnav! But there is one thing I can do for you! I can write as much dialogues in English as possible and where I can't, I will post translations! Is that ok?
And thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndeternity

Hahahhahahahhaha

Dis was hilarious
I loved it
Ur awesome dear
Arnav and his dialogues mind-blowing
But anjali is right wat after de party
Whr will khushi go than
Thx for de pm plsss continue soon

Thank you!
Glad you liked it so much!😳😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: honey-sweety

That was wonderful update...

I only read English part and some Hindi content which i can understand and then concluded with what is there in the chapter...

Looks like i only have a problem with Hindi here... any way thanks for the PM.

Thanks for review!
And for next update, I will put english translations along with the dialogues! Read the update and tell me if you are ok with it! If yes, then I will put english translations for other updates too!

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