ARSHI FF : FORGET ME NOT thread 2 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Just write as u planned it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Either way is fine but would like to read a story where ASR is not bent on getting revenge. But write whatever you think will justify the story you had in mind.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
go with ur plan 👍🏼
i luv the story the way it is and i like the revenge idea
(but i think she is innocent,she didn't mean to come close and then left)
thx 😊
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
I wish you to continue as you thought from the beginning
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
whatever way you write please make sure you do end up the story with ARHI together because I just love them both!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
I also love dark one...
but as it's suitable to you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
dark would suit this track.. go ahead thumbs up 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's so great ur asking us before writing the story, so sweet of u. But I wud say go with ur instinct and give us a great story, loved Arnav too but after all I'm a girl and I know how khushi is feeling. And even tho she slap Arnav, which she shud. But at tht point she and from the past couple mth she was under so much stress and she is a daughter whose loyal to her parent. Arnav hve feelings for khushi and khushi also but the fault is neither confess.
Arnav is on his path to take revenge on khushi but hve he thought why she behave how she did??? They both r attract to each other and it was khushi fault who lead him on but he also in it together. Maybe if he wasn't so egoistic n talk abt his feeling khushi wud never accept the marriage proposal. Even she also not sure abt her feelings and what Arnav feel for her, she thought it's infatuation. And she agreed with her parent.

I know Arnav is hurt and he has all right to b but what I never like abt him is he never clarify the matter and does what he thinks n feel right without thinking abt the others feeling.


But again I will loved if u write the story how u plan to write it. It will b like a story with suspense, surprise and thrilling :) and it will b more worthy to read. So go with ur flow :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
do as u plan
n i think it will be dark i love dark ASR
people tend to react to hurt pain n grief differently
some try to get hold of themselves n try to forget
but some want to hurt back as badly as they have been hurt

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi dear, ur query is valid... U can continue in a dark way But please give stronger reasons for arnav's revenge... Because u see, khushi and arnav never expressed their feelings and khushi is from middle class. Her mentality is like she unknowingly attracted towards him, when she realised that she cannot aim for him as her [she can think he consider her as a gold digger]. May be arnav trusted her but she dont want to lose this trust... And also, as almost like other middle class girls, for her parents happiness is more important than arnav and his unknown feelings towards her... She is not aware... She might even think that he is a rich guy and can use her... It may not br the case now, i am just giving another reason.. When she realised, she has given her consent to her father on her marriage, she wanted to step out of this increasing closeness between them... So , she slapped him... She thought its the only way to stop him at that moment... She can regret slapping him... Agree, arnav never received a slap from anyone... But how can be so dark to revenge on his love just becausr of a slap... If he is so rude and arrogant, hd wouldn't have the softer side we saw before during rohith's episodes... So, i feel the revenge is invalid... If ur going for dark revenge, then, make some reasons why he does what he does... P.s. It is just my pov... I may be right or wrong, so, the decision is urs... And if u reply to this post, please send me this link in pm, as i wouldnt find and read ur reply... Thanks

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