SUTHANU AND USKE COSINS - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanku everyone ...krishu di r u still busy????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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All thanx to krishu n yagyaseni...their writings made the characterisation in my FF to be elaborated!!
PART 4
"is everything alr8 bade bhai?hmmm???"parth entered yudi's cabin
"Hmm ...parth all expenses have been sorted out ...are we missing out something ..do u think???"said yudi going through a file.
"Nooo...really..what shall we??I mean it is all fine at both d places!!!"
"It must be chhote!!"
"U r haapy na bhai...is the kaushambh family all set at d guest house or is smthng still pending that worries u??"parth asked with a doubt
"No parth its all about arrangements u knw na everyone should be satisfied ..its our duty to take care of guests!!that is what annoying dad!"
"And that is what we r doing ..d whole family is there don't worry.after all bheem bhai is in charge of catering and nakul is there for decor ...there are our children ..we trust each other right!!"
"Yes parth I trust u all completely"yudi smiled
"By the way when are your in-laws arriving ,the panchals are already here???"
"Ya by noon I told abhi and pravin to recieve them...aa...only krish and bhavin are coming there r prblms in their business this time"
"OK"
"Bhaiya the panchals,varnavs yadavas will be staying at home only andmadrasis too!"
"Oh my god that's the problem"
"What??"
"Can't u see my in laws parth ,Mr.panchal ,dhruv n his wife r coming!!n as soon as he vll find an opportunity he vll again say
If my daughter would hv bn married here there then she wld hv bn more happy and all dat ...I m fed up with all his critics"
"Ya ya bhaiya all in laws r lyk that only...!!!"
"Parth ..nice joke...every1 knows dat u n krish are best friends.."
"Still yudi bhaiya don't u see ram bhaiya ...he had never...never appreciated me he still feels dury better than me"
"Parth dury is ur cousin ,yet an evil person"
"In a far relation and in a far contact...remmbr let him be far away n u better not invite him for d engagement ceremony..!"
"Let it be so"
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Yes I realy love Abhimanyu..if you can write your story in full English ..It will be more helpful for me to understand your story 😉
Edited by Ryuki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ryuki

Yes I realy love Abhimanyu..if you can write your story in full English ..It will be more helpful for me to understand your story 😉

yes dear I well try my best ...well,don't worry the main love stories are yet to start.
Tell me r u able to understand the above part???this will give me some idea
I think u know about all the characters
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww...Thanks a lot, dear!!! I am obliged!!! Lovely Part!!! Awesome!!! You need to send PMs?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Aww...Thanks a lot, dear!!! I am obliged!!! Lovely Part!!! Awesome!!! You need to send PMs?

ya PMs r needed to be sent but after completing one more part ...jiji we shld provide direct links!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful part dear! Continue soon... Still it feels awkward that Paarth has to address Panchali as his 'Bhabhi'...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic

Beautiful part dear! Continue soon... Still it feels awkward that Paarth has to address Panchali as his 'Bhabhi'...

Aah!!! Please no!!! Bhabhi * faints*
@ Asu129...Please make Paarth call her by Name only!!! So many Dewar and Bhabhi's friends let it be in this case!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni


Aah!!! Please no!!! Bhabhi * faints*
@ Asu129...Please make Paarth call her by Name only!!! So many Dewar and Bhabhi's friends let it be in this case!!!

don't worry guys ...I too m an ArDian I m just focusing on the children
Even u understand it is necessary to show relations lyk this I wanted all the children to be i.e. suthanu pragiti prativindhya abhimanyu etc. In present era there was no better setting
Let's just focus on pravin's marriage now!!!! OK??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Abhimanyu!an ovrwhlmd krish cried out.
A surprised abhi looked at d main gate of his bunglow"Mamu you...wow have you really arrived...i mean straight away at house ..by urself???"
"Why dear...cant i???"
"No ..i didn't mean dat ..actually i was to be there at d airport to recieve you...anyways come everyone is eagerly waiting for you as though u r going to brng the baarat with you!!"
"Really ???bete this time i m here just with my son and my little luggage...c'mon where are all ur cousins and of course our groom pravin???"
"First of all tell me where is bhavin..its a long time since i met him in ahemdabad"
"My son,i dont know where had he dissappeared as soon as he reached the crossway...well he told me he will be with us in time"
"Oh ...still ...i think ur bodybuilder son must have seen some nice workshop n he must hv went there"
"Possible son!!!"
They entered the main corridor of the house
"Bhaiya !!!!"surbhi hugged her brother.
"How are u subhuuu???and dont u dare to scare my nephew!!"
Abhi in fright-"no mom seriously i didn't complain at all!!"
Surbhi-"had i spoke something ...go and see pravin n tell him to select his etire quickly"
"C'mon subhu ..where is pritha aunt n where is my frnd panchali(here panchali is rukmini's college frnd ..so govind knows her very well)??"
"All here Krish...or may I call jiju???haan ...hello"panchali cheered
"Don't be so formal sakhi..haye!!"
"Why did u leave my sis alone...she must be here!!"
"Now what to do but don't worry dear ..she will be with u by the wedding"
"Where is aunt ...I m going to meet everyone in this house"
After this krish was busy in his meeting.




"Pravin bhai"sumedh repeated yet no response someone was really busy.All cousins were together in pravin's room.suthanu and pragiti were not able to control their laughter
"He is not gonna pay attention to us anymore"said tanmay as he ,kartik,sumit,sumedh n abhi were looking at each other n then to the groom to be who was busy with his to be wife's chat near the window
"Can't u all wait ??I hv some urgent work "replied pravin
"This urgency has not slowed down since few days"teased suthanu"we don't have secrets with our cousins ,r8 bhai"

"C'mon guys ur bhabhi is asking me what to wear??"
"Can't she decide ...I mean she knows her likings"told pragiti
"Of course ,then why should have she married our bhaiya??"sumit created a lot of humour
"What ??its our first time"pravin defended his girl
"Bhai u mean what ????u both will have 2nd marriages or what haan..?"
TBC...
Edited by asu129 - 11 years ago

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